Dec. 10, 2023
After My Trip to Hawaii
From November 18 to 25, my husband and I took an incredible trip to Honolulu, Hawaii, with a six-night stay. I wanted to share many things we experienced there with you guys and intended to write about them as soon as we got home, but I couldn't because I caught a cold. Probably, my body couldn't adjust to the 20-degree temperature drop between summer and winter. Fortunately, I felt better a few days later. But then, I got depressed about something related to Lang-8 closing. However, thanks to a friend of mine, I was able to change my mood a little. Hopefully, I'll post as often as I can until the eventual termination of the site.
11月18日から25日まで、私たち夫婦はハワイのホノルル6日間の旅をしてきました。旅行は素晴らしいものでした。体験した様々なことを皆さんにお話ししたいたいと思って、家に帰ったらすぐに投稿を書こうと思っていたのですが、風邪をひいてしまって書けませんでした。たぶん、私の身体は20度の気温差、夏から冬への変化に適応できなかったのでしょう。幸い、数日後には元気になりましたが、今度はLang-8閉鎖に関わることで落ち込んでしまいました。でも、お友だちのおかげで少し気分を変えることができました。Lang-8が終了するその日まで、できるだけ投稿を書こうと思います。
After My Trip to Hawaii
From November 18 to 25, my husband and I took an incredible trip to Honolulu, Hawaii, with a six-night stay.
I wanted to share many things we experienced there with you guys and intended to write about them as soon as we got home, but I couldn't because I caught a cold.
Probably, my bodMy body probably couldn't adjust to the 20-degree temperature drop between summthere and winthere.
Fortunately, I felt better a few days later.
But then, I got depressed about something related to Lang-8 closing.
However, thanks to a friend of mine, I was able to changimprove my mood a little.
Hopefully, I'll post as often as I can until the eventual termination of the site.
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That sounds like fun! Are you planning on going back?
Dec. 11, 2023
Thank you for the corrections and comment, friendfromfaraway!
・My body probably couldn't adjust to ...
・there and here
This makes sence to me! However, I always use "here and there" only. I learned it from you. ^^
・improve my moood
They were very helpful.
As a hula dancer, I hope to visit another island in Hawaii in the future. Unfortunately, everythings in Hawaii were more expensive one
in Japan. We need save a lot of money from now on. ><
After My Trip to Hawaii
From November 18th to 25the 25th, my husband and I took an incredible trip to Honolulu, Hawaii, with a six-night stay.
I wanted to share many things we experienced there with you guys and intended to write about them as soon as we got home, but I couldn't because I caught a cold.
Probably, my body couldn't adjust to the 20-degree temperature drop between summer and winter.
Fortunately, I felt better a few days later.
But then, I got depressed about something related to Lang-8 closing.
However, thanks to a friend of mine, I was able to change my mood a little.
Hopefully, I'll post as often as I can until the eventual termination of the site.
Dec. 11, 2023
Thank you for your corrections, mike! ^^
After My Trip to Hawaii
From November 18 to 25, my husband and I took an incredible trip to Honolulu, Hawaii, with afor six- night stays.
I wanted to share the many things we experienced there with you guys and intended to write about them as soon as we got home, but I couldn't because I caught a cold.
Or "I wanted to share all our experiences with you guys and..." to be less wordy
Probably, my body couldn't adjust to the 20-degree temperature drop between summer and winter.
Fortunately, I felt better a few days later.
But then, I got depressed about something related to Lang-8 closing.
However, thanks to a friend of mine, I was able to changelift my mood a little.
Hopefully, I'll post as often as I can until the eventual termination of the site.
Dec. 11, 2023
Thank you for the corretions, peppermints!
・for six nights
・share the many things
・lift my mood
I'll remember these phrases. ^^
From November 18 to 25, my husband and I took an incredible trip to Honolulu, Hawaii, with a six-night stay.
I wanted to share many things we experienced there with you guys and intended to write about them as soon as we got home, but I couldn't because I caught a cold.
Probably,I'm guessing my body couldn't adjust to the 20-degree temperature drop between summer and winter.
Fortunately, I felt better a few days later.
But then,Later on I got depressed about something related to Lang-8 closingfrom the news of the upcoming closure of Lang-8.
However, thanks to a friend of mine, I was able to changimprove my mood a little.
Hopefully, I'll post as often as I can until the eventual termination of the site.
Feedback
I was also surprised about the upcoming cancellation of Lang-8, but this website seems to be a great substitute
Dec. 11, 2023
Nice to meet you, Mr_Lobster! Thank you for reading and correcting my post. Do you still use Lang-8? ^^
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