Aug. 6, 2025
Avocado
I bought two avocados last night and planned to make breakfast this morning. I ordered them on a takeaway platform from a big supermarket, which I trusted very much.
However, when I opened the box this morning, I found that the quality of the avocados was worse than before. They were fully ripe but somewhat firm, lacking the soft, creamy texture of butter.
I'm a little disappointed and decided to buy avocados from the offline fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
昨晚我买了两个牛油果，准备今早做早餐用。我是在外卖平台上一家大型超市订购的，我非常信任那个超市。
然而，今天早上我打开包装盒时发现，这些牛油果的质量比以前差多了。它们虽已完全成熟，但有些硬邦邦，没有那种柔软、细腻的黄油质感。
我有点失望，下次打算去我们小区的线下水果店买了。
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Avocado
I bought two avocados last night and planned to make breakfast this morning.
I ordered them on a takeaway platform from a big supermarket, which that I trusted very much.
I ordered them on a takeaway platform from a big supermarket that I trust very much.
What do you mean by takeaway platform? A conveyer belt, online pickup, etc.?
However, when I opened the box this morning, I found that the quality of the avocados was worse than before.
They were fully ripe but somewhat firm, lacking the soft, creamy texture of butter.
I'm a little disappointed and decided to buy avocados from the offline fruit store in our neighborhood next time. I'm a little disappointed and decided to buy avocados from the offline fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
There are a few ways to indicate a store that’s not online. You can say “physical store,” “brick and mortar store,” or “buy in person.”
Avocado
I bought two avocados last night andwith which I planned to make breakfast this morning.
I bought two avocados last night with which I planned to make breakfast this morning.
I ordered them on a takeaway platformit online from a big supermarket, which I trusted very much.
I ordered it online from a big supermarket, which I trusted very much.
However, when I opened the box this morning, I found that the quality of the avocados was worse than beforebad.
However, when I opened the box this morning, I found that the quality of the avocados was bad.
They were fully ripe but somewhat firm, and lacking the soft, creamy texture of butter.
They were fully ripe but somewhat firm and lacking the soft, creamy texture of butter.
I'm a little disappointed and decided to buy avocados from the offline fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
I'm a little disappointed and decided to buy avocados from the fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
Aug. 6, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Avocado
I bought two avocados last night and planned to make breakfast with them this morning. I bought two avocados last night and planned to make breakfast with them this morning.
I ordered them on a takeaway platform from a big supermarket, which I trusted very much.
However, when I opened the box this morning, I found that the quality of the avocados was much worse than before. However, when I opened the box this morning, I found that the quality of the avocados was much worse than before.
TAlthough they were fully ripe but, they somewhat firm, and lackinged the soft, creamy texture of butter.
Although they were fully ripe, they somewhat firm and lacked the soft, creamy texture of butter.
I'm a little disappointed and decided. I plan to buy avocados from the offlinephysical fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
I'm a little disappointed. I plan to buy avocados from the physical fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
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The English was all fine! I just edited it to be a bit closer to the Chinese
Aug. 6, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
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I'm a little disappointed and decided to buy avocados from the offline fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
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