July 21, 2021
After the Typhoon
The typhoon passed by my town during the night. When I woke up, the wind has gone. It was sprinklinh. I went to the top floor at noon and found a few leaves on the floor which were green. Some of them were bougainvillea leaf, the others were grape leaf. I looked at the vine, it was injured. Its several shoot has gone, what the worst was that there were only a few shoots on it essentially. My heart felt pain. But luckily, the shoot of the trunk was still there with a small injury.
The bougainvillea was fine. It had about ten branches, so I didn't worried about it. There were several red rose petals on the surface of the flowerpot. The two roses had bloomed for a few days, it was time to say goodbye. The passion fruits (I am not sure what it is called in English. It isa kind of passiflora.) were also fine. There were so many drops under the vines which seemed like many diomands.
Then I went to the first floor and opened the door. There were many green leaves and small branches on the floor as well. They were from Magnolia denudata Desr. (I googled the name.)
I remember that when I came home after I put the rabbish out, I saw a jackfruit (Artocarpus heterophyllus Lam) on the ground. It was raining a little heavily. I thought that it must be so ripen that it fell apart on the ground. Then I checked the others that were still on the tree, I found one was mature which maybe would fall apart soon. I picked it up, and then put the one which on the ground out.
It extreme weather is the killer of plants.
After the Typhoon
The typhoon passed by my town during the night.
When I woke up, the wind hwas gone.
It was sprinkdrizzlinhg.
I believe thats what you mean
I went to the top floor at noon and found a few leaves on the floor which were green.
Some of them were bougainvillea leafves, the others were grape leafves.
Its sSeveral shoot hass on the plant are gone, and what the's worst wae is that there were only a few shoots on it essentiallyto start with.
My heart felt pain.
This is grammatically correct but not natural sounding. You could say I felt hurt/sad/heartbroken/disappointed.
But luckily, the shoot of the trunk was still there with only a small injury.
The bougainvillea was fine.
It had about ten branches left, so I didn't worriedy about it.
There were several red rose petals on the surface of the flowerpot.
The two roses had bloomed for a few days, but it was time to say goodbye.
The passion fruits (I am not sure what it is called in English. It isa kind of passiflora.) were also fine.
There were so many drops (do you mean water drops?) under the vines which seemlooked like many diomaamonds.
Then I went to the first floor and opened the door.
There were many green leaves and small branches on the floor as well.
They were from the Magnolia denudata Desr plant.
(I googled the name.)
I remember that when I came home after I putthrowing the raubbish out, I saw a jackfruit (Artocarpus heterophyllus Lam) on the ground.
At that time, It was raining a little heavily.
I thoughtremember thinking that it must behave been so ripen that it fell apart onperhaps fell onto the ground.
Then I checked the others that were still on the tree, and I found one was mature which maybe would fall apartanother one that was ripe which could also fall off soon.
I picked it up, and then put the one which on the ground out.
not sure what you mean by "out" here, do you mean you also picked up the one on the ground or you threw it out?
It eExtreme weather is the killer of plants.
July 22, 2021
When I woke up, the wind hwas gone.
yes.
July 22, 2021
There were so many drops (do you mean water drops?) under the vines which seemlooked like many diomaamonds.
"look like" is you really use your eyes to look, while "seems like" is you "think" with some clues, right?
July 22, 2021
I thoughtremember thinking that it must behave been so ripen that it fell apart onperhaps fell onto the ground.
Should "remember" be "remembered"? Just the past tense.
July 22, 2021
I picked it up, and then put the one which on the ground out.
threw it out
July 23, 2021
"look like" is you really use your eyes to look, while "seems like" is you "think" with some clues, right?
Yes correct, "look like" is usually visual and "seems like" is usually a feeling. For example: "this seems odd" or "It seems like you don't want to go today".
July 23, 2021
Should "remember" be "remembered"? Just the past tense.
Remember here should stay present because it is referring to you remembering now what you were thinking before.
Alternatively you could keep "I thought", which is not wrong and maintains the past tense, however, I just thought "I remember thinking" sounded more natural.
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After the Typhoon This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The typhoon passed by my town during the night. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I woke up, the wind has gone. When I woke up, the wind |
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It was sprinklinh. It was I believe thats what you mean |
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I went to the top floor at noon and found a few leaves on the floor which were green. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some of them were bougainvillea leaf, the others were grape leaf. Some of them were bougainvillea lea |
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I looked at the vine, it was injured. |
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Its several shoot has gone, what the worst was that there were only a few shoots on it essentially.
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My heart felt pain. My heart felt pain. This is grammatically correct but not natural sounding. You could say I felt hurt/sad/heartbroken/disappointed. |
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But luckily, the shoot of the trunk was still there with a small injury. But luckily, the shoot of the trunk was still there with only a small injury. |
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The bougainvillea was fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It had about ten branches, so I didn't worried about it. It had about ten branches left, so I didn't worr |
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There were several red rose petals on the surface of the flowerpot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The two roses had bloomed for a few days, it was time to say goodbye. The two roses had bloomed for a few days, but it was time to say goodbye. |
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The passion fruits (I am not sure what it is called in English. It isa kind of passiflora.) were also fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There were so many drops under the vines which seemed like many diomands. There were so many drops (do you mean water drops?) under the vines which |
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Then I went to the first floor and opened the door. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There were many green leaves and small branches on the floor as well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They were from Magnolia denudata Desr. They were from the Magnolia denudata Desr plant. |
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(I googled the name.) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I remember that when I came home after I put the rabbish out, I saw a jackfruit (Artocarpus heterophyllus Lam) on the ground. I remember |
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It was raining a little heavily. At that time, It was raining a little heavily. |
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I thought that it must be so ripen that it fell apart on the ground. I |
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Then I checked the others that were still on the tree, I found one was mature which maybe would fall apart soon. Then I checked the others that were still on the tree |
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I picked it up, and then put the one which on the ground out. I picked it up, and then put the one which on the ground out. not sure what you mean by "out" here, do you mean you also picked up the one on the ground or you threw it out? |
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It extreme weather is the killer of plants.
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