April 3, 2026
vege soup
I have schizophrenia and I am a person with a disability. Even pharmacists and people working in welfare sometimes treat me in a discriminatory way. Perhaps they see people with schizophrenia as a burden on society.
Recently, I have been making vegetable soup to support the healthy longevity of my elderly parents. I simmer a variety of seasonal and affordable vegetables and simply blend them. Making a large batch and freezing it is convenient, healthy, and economical. It tastes better than I expected, and my parents are happy with it.
Because of my illness, I have been taking medication for many years. Sometimes, I find myself wishing that I might die early from the side effects. If I were to live longer because of the soup, it would be difficult for me, and I might continue to be treated as a burden by society. Even so, I want my parents to stay healthy, and that is why I keep making vegetable soup for them.
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Veggie soup
I have schizophrenia and I am a person with a disability. I have schizophrenia and I am a person with a disability.
If schizophrenia is the disability here, I would say "I have schizophrenia, so I am a person with a disability." Otherwise, it's implied that there is another disability besides schizophrenia.
Even pharmacists and people working in welfare sometimes treat me in a discriminatory way.
Perhaps they see people with schizophrenia as a burden on society.
Recently, I have been making vegetable soup to support the healthy longevity of my elderly parents.
I simmer a variety of seasonal and affordable vegetables and simply blend them.
Making a large batch and freezing it is convenient, healthy, and economical.
It tastes better than I would've expected, and my parents are happy with it. It tastes better than I would've expected, and my parents are happy with it.
Because of my illness, I have been taking medication for many years.
Sometimes, I find myself wishing that I mightI could die early from the side effects.
Sometimes, I find myself wishing I could die early from the side effects.
Original is fine, this feels a little more natural though. "That I might" feels slightly more poetic.
If I were to live longer because of the soup, it would be difficult for me, and I might continue to be treated as a burden by society.
Even so, I want my parents to stay healthy, and that is whyso I keep making vegetable soup for them.
Even so, I want my parents to stay healthy, so I keep making vegetable soup for them.
"and that is why" can be replaced with just "so", which I think sounds more natural.
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Very well written! Sometimes I've heard the term "neuro-divergent" instead of "disabled". This has a more positive or neutral connotation, whereas "disabled" implies a condition which is mostly negative. My knowledge of schizophrenia is very limited, though, so I don't know whether you would prefer to see it as a "neuro-divergence" or a "disability". Really, it's up to you what to think of it, not me.
April 3, 2026
Thank you very much for your message and for correcting my English expressions. Schizophrenia is considered a mental disorder by some people and not by others, and I live as someone who is regarded as having a mental disability. Before going to bed, I come to this site and really enjoy reading everyone’s journal posts and messages. I’m grateful that we can learn other languages together through the internet. Thank you very much.
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Your post made me think of this one: https://langcorrect.com/journals/ey1iak3w/from-physics-through-psychosis-to-psychology/
April 3, 2026
Thank you for sharing the link. His English is very good and easy to understand. It’s great that someone who works with schizophrenia is writing a journal on this site. Thank you.
vVeggie soup
Veggie soup
"Veggie" is a casual abbreviation of "vegetable(s)"
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Apart from the title, all the rest of the English is good here.
April 3, 2026
Thank you for your help!
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vege soup
"Veggie" is a casual abbreviation of "vegetable(s)"
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I have schizophrenia and I am a person with a disability. I have schizophrenia and I am a person with a disability. I have schizophrenia and I am a person with a disability. If schizophrenia is the disability here, I would say "I have schizophrenia, so I am a person with a disability." Otherwise, it's implied that there is another disability besides schizophrenia. |
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Even pharmacists and people working in welfare sometimes treat me in a discriminatory way. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Perhaps they see people with schizophrenia as a burden on society. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Recently, I have been making vegetable soup to support the healthy longevity of my elderly parents. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I simmer a variety of seasonal and affordable vegetables and simply blend them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Making a large batch and freezing it is convenient, healthy, and economical. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It tastes better than I expected, and my parents are happy with it. It tastes better than I would've expected, and my parents are happy with it. It tastes better than I would've expected, and my parents are happy with it. |
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Because of my illness, I have been taking medication for many years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sometimes, I find myself wishing that I might die early from the side effects.
Sometimes, I find myself wishing Original is fine, this feels a little more natural though. "That I might" feels slightly more poetic. |
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If I were to live longer because of the soup, it would be difficult for me, and I might continue to be treated as a burden by society. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even so, I want my parents to stay healthy, and that is why I keep making vegetable soup for them.
Even so, I want my parents to stay healthy, "and that is why" can be replaced with just "so", which I think sounds more natural. |
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