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"Makeover" is ok but "Renovating" I feel is more appropriate with all the work you had done on your house.

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We have an attic in our house and it used to hold lots of dust due to a false ceiling that we installed after we bought thisour home. We have an attic in our house and it used to hold lots of dust due to a false ceiling that we installed after we bought our home.

This sentence is fine grammatically but it would help with clarity if maybe you described the dust building up on the false ceiling.

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You could also say "...but it used to be very dusty, due to..."

We have an attic in our house and it used to hold lots of dust due to a false ceiling that we installed after we bought thise homuse. We have an attic in our house and it used to hold lots of dust due to a false ceiling that we installed after we bought the house.

We have an attic in our house and it used to hold lots of dust due to a false ceiling that we installed after we bought this homuse. We have an attic in our house and it used to hold lots of dust due to a false ceiling that we installed after we bought this house.

House is to be used here because it is a building, home is like building + the people in it.

Now my father and I, contracted a constructorprofessional to convert the attic into a normal room, i. In order to accomplish this the worker isprofessional addinged more bricks to the wall and also took off the roof, w. We were anxious due to the weather, since in a moment's notice the rain could flood our home. Now my father and I contracted a professional to convert the attic into a normal room. In order to accomplish this the professional added more bricks to the wall and also took off the roof. We were anxious due to the weather since in a moment's notice the rain could flood our home.

I don't ever hear "constructor" being used to refer to a person so I replaced it Worker usually implies a subordinate role so I replaced it. If this guy is doing a one man job I would give him more credit : P I'm a little confused by the tense with how you originally used two tenses in the same extended sentence but to keep things consistent I changed "adding" to "added".

Now my father and I, contract have hired a construactor to convert the attic into a normal room, i. In order to accomplish this, the workecontractor is adding more bricks to the wall and also took off the roof, w. We were anxious due to the weather, since in a moment notice the rain could flood our home at a moment's notice. Now my father and I have hired a contractor to convert the attic into a normal room. In order to accomplish this, the contractor is adding more bricks to the wall and also took off the roof. We were anxious due to the weather, since rain could flood our home at a moment's notice.

Did you mean "contractor" instead of "constructor"?

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