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LeahLeah

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Mission: Chicken Possible

It's cloudy today in my area. Even without turning out the heater, it isn't as cold as I think in my house.
I'm going to cook "teriyaki chicken" for dinner.
Even if I bought it, it's very good, but it's a little expensive and the amount is small.
So, I have to the grocery store to buy chicken.


今日は私の住んでいる地域は曇りです。
暖房をつけなくても、家の中は思ったほど寒くありません。
夕食は「照り焼きチキン」を作ろうと思っています。
買ってきても美味しいのですが、少し高くて量も少ないです。
さて…ミッション受諾。鶏肉を買いにスーパーへ行きます。

Corrections

Even without turning outn the heater, it isn't as cold as I thinkought in my house.

I'm going to cook "teriyaki chicken" for dinner.

Even if I boughtuy it, it's very good, but it's a little expensive and the amount is small.

So, I have to go to the grocery store to buy chicken.

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JG25

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Good attempt, just be careful about the tenses used in the same sentence.

It's cloudy today in mythe area where I live.

Even without turning outff the heater, it isn't as cold as I think it is in my house.

Even iIf I bought it, it's still very good, but it's a little expensive and the amount is smallre's not much in it.

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LeahLeah

today

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Thank you for checking my writing.

Mission: Chicken Possible

It's cloudy today in my area today.

The original sentence is correct, but I feel it sounds a little better to place "today" at the end of the sentence in this case.

I'm going to cook "teriyaki chicken" for dinner.

Even iIf I bought it, it'swhile it would be very good, but it's a little too expensive and the amount is small.

I also agree with Kallik's correction.

Feedback

For the sentences I didn't correct, I agree with Kallik's corrections.
Great work!

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LeahLeah

today

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Thank you for checking my writing.
I really love teriyaki chicken! 😋

Even without turning outff the heater, it isn't as cold as I think it is in my house.

Even if I bought it, although it's very good, but it's a little expensive and the amount is small.

The 'although' shows that it is very good, but...

So, I have to go to the grocery store to buy chicken.

Feedback

Good job!
I've never had homemade teriyaki chicken, but I bet it's really good!

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LeahLeah

today

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Thank you for checking my writing.
Cooking ”teriyaki chicken" on my own is great as well, and it's easy to make.

Mission: Chicken Possible


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's cloudy today in my area.


It's cloudy today in my area today.

The original sentence is correct, but I feel it sounds a little better to place "today" at the end of the sentence in this case.

It's cloudy today in mythe area where I live.

Even without turning out the heater, it isn't as cold as I think in my house.


Even without turning outff the heater, it isn't as cold as I think it is in my house.

Even without turning outff the heater, it isn't as cold as I think it is in my house.

Even without turning outn the heater, it isn't as cold as I thinkought in my house.

I'm going to cook "teriyaki chicken" for dinner.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm going to cook "teriyaki chicken" for dinner.

Even if I bought it, it's very good, but it's a little expensive and the amount is small.


Even if I bought it, although it's very good, but it's a little expensive and the amount is small.

The 'although' shows that it is very good, but...

Even iIf I bought it, it'swhile it would be very good, but it's a little too expensive and the amount is small.

I also agree with Kallik's correction.

Even iIf I bought it, it's still very good, but it's a little expensive and the amount is smallre's not much in it.

Even if I boughtuy it, it's very good, but it's a little expensive and the amount is small.

So, I have to the grocery store to buy chicken.


So, I have to go to the grocery store to buy chicken.

So, I have to go to the grocery store to buy chicken.

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