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Jack

Dec. 22, 2021

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Afternoon Nap

I remember a few days ago, I shared with you guys how to take an afternoon nap in a car. Recently, I have found another way to take an afternoon nap. Days ago, I said if only I could sleep on the balcony and bask in the sun, but we don't have a bed on our balcony. After hearing that, my wife insisted that I could sleep in the bay window. At first, I didn't think it would work, but she started to make simple preparations. She cleaned the bay window first, and then put a pillow and a quilt on it. I couldn't stand her advice, and eventually slept in. Wow, it was really warm, like you were sleeping in a green house and that kind of feeling made you sleepy and you fell asleep very fast. From my experience of sleeping there, the only shortage is that the width of the bay window is not enough for a person's height. If I were an architect, I would design the bay window the size of a single bed, and I think that would be amazing! Now, follow me to do it, clean your bay window first, then find a pillow and a quilt. Just a quilt is enough: use half of it as a mat quilt, and another half as a cover quilt, and now, you can enjoy your warm afternoon nap. I am such a simple person and every small nice thing can make me very happy and satisfied.

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Afternoon Nap

I remember a few days ago, I shared with you guys how to take an afternoon nap in a car.

Recently, I have found another way to take an afternoon nap.

Days ago, I said if only I could sleep on the balcony and bask in the sun, but we don't have a bed on our balcony.

After hearing that, my wife insisted that I cshould sleep in the bay window.

At first, I didn't think it would work, but she started to make simple preparations.

She cleaned the bay window first, and then put a pillow and a quilt on it.

I couldn't stand her advice, and eventually slept in.

saying that you couldn't stand her advice sounds like you're angry at her advice. maybe try saying, "I gave in to her advice and eventually slept on the balcony."

Wow, it was really warm, like you were sleeping in a green house and that kind of feeling made you sleepy and you fell asleep very fast.

From my experience of sleeping there, the only shortage is that the width of the bay window is not enough for a person's height.

If I were an architect, I would design the bay window the size of a single bed, and I think that would be amazing!

Now, follow me to do it, c. Clean your bay window first, then find a pillow and a quilt.

Just a quilt is enough:; use half of it as a mat quilt, and another half as a cover quilt, and now, you can enjoy your warm afternoon nap.

the ; acts as a period, but usually used when sentence that follows is related to the last.

I am such a simple person and every small nice thing can make me very happy and satisfied.

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That sounds awesome! sleeping on a balcony. Good journal. keep it up!

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Jack

Dec. 23, 2021

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Thank you very much for correcting my journals. Thank you very much.

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nique

Dec. 24, 2021

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no problem (:

Afternoon Nap


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I remember a few days ago, I shared with you guys how to take an afternoon nap in a car.


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Recently, I have found another way to take an afternoon nap.


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Days ago, I said if only I could sleep on the balcony and bask in the sun, but we don't have a bed on our balcony.


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After hearing that, my wife insisted that I could sleep in the bay window.


After hearing that, my wife insisted that I cshould sleep in the bay window.

At first, I didn't think it would work, but she started to make simple preparations.


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She cleaned the bay window first, and then put a pillow and a quilt on it.


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I couldn't stand her advice, and eventually slept in.


I couldn't stand her advice, and eventually slept in.

saying that you couldn't stand her advice sounds like you're angry at her advice. maybe try saying, "I gave in to her advice and eventually slept on the balcony."

Wow, it was really warm, like you were sleeping in a green house and that kind of feeling made you sleepy and you fell asleep very fast.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

From my experience of sleeping there, the only shortage is that the width of the bay window is not enough for a person's height.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I were an architect, I would design the bay window the size of a single bed, and I think that would be amazing!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now, follow me to do it, clean your bay window first, then find a pillow and a quilt.


Now, follow me to do it, c. Clean your bay window first, then find a pillow and a quilt.

Just a quilt is enough: use half of it as a mat quilt, and another half as a cover quilt, and now, you can enjoy your warm afternoon nap.


Just a quilt is enough:; use half of it as a mat quilt, and another half as a cover quilt, and now, you can enjoy your warm afternoon nap.

the ; acts as a period, but usually used when sentence that follows is related to the last.

I am such a simple person and every small nice thing can make me very happy and satisfied.


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