May 13, 2021
My two sisters and I started to love Kpop since 2016. My sister bought a lot of posters and put it on my bedroom wall at first I felt weird because I felt like they are all looking at me. As time past I was getting use to it. The reason why I decided to take it down was I want to make space for my notes to post on my bedroom wall to keep me reminded and inspired to study Korean language. I know learning a language will take me years to master but I know with perseverance, dedication and discipline it will bring me to speak my target language in time and through Gods wisdom I know I can do this.
Kpop to Korean Language
Kpop to Korean
It should be either "Kpop to the Korean Language" or "Kpop to Korean". I think the second one sounds more natural.
My two sisters and I started to love Kpop since 2016.
My two sisters and I started to love Kpop in 2016.
My sister bought a lot of posters and put ithem up on my bedroom wall at first I felt weird because I felt like they are all looking at me.
My sister bought a lot of posters and put them up on my bedroom wall.
It sounds like you're referring to multiple posters, and "it" is singular.
As time past I was gettingt first I felt weird because I felt like they are all looking at me, but as time past I got used to it.
At first I felt weird because I felt like they are all looking at me, but as time past I got used to it.
You're talking about something that happened in the past, so you should say "got used to it", which is past tense.
The reason why I decided to take ithem down was I wanted to make space forto post my notes to post on my bedroom wall to keep me remind med and keep me inspired to study Korean language.
The reason I decided to take them down was I wanted to make space to post my notes on my bedroom wall to remind me and keep me inspired to study Korean.
You're talking about the past so it's "wanted".
I know learning a language will take me years to master but I know, but with perseverance, dedication and discipline itI will bring me able to speak my target language in time and t. Through God's wisdom I know I can do this.
I know learning a language will take me years, but with perseverance, dedication and discipline I will be able to speak my target language in time. Through God's wisdom I know I can do this.
"Gods wisdom" is possessive so it needs an apostrophe.
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Good luck learning Korean and English!
My two sisters and I started tohave loved Kpop since 2016.
My two sisters and I have loved Kpop since 2016.
My sister bought a lot of posters and put it on my bedroom wall a. At first, I felt weird because I felt like they awere all looking at me.
My sister bought a lot of posters and put it on my bedroom wall. At first, I felt weird because I felt like they were all looking at me.
As time past I was gettingsed, I got used to it.
As time passed, I got used to it.
The reason why I decided to take ithem down was because I wanted to make space for my notes to post on my bedroom wall to keep me reminded and inspired me to study the Korean language. on my bedroom wall.
The reason why I decided to take them down was because I wanted to make space for notes to remind and inspire me to study the Korean language on my bedroom wall.
"Korean" can be used instead of "the Korean language"
I know learnmastering a language will take me years to master, but I know with perseverance, dedication and discipline itedication, I will bring me able to speak my target language in time and through God's wisdom, I know I can do this.
I know mastering a language will take years, but I know with perseverance, dedication and dedication, I will be able to speak my target language in time and through God's wisdom, I know I can do this.
I think you meant it will take years to become fluent in the language.
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You can do it! The most important thing is so study every day, even if just a little bit.
My two sisters and I started tohave loved Kpop since 2016.
My two sisters and I have loved Kpop since 2016.
My sister bought a lot of posters and put ithem on my bedroom wall a. At first I felt weird because I felt like they awere all looking at me.
My sister bought a lot of posters and put them on my bedroom wall. At first I felt weird because I felt like they were all looking at me.
As time pastsed I was getting use to ithem.
As time passed I was getting use to them.
Since you are referring to the posters, use "them" instead of "it".
The reason why I decided to take ithem down was I want to make space for my notes to post on my bedroom wall to keep me remind med and keep me inspired to study Korean language.
The reason why I decided to take them down was I want to make space for my notes to post on my bedroom wall to remind me and keep me inspired to study Korean.
Or your could say "... study the Korean language."
I know learning a language will take me years to master but I knowalso know that with perseverance, dedication and discipline itI will bring me to speak my target language in time, and through God's wisdom I know I can do this.
I know learning a language will take me years to master but I also know that with perseverance, dedication and discipline I will speak my target language in time, and through God's wisdom I know I can do this.
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Kpop to Korean Language
Kpop to Korean It should be either "Kpop to the Korean Language" or "Kpop to Korean". I think the second one sounds more natural. |
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My two sisters and I started to love Kpop since 2016.
My two sisters and I
My two sisters and I
My two sisters and I started to love Kpop |
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My sister bought a lot of posters and put it on my bedroom wall at first I felt weird because I felt like they are all looking at me.
My sister bought a lot of posters and put
My sister bought a lot of posters and put it on my bedroom wall
My sister bought a lot of posters and put It sounds like you're referring to multiple posters, and "it" is singular. |
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As time past I was getting use to it.
As time pas Since you are referring to the posters, use "them" instead of "it".
As time pas
A You're talking about something that happened in the past, so you should say "got used to it", which is past tense. |
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The reason why I decided to take it down was I want to make space for my notes to post on my bedroom wall to keep me reminded and inspired to study Korean language.
The reason why I decided to take Or your could say "... study the Korean language."
The reason why I decided to take "Korean" can be used instead of "the Korean language"
The reason You're talking about the past so it's "wanted". |
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I know learning a language will take me years to master but I know with perseverance, dedication and discipline it will bring me to speak my target language in time and through Gods wisdom I know I can do this.
I know learning a language will take me years to master but I
I know I think you meant it will take years to become fluent in the language.
I know learning a language will take me years "Gods wisdom" is possessive so it needs an apostrophe. |
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