Aug. 25, 2021
After Watching Before Trilogy
The well-known indie classic, the Before Trilogy, consists of Before Sunrise, Before Sunset, and Before Midnight. Each sequel is released 9 years after the previous one, and aging of the actors adds to the reality of the film.
1. Jesse and Celine first meet in a train that connects European cities. Jesse is an American guy, in his mid 20s, traveling European cities, and Celine is a French girl, attending college and just going back home after visiting her grandmother in Budapest.
The two are just strangers initially, but after they chat for a bit, the two soon feel intrigued with each other and develop a connection. When the train stops in Vienna, Jesse asks Celine if she would like to spend a day with him in the city. Celine agrees.
They roam around the beautiful city, chatting about their candid thoughts on broad range of topics, from life, love, sex, and politics, etc. Jesse confesses that he has come to Europe to meet his girlfriend, but she has broken up with him.
They feel drawn to each other and end up spending a night together. With Jesse having to leave to the US for a flight, they promise to meet in the same spot, 6 months after.
2. (9 years later)
Jesse has written a book about his experience with Celine and it becomes an international best seller. He does a reading in a bookstore in Paris and meets interviewers from the press. While he is being interviewed, his eyes catch Celine, who has read his book and came to see him.
Although Jesse has to leave to the US soon (again), the two starts to chat and catch up about their life.
Jesse had gone to Vienna 6 months after the date they met, but Celine couldn't be their because her grandmother's funeral was on the same day that they were supposed to meet. Jesse laments that their lives would have been so much different if she had been there.
Meanwhile, Jesse has married his college girlfriend and has a son. Celine has become an environmental activist. While they seemingly live a satisfactory life, they confess to each other that they haven't forgotten about their day spent together in Vienna. In fact, Jesse wrote his book in the hope that he might be able to see Celine again. He confesses that his married life isn't happy at all, and loveless.
Jesse takes her home and ends up being at her apartment. Celine, who also composes songs, sings one of her songs, which is about their unforgettable day in Vienna. She says Jess is going to miss his flight, and he says "I know."
After Watching The Before Trilogy
The well-known indie classic, the Before Trilogy, consists of Before Sunrise, Before Sunset, and Before Midnight.
Each sequel iwas released 9 years after the previous one, and aging of the actors adds to the realitysm of the film.
was - grammar -> movies released in the past
realism - stylistic
1. Jesse and Celine first meet in a train that connects European cities.
Jesse is an American guy, in his mid 20s, traveling European cities, and Celine is a French girl, attending college and justcollege girl going back home after visiting her grandmother in Budapest.
The two are just strangers initially, but after they chat for a bit, the twoy soon feel intrigued with each other and develop a connection.
When the train stops in Vienna, Jesse asks Celine if she would like to spend a day with him in the city.
Celine agrees.
They roam around the beautiful city, chatting about their candid thoughts on broad range of topics, from such as life, love, sex, and politics, etc.
"about their candid thoughts" sounds strange to me, but it may be correct. I will leave it for someone else to correct.
To me, "chatting candidly about a broad range of topics" would sound better or "sharing their candid thoughts on..."
Jesse confesses that he has come to Europe to meet his girlfriend, but she has broken up with him.
They feel drawn to each other and end up spending a night together.
With Jesse having to leave to the US for a flight back to the US, they promise to meet in the same spot, 6 months lafter.
2. (9 years later)
Jesse has written a book about his experience with Celine, and it becomes an international best seller.
He does a reading in a bookstore in Paris and meets interviewers from the press.
While he is being interviewed, his eyes catch Celine, who has read his book and came to see him.
Although Jesse has to leave to the US soon (again), the two starts to chat and catch up about their life.
Jesse had gone to Vienna 6 months after the date they met, but Celine couldn't be theire because her grandmother's funeral was on the same day that they were supposed to meet.
Jesse laments that their lives would have been so much different if she had been there.
Meanwhile, Jesse has married his college girlfriend and has a son.
Celine has become an environmental activist.
While they seemingly live a satisfactory life, they confess to each other that they haven't forgotten about their day spent together in Vienna.
In fact, Jesse wrote his book in the hope that he might be able to see Celine again.
He confesses that his married life isn't happy at all, and is loveless.
Jesse takes her home and ends up being at her apartment.
Celine, who also composes songs, sings one of her songs, which is about their unforgettable day in Vienna.
She says Jesse is going to miss his flight, and he says "I know."
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Great writing. Only a few mistakes that would detract when speaking. Most other corrections are things I'd get in English class when writing an essay.
Aug. 26, 2021
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After Watching Before Trilogy After Watching The Before Trilogy |
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The well-known indie classic, Before Trilogy consists of Before Sunrise, Before Sunset, and Before Midnight. |
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Each sequel is released 9 years after the previous one, and aging actors adds to the reality of the film. |
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1. Jesse and Celine first meet in a train that connects European cities. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Jesse is an American guy, in his mid 20s, traveling European cities, and Celine is a French girl, attending college and just going back home after visiting her grandmother in Budapest. Jesse is an American guy |
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The two are just strangers initially, but after they chat for a bit, the two soon feel intrigued with each other and develop0 a connection. |
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When the train stops in Vienna, Jesse asks Celine if she would like to spend a day with him in the city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They roam around the beautiful city, chatting about their thoughts on broad range of topics, from life, love, sex, and politics, etc. |
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Jesse confesses that he has come to Europe to meet his girlfriend, but she has broken up with him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They feel drawn to each other and end up spending a night together. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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With Jesse having to leave to the US for a flight, they promise to meet in the same spot, 6 months after. With Jesse having to leave |
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2. (9 years later) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Jesse has written a book about his experience with Celine and it becomes an international best seller. Jesse has written a book about his experience with Celine, and it becomes an international best seller. |
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He does a reading in a bookstore in Paris and meets interviewers from the press. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While he is being interviewed, his eyes catch Celine, who has read his book and came to see him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although Jesse has to leave to the US soon (again), the two starts to chat and catch up about their life. Although Jesse has to leave to the US soon (again), the two start |
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Jesse had gone to Vienna 6 months after the date they met, but Celine couldn't be their because her grandmother's funeral was on the same day that they were supposed to meet. Jesse had gone to Vienna 6 months after |
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Jesse laments that their lives would have been so much different if she had been there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Meanwhile, Jesse has married his college girlfriend and has a son. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Celine has become an environmental activist. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While they seemingly live a satisfactory life, they confess to each other that they haven't forgotten about their day spent together in Vienna. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In fact, Jesse wrote his book in the hope that he might be able to see Celine again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He confesses that his married life isn't happy at all, and loveless. He confesses that his married life isn't happy at all |
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Jesse takes her home and ends up being at her apartment. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Celine, who also composes songs, sings one of her songs, which is about their unforgettable day in Vienna. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She says Jess is going to miss his flight, and he says "I know." She says Jesse is going to miss his flight, and he says "I know." :) |
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The two are just strangers initially, but after they chat for a bit, the two soon feel intrigued with each other and develop a connection. The two are just strangers initially, but after they chat for a bit, the |
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Celine agrees. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They roam around the beautiful city, chatting about their candid thoughts on broad range of topics, from life, love, sex, and politics, etc. They roam around the beautiful city "about their candid thoughts" sounds strange to me, but it may be correct. I will leave it for someone else to correct. To me, "chatting candidly about a broad range of topics" would sound better or "sharing their candid thoughts on..." |
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The well-known indie classic, the Before Trilogy, consists of Before Sunrise, Before Sunset, and Before Midnight. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Each sequel is released 9 years after the previous one, and aging of the actors adds to the reality of the film. Each sequel was - grammar -> movies released in the past realism - stylistic |
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