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michiru

July 15, 2024

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After the half of the year

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this three−days weekend.

Now that my work starts soon, I regret I should've read some books or gone to a green park to touch trees and feel nature.

I'm now disappointed that I ruined the time.

In spite of that, I know I'm going to think again that I want to read that book and learn this and that next weekend while I'm working.
Next weekend, I'm chilling out again and will regret as before.

I want to escape from this bad habit.

I hate I get old every year like this.

The half of the year passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

My goals of this year;
-Make lunch box every day
-Read a book once a week
-On weekends, cook a dish from other countries I pushed "like" on Youtube
-Do three pose from Rusie Dutton(Thai yoga) every morning and night
-Do a good thing to someone every day
-Show smile the coworkers I hate at office once three days

Are you going ahead smoothly to achieve your goals?


今年前半が過ぎ去り

週末は出かけようと決めたのに、この3連休週末は一日中家にいてダラダラ過ごしてしまった。
まもなく仕事が始まる。本を読んでおけばよかった、緑の多い公園に行って木に触ったり、自然を感じておけばよかったと後悔している。

時間を無駄にしてガッカリだ。

それにもかかわらず、週末にはあの本読もうとか、あれこれ勉強しようとまた仕事中に考えるんだろうな〜。
そして、次の週末はまたダラダラして後悔するんだろうな〜。

このダメな習慣から抜け出したい。
こうやって歳をとるのは嫌だ〜。

今年前半が終わった。でも目標達成のために何もしてない。

今年の目標
-毎日お弁当を作る
-週一回、本を読む
-週末は、Youtubeで "いいね" を押した諸外国の料理を1つ作る
-毎朝毎晩、ルーシーダットン(タイ式ヨガ)から3つのポーズをやる
-一日一善
-三日に一度、会社で大嫌いな連中に笑顔を見せる


目標達成のために順調に進んでますか?

Corrections

After the half of the yearより明確にします: A Half-Year Reflection

また、次のことも可能です: A Semi-Annual Reflection

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this three−days weekend.

注:2番目の「I」は安全に削除できます。

Now that my work has startsed soon again, I regret I should'venot reading some books or gone to a green park to touch some trees and feel nature.

I'm now disappointed that I ruined theより自然な表現: I regret having wasted that time.

より簡潔に説明します: In spite of that, I know I'm going to think again that I want to read that book and learn this and that next weekend while I'm workingcontemplating how to spend my upcoming weekend.

Next weekend, I'mll chilling out again and perhaps will regret as beforeonce again.

I want to escape fromALSO POSSIBLE: I want to break this bad habit.

I hate I get old every yearより表現的には、次のとおりです: I detest becoming stodgy and set in my ways like this.

TAnother half of the year-year have passed, butand I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

My goals of this year; ¶
-M
are:¶
- To m
ake a lunch box every day ,
-
R To read aone book once a week ,
-
On weekends, cook a dish from other countries Ithat pushed "like" button on YoutTube
-Do three pose from
from some other country,¶
- To fo three "
Rusie Dutton(" Thai yoga) poses every morning and night ,
-
Do a good thing to someone every day
-Show s
, and¶
- S
mile athe coworkers I hate at office once every three days

Are you going ahead


How about you? Will you be able to progress
smoothly to achieve your goals?

Feedback

Thanks for sharing, Michiru. I hope you are able to fulfill your goals. I need to think about my goals more deeply.

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michiru

Sept. 1, 2024

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Thank you so much for the correction! I was able to achieve three goals this weekend from six goals of this year.

After the half of the year

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this three-days weekend.

Now that my work is startsing soon, I regret I should'vethat I didn't read someany books or gone to a green park to touch trees and feelbe one with nature.

I'm now disappointed that I ruined the time.

In spite of that, I know that I'm going to think again that I want to read that book andor learn this and that again next weekend while I'm working have to work, only to chill out and regret it as before.

I combined this with the sentence below.

Next weekend, I'm chilling out again and will regret as before.

I want to escapebreak out from this bad habit.

Escape is fine too, but to "break" a habit is a very common phrase and will help you sound more natural

I hate I get old every year like thishow I grow old like this every year.

The hHalf of the year has passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

My goals of this year;
-Make
boxed lunch box every day
-Read a book once a week

-On weekends, cook a dish from other countries
using tutorials that I pushed "like" on Youtube
-Do three pose
s from Rusie Dutton (Thai yoga) every morning and night
-Do a good thing to someone every day

-S
how smile at the coworkers I hate at office once every three days


Are you going ahead smoothly to achieve your goals?

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michiru

July 17, 2024

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Thank you for correcting!

After theThe first half of the year is over

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over thisthis entire three-days weekend.

Now that my work starts soon, I regret I should'vethat I didn't read some books or gone to a green park to touch trees and feel nature.

I'm now disappointed that I ruinwasted the time.

In spite of that, I know that while I'm working I'm going to think again that I want to read that book and learn this and that next weekend while I'm working.

Next weekend, I'm chilling outprobably going to laze around again and will regret it as before.

I want to escape from this bad habit.

I hate I get old every yeardon't want to age like this.

The first half of the year has passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

My goals ofor this year; :
-
Make a lunch box every day
-
Read a book once a week
-
On weekends, cook a dish from other countries I pushed "a foreign country that I gave a like" to on Youtube
-
Do three poses from Rusie Dutton (Thai yoga) every morning and night
-
Do a good thing to someone every day
-
Show smile at the coworkers I hate at my office once every three days


Are you
going ahead smoothly to achieveprogressing smoothly on your goals?

Feedback

I hope you're able to keep up with your goals!

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michiru

July 17, 2024

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Thank you for correcting!

0

After the half of the year

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this past three−days weekend.

Now that my work starts soon, I regret I should'venot reading some books or goneing to a nice, green, park to touch the trees and feel nature.

I'm now disappointed that I ruined thewasted my time.

In spite of that, I already know I'm going to think again thatbout how I want to read thatmy book and learn this and that next weekend while I'm working.

Next weekend, I'm will chilling out again and will regret it as before.

I want to escape fromget rid of this bad habit.

I hate I getting old every year like this.

Not sure what this sentence is trying to communicate.

The hHalf of the year has passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

My goals ofor this year; :
-Make lunch
box every day
-Read a book once a week

-On weekends, cook a dish from other countries I
pushedhave "liked" on Youtube
-Do three pose
s from Rusie Dutton (Thai yoga) every morning and night
-Do a good thing
tofor someone every day
-S
how smile athe coworkers I hate at the office once every three days


Are you
going ahead smoothlyconsistently working to achieve your goals?

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michiru

July 17, 2024

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Thank you for correcting!

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this three−daysall weekend.

You can remove the "out"
You should remove "day over this three−days." It is not the best grammatically and it also describes the same thing twice.

Now that my work starts soon, I regret I should've readthat I didn't some books or gone to a greennice park to touch trees and feelexperience nature.

Grammar change.
"Green" sounds very weird, in English, we tend to not describe physical attributes of common places. A park is assumed to be green.
"Feel" is a foreign way of describing this.

Great job!

I'm now disappointed that I ruinwasted the time.

Grammar change.
Better word change.

In Despite of that, I know I'm going to think again that I want to read that book andto learn this and that next weekend while I'm working.

This sentence has a lot of issues that I don't really know how to change without rewriting the entire thing.

Next weekend, I'm chilling out again and will regret as before.

This sentence can use a huge overhaul, but the current way is a poetic form of expressing the same thing.

I want to escape from this bad habit.

OR¶

I want to break this bad habit.

ME TOO!

I hate that I get older every year like this.

The hHalf of the year has passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

Almost perfect!

My goals ofor this year;
-Make
a lunch box every day .
-Read a book once a week
.
-On weekends, cook a dish from other countries
I pushthat I clicked "like" on Youtube .
-Do three pose from Rusie Dutton
(Thai yoga) every morning and night .
-Do a good thing to someone every day
.
-S
how smile at the coworkers I hate at office once three days


Are you going ahead smoothly to achieve your goals?

SOME GREAT GOALS!!!!

Feedback

Great writing! You got your point across even though it wasn't always grammatically perfect.

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michiru

July 15, 2024

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Thank you for correcting!

After the half of the year

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this three−days weekend.

Now that my work starts soon, I regret I should've read some books or gone to a green park to touch trees and feel nature.

The adjective green here is a bit weird because parks are usually green

I'm now disappointed that I ruinwasted the time.

To waste time --> the verb used in English here is "to waste"

In spite of that, I know I'm going to think again that I want to read that book andor learn this andor that next weekend while I'm working.

"In spite of that" does not really work here because of the previous sentence.

Next weekend, I'mll chilling out again and will regret it as before.

Use the future here.
regret it--because the "chilling out" is what you are regretting

I want to escape from this bad habit.

I hate how I get older every year like this.

more natural this way

The half of the year passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

My goals of this year; -Make lunch box every day -Read a book once a week -On weekends, cook a dish from other countries I pushed "like" on Youtube -Do three pose from Rusie Dutton(Thai yoga) every morning and night -Do a good thing to someone every day -Show smile the coworkers I hate at office once three days Are you going ahead smoothly to achieve your goals?

Feedback

I too spent my weekend doing nothing and wish I had studied. I like the goals you set for yourself. Good luck and keep it up!

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michiru

July 15, 2024

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Thank you very much for correcting!

After the half of the year


After the half of the year

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After theThe first half of the year is over

After the half of the year

After the half of the yearより明確にします: A Half-Year Reflection

また、次のことも可能です: A Semi-Annual Reflection

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this three−days weekend.


I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this three−days weekend.

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this three−daysall weekend.

You can remove the "out" You should remove "day over this three−days." It is not the best grammatically and it also describes the same thing twice.

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this past three−days weekend.

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over thisthis entire three-days weekend.

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this three-days weekend.

I made it a rule to go out on weekends, but I stayed at home and chilled out all day over this three−days weekend.

注:2番目の「I」は安全に削除できます。

Now that my work starts soon, I regret I should've read some books or gone to a green park to touch trees and feel nature.


Now that my work starts soon, I regret I should've read some books or gone to a green park to touch trees and feel nature.

The adjective green here is a bit weird because parks are usually green

Now that my work starts soon, I regret I should've readthat I didn't some books or gone to a greennice park to touch trees and feelexperience nature.

Grammar change. "Green" sounds very weird, in English, we tend to not describe physical attributes of common places. A park is assumed to be green. "Feel" is a foreign way of describing this. Great job!

Now that my work starts soon, I regret I should'venot reading some books or goneing to a nice, green, park to touch the trees and feel nature.

Now that my work starts soon, I regret I should'vethat I didn't read some books or gone to a green park to touch trees and feel nature.

Now that my work is startsing soon, I regret I should'vethat I didn't read someany books or gone to a green park to touch trees and feelbe one with nature.

Now that my work has startsed soon again, I regret I should'venot reading some books or gone to a green park to touch some trees and feel nature.

I'm now disappointed that I ruined the time.


I'm now disappointed that I ruinwasted the time.

To waste time --> the verb used in English here is "to waste"

I'm now disappointed that I ruinwasted the time.

Grammar change. Better word change.

I'm now disappointed that I ruined thewasted my time.

I'm now disappointed that I ruinwasted the time.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm now disappointed that I ruined theより自然な表現: I regret having wasted that time.

In spite of that, I know I'm going to think again that I want to read that book and learn this and that next weekend while I'm working.


In spite of that, I know I'm going to think again that I want to read that book andor learn this andor that next weekend while I'm working.

"In spite of that" does not really work here because of the previous sentence.

In Despite of that, I know I'm going to think again that I want to read that book andto learn this and that next weekend while I'm working.

This sentence has a lot of issues that I don't really know how to change without rewriting the entire thing.

In spite of that, I already know I'm going to think again thatbout how I want to read thatmy book and learn this and that next weekend while I'm working.

In spite of that, I know that while I'm working I'm going to think again that I want to read that book and learn this and that next weekend while I'm working.

In spite of that, I know that I'm going to think again that I want to read that book andor learn this and that again next weekend while I'm working have to work, only to chill out and regret it as before.

I combined this with the sentence below.

より簡潔に説明します: In spite of that, I know I'm going to think again that I want to read that book and learn this and that next weekend while I'm workingcontemplating how to spend my upcoming weekend.

Next weekend, I'm chilling out again and will regret as before.


Next weekend, I'mll chilling out again and will regret it as before.

Use the future here. regret it--because the "chilling out" is what you are regretting

Next weekend, I'm chilling out again and will regret as before.

This sentence can use a huge overhaul, but the current way is a poetic form of expressing the same thing.

Next weekend, I'm will chilling out again and will regret it as before.

Next weekend, I'm chilling outprobably going to laze around again and will regret it as before.

Next weekend, I'm chilling out again and will regret as before.

Next weekend, I'mll chilling out again and perhaps will regret as beforeonce again.

I want to escape from this bad habit.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to escape from this bad habit.

OR¶

I want to break this bad habit.

ME TOO!

I want to escape fromget rid of this bad habit.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to escapebreak out from this bad habit.

Escape is fine too, but to "break" a habit is a very common phrase and will help you sound more natural

I want to escape fromALSO POSSIBLE: I want to break this bad habit.

I hate I get old every year like this.


I hate how I get older every year like this.

more natural this way

I hate that I get older every year like this.

I hate I getting old every year like this.

Not sure what this sentence is trying to communicate.

I hate I get old every yeardon't want to age like this.

I hate I get old every year like thishow I grow old like this every year.

I hate I get old every yearより表現的には、次のとおりです: I detest becoming stodgy and set in my ways like this.

The half of the year passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The hHalf of the year has passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

Almost perfect!

The hHalf of the year has passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

The first half of the year has passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

The hHalf of the year has passed, but I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

TAnother half of the year-year have passed, butand I've done nothing to achieve my goals.

My goals of this year; -Make lunch box every day -Read a book once a week -On weekends, cook a dish from other countries I pushed "like" on Youtube -Do three pose from Rusie Dutton(Thai yoga) every morning and night -Do a good thing to someone every day -Show smile the coworkers I hate at office once three days Are you going ahead smoothly to achieve your goals?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My goals ofor this year;
-Make
a lunch box every day .
-Read a book once a week
.
-On weekends, cook a dish from other countries
I pushthat I clicked "like" on Youtube .
-Do three pose from Rusie Dutton
(Thai yoga) every morning and night .
-Do a good thing to someone every day
.
-S
how smile at the coworkers I hate at office once three days


Are you going ahead smoothly to achieve your goals?

SOME GREAT GOALS!!!!

My goals ofor this year; :
-Make lunch
box every day
-Read a book once a week

-On weekends, cook a dish from other countries I
pushedhave "liked" on Youtube
-Do three pose
s from Rusie Dutton (Thai yoga) every morning and night
-Do a good thing
tofor someone every day
-S
how smile athe coworkers I hate at the office once every three days


Are you
going ahead smoothlyconsistently working to achieve your goals?

My goals ofor this year; :
-
Make a lunch box every day
-
Read a book once a week
-
On weekends, cook a dish from other countries I pushed "a foreign country that I gave a like" to on Youtube
-
Do three poses from Rusie Dutton (Thai yoga) every morning and night
-
Do a good thing to someone every day
-
Show smile at the coworkers I hate at my office once every three days


Are you
going ahead smoothly to achieveprogressing smoothly on your goals?

My goals of this year;
-Make
boxed lunch box every day
-Read a book once a week

-On weekends, cook a dish from other countries
using tutorials that I pushed "like" on Youtube
-Do three pose
s from Rusie Dutton (Thai yoga) every morning and night
-Do a good thing to someone every day

-S
how smile at the coworkers I hate at office once every three days


Are you going ahead smoothly to achieve your goals?

My goals of this year; ¶
-M
are:¶
- To m
ake a lunch box every day ,
-
R To read aone book once a week ,
-
On weekends, cook a dish from other countries Ithat pushed "like" button on YoutTube
-Do three pose from
from some other country,¶
- To fo three "
Rusie Dutton(" Thai yoga) poses every morning and night ,
-
Do a good thing to someone every day
-Show s
, and¶
- S
mile athe coworkers I hate at office once every three days

Are you going ahead


How about you? Will you be able to progress
smoothly to achieve your goals?

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