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After reading an article and I wrote a summary.

At first ,some Native Americans wore tattoos.
And then, U.S.explovers came to America and they learned about tattoos.
Tattoos became more common among soldiers.
They serving in the Civil War and they got tattoos.
In 1960 to 1970, tattoos were accepted by more people.
And in 1980 ,tattoos had become a popular.
Sometimes it’s a part of a costume.
And it’s a kind of modern art.
It also be a history.


At first ,some Native Americans wore tattoos.
And then, U.S.explovers came to America and they learned about tattoos.
Tattoos became more common among soldiers.
They serving in the Civil War and they got tattoos.
In 1960 to 1970, tattoos were accepted by more people.
And in 1980 ,tattoos had become a popular.
Sometimes it’s a part of a costume.
And it’s a kind of modern art.
It also be a history.

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Tattoos became more common among soldiers.

Sometimes it’s a part of a costume.

And it’s a kind of modern art.

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After reading an article and I wrote a summary.


After reading an article and, I wrote a summary. After reading an article, I wrote a summary.

the and here is not needed

After reading an article and, I wrote a summary. After reading an article, I wrote a summary.

At first ,some Native Americans wore tattoos.


At first ,someHistorically, Native Americans have wore tattoos. Historically, Native Americans have wore tattoos.

this is a little tough to fix, I want to say something like "In the beginning" to contrast.

At first , some Native Americans wore tattoos. At first, some Native Americans wore tattoos.

And then, U.S.explovers came to America and they learned about tattoos.


And then, U.S.When explovrers came to America and they learned about tattoos. When explorers came to America they learned about tattoos.

America works here because it also refers to the whole continents.

And tThen, U.S. explovrers came to America and they learned about tattoos. Then, U.S. explorers came to America and they learned about tattoos.

Tattoos became more common among soldiers.


Tattoos became more common among soldiers. Tattoos became more common among soldiers.

I think this is maybe the best sentence so far but another sentence connecting it would be helpful.

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They serving in the Civil War and they got tattoos.


TheyMany soldiers got tattoos while serving in the Civil War and they got tattoos. Many soldiers got tattoos while serving in the Civil War.

needs a to be rearranged a little to make sense.

They were serving in the Civil War and they got tattoos. They were serving in the Civil War and got tattoos.

In 1960 to 1970, tattoos were accepted by more people.


In 1960 to 1970, tattoos were accepted by more peopleMuch later, around the 1960s, tattoos became more accepted. Much later, around the 1960s, tattoos became more accepted.

1960s covers the time period you mentioned.

In 1960 to 1970, tattoos werethe 1960s, tattoos [ became / were becoming ] accepted by more people. In the 1960s, tattoos [ became / were becoming ] accepted by more people.

"The 1960s" is a much more common and natural way of referring to the years 1960–1970. Because you are telling the history of tattoos here, "became" or "were becoming" sounds more natural than "were".

And in 1980 ,tattoos had become a popular.


And inBy 1980 , tattoos had become a popular. By 1980, tattoos had become popular.

I'm a little mixed on this since I'm not sure how true I would say this is.

And inby 1980 , tattoos had become a popular. And by 1980, tattoos had become popular.

Sometimes it’s a part of a costume.


Sometimes it’tattoos are part of a costume. -- Sometimes tattoos are part of a costume --

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And it’s a kind of modern art.


And it’sor a kind of modern art. -- or a kind of modern art --

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It also be a history.


It also be abut it's also history. but it's also history.

I would make these all into one sentence.

ItTattoos can also bhave a history / have historical significance. Tattoos can also have a history / have historical significance.

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