The center was divided into twohree parts. The center was divided into three parts.

The first part was for greeting, so we named it as Greeting Hall. The first part was for greeting, so we named it Greeting Hall.

The first part was for greeting, tourists, so we named it asthe Greeting Hall. The first part was for greeting tourists, so we named it the Greeting Hall.

The first part was for greeting, so we named it asthe Greeting Hall. The first part was for greeting so we named it the Greeting Hall.

Started from tThe next day, sister Wang introducexplained more about our job and taught us how to sell products to tourists when they entered the exhibition center. The next day, sister Wang explained more about our job and taught us how to sell products to tourists when they entered the exhibition center.

Starteding from the next day, sister Wang introducexplained more about our job and taught us how to sell products to tourists when they entered the exhibition center. Starting from the next day, sister Wang explained more about our job and taught us how to sell products to tourists when they entered the exhibition center.

Started from tThe next day, sister Wang introducedtrained us more about how to do our jobs and taught us how to sell products to tourists when they entered the exhibition center. The next day sister Wang trained us more about how to do our jobs and taught us how to sell products to tourists when they entered the exhibition center.

In the hall, one of us would give a brief introduction about SZ, some history of China, and impliedy how precious the jade it was over a long period because we planned to sell some jade crafts to them. In the hall, one of us would give a brief introduction about SZ, some history of China, and imply how precious the jade was over a long period because we planned to sell some jade crafts to them.

In the hall, one of us would give a brief introduction abouto SZ, some history of China, and impliedy how precious the jade it was over a long period because we planned to sell some jade crafts to them. In the hall, one of us would give a brief introduction to SZ, some history of China, and imply how precious the jade was over a long period because we plan to sell some jade crafts to them.

你的动词都要be in the same tense. So would give/imply/plan or gave/implied/planned or gives/implies/plan. Sell是个例外因为就是"to sell"

In the hall, one of us would give a brief introduction about SZ, some history of China, and implied how precious the jade it was over a long periodwould become over time because we planned to sell some jade crafts to them. In the hall, one of us would give a brief introduction about SZ, some history of China, and implied how precious jade would become over time because we planned to sell jade crafts to them.

The second part was a small room around 25 square meters, we called it asthe learning Room where we would gave them some knowledge about Traditional Chinese Paintings, ancient coins or other additional information. The second part was a small room around 25 square meters, we called it the learning Room where we would gave them some knowledge about Traditional Chinese Paintings, ancient coins or other additional information.

The second part was a small room around 25 square meters, we called it as lthe Learning Room, where we would gaveteach them some knowledge about Traditional Chinese Paintings, ancient coins orand other additional information. The second part was a small room around 25 square meters, we called it the Learning Room, where we would teach them about Traditional Chinese Paintings, ancient coins and other additional information.

The second part was a small room around 25 square meters, w. We called it as lthe Learning Room wherbecause we would gave them some knowledgeteach the tourists about Ttraditional Chinese Ppaintings, ancient coins or other additional informationthings. The second part was a small room around 25 square meters. We called it the Learning Room because we would teach the tourists about traditional Chinese paintings, ancient coins or other things.

The third part as you may have guessed was the Selling Area whereich was around 200 square meters. The third part as you may have guessed was the Selling Area which was around 200 square meters.

The third part, as you may have guessed, was the Selling Area, whereich is around 200 square meters. The third part, as you may have guessed, was the Selling Area, which is around 200 square meters.

The third part as you may have guessed was the Selling Area whereich was around 200 square meters. The third part as you may have guessed was the Selling Area which was around 200 square meters.

Since you're talking about the attributes of the space, we use "which" instead of "where."

I believe the layout was and is popular in most shopping places for tourists in China, however, it was new for me and other newcomers recruited from the job market at the time. I believe the layout was and is popular in most shopping places for tourists in China, however, it was new for me and other newcomers recruited from the job market at the time.

I believe the layout was and is popular in most shopping placecenters for tourists in China, h. However, it was new forto me and the other newcomers recruited from job market at the time employees. I believe the layout was and is popular in most shopping centers for tourists in China. However, it was new to me and the other new employees.

Was已经意味着你现在并不觉得太陌生，shopping centers也可以说shops，得看你的具体意思

I believe the layout was and is popular in most shopping places for tourists in China, however, it was new for me and other newcomers recruited from the job market at the time. I believe the layout was and is popular in most shopping places for tourists in China, however, it was new for me and other newcomers recruited from the job market at the time.

Sister Wang was responsible for teachraining us. Sister Wang was responsible for training us.

I evenEven now I remember her words now which lethelped me succeed in the company. Even now I remember her words which helped me succeed in the company.

“Always follow a customer from beginning to end, do not give him or her up in the middle, unless you are 100% guaranteedsure the person is disgustinged by you.” “Always follow a customer from beginning to end, do not give him or her up in the middle, unless you are 100% sure the person is disgusted by you.”

"guaranteed" doesn't quite fit here.

“Always follow a customer from beginning to end, do not give him or her up in the middle, unless you are 100% guaranteedsure that the person disgustinglikes you.” “Always follow a customer from beginning to end, do not give him or her up in the middle, unless you are 100% sure that the person dislikes you.”

“Always follow a customer from beginning to end, d. Do not give him or her up in the middle, unless you are 100% guaranteedcertain that the person is disgustinged by you.” “Always follow a customer from beginning to end. Do not give him or her up in the middle, unless you are 100% certain that the person is disgusted by you.”

I'm not sure what you mean exactly so this correction is my best guess.

“You’ll be feeling excited about the job infor the first three months, then bored by it.” “You’ll feel excited about the job for the first three months, then bored by it.”

“You’ll be feeling excited about the job infor the first three months, and then get bored by it.” “You’ll feel excited about the job for the first three months and then get bored by it.”

Wow, that's a really honest assessment to new hires! I don't think I've ever heard of anyone doing this in the US.

“You must continue learning by yourself, then you are abilitywill be able to make sense to the porcelain wares.” “You must continue learning by yourself, then you will be able to make sense to the porcelain wares.”

I'm not sure what you mean by "make sense to the porcelain wares"

“You must continue learning by yourself, then you are abilitywill be able to make sense tof the porcelain wares.” “You must continue learning by yourself, then you will be able to make sense of the porcelain wares.”

“You must continue learning by yourself, then you arwill develop the ability to make sense tof the porcelain wares.” “You must continue learning by yourself, then you will develop the ability to make sense of the porcelain ware.”

She was right since she already had over 10 years experiences in the tourism. She was right since she already had over 10 years experience in tourism.

She was right since she already had over 10 years of experiences in the tourism industry. She was right since she already had over 10 years of experience in the tourism industry.

She was right since she already had over 10 years of experiences in the tourism. She was right since she already had over 10 years of experience in tourism.

A local high ranking police officer was her second husband who, and he supported her business. A local high ranking police officer was her second husband, and he supported her business.

A local high ranking police officer was her second husband whoand supported her business. A local high ranking police officer was her second husband and supported her business.

A local high ranking police officer was her second husband who supported her business. A local high ranking police officer was her second husband who supported her business.

とても便利ですね。