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What motivates me to continue learning English

I haven't made any English classes in my childhood, I learned a little bit of English just playing games. In adult life I saw that English language could open a lot of possibilities in my life, for example, a better job, self confidence when traveling to a country which English is the main language, working remotely world wide, and etc.
This is my main motivation to still learning English.


Eu nunca fiz aula de inglês na minha infância, eu aprendi um pouco de inglês jogando jogos. Na vida adulta eu vi que o Inglês poderia abrir um monte de possibilidade na minha vida, por exemplo, um emprego melhor, segurança quando viajar para um país que a lingua principal seja o inglês, trabalhar remoto mundialmente etc.
Essa é minha motivação principal para continuar aprendendo inglês.

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What motivates me to continue learning English


I haven't made any English classes in my childhood, I learned a little bit of English just playing games.


I haven't madetook any English classes during my childhood, I learned a little bit of English just playing games. I haven't took any English classes during my childhood, I learned a little bit of English just playing games.

I havnever wen't madeto any English classes in my childhood, instead I learned a little bit of English just playing games. I never went to any English classes in my childhood, instead I learned a little bit of English just playing games.

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In adult life I saw that English language could open a lot of possibilities in my life, for example, a better job, self confidence when traveling to a country which English is the main language, working remotely world wide, and etc.


IAs an adult life, I sawee that the English language could open a lot of possibilities in my life, for example, a better job, self confidence when traveling to a country whichere English is the main language, working remotely world wide, and etc. As an adult, I see that the English language could open a lot of possibilities in my life, for example, a better job, self confidence when traveling to a country where English is the main language, working remotely world wide, etc.

"As an adult" to sound more natural. "See" in present tense because it is something that you still see until now. If you want to use past tense, you could say "I learnt that" or "I discovered that". We don't need to write "and" before "etc.". In fact, "etc." comes from Latin and means "et cetera", and the "et" already means "and". So you would be saying "and et" or "and and".

In adult life I saw that the English language could open a lot of possibilities in my life, for example, a better job, self confidence when traveling to a country whichere English is the main language, working remotely world wide, and etc. In adult life I saw that the English language could open a lot of possibilities in my life, for example, a better job, self confidence when traveling to a country where English is the main language, working remotely world wide, etc.

This is my main motivation to still learning English.


This is my main motivation to still continue learning English. This is my main motivation to still continue learning English.

This is my main motivation to stillcontinue learning English. This is my main motivation to continue learning English.

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