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The journey of looking for jobs (19/07/2024)

Recently, I have graduated from university with a degree of business administration and specializing in Logistics and Supply Chain Management. To make a living, I must look for jobs in Quy Nhon city because I would like to live in this city a lot.
However, Quy Nhon city does not have many companies operating in Logistics. Currently, I had an interview at a company and they required at least two years of experience in the industry, but I am a fresher and I have no experience. I also completed internships at two companies despite them not giving me any crucial work to do, so I just did odd tasks.
Predictably, I was turned down for the job after the interview, but I did not give up, I still look for jobs. Yesterday, I applied for the supply staff position at a company operating in manufacturing and immediately I received an email inviting me to the interview. I think that if I get ready well for the interview, I will get the job.

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However, Quy Nhon city does not have many companies operating in Logistics.

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The journey of looking for jobs (19/07/2024)

To make a living, I must look for jobs in Quy Nhon city because I would like to live in this city a lot.

Currently, I had an interview at a company and they required at least two years of experience in the industry, but I am a fresher and I have no experience.

I also completed internships at two companies despite them not giving me any crucial work to do, so I just did odd tasks.

I think that if I get ready well for the interview, I will get the job.

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Recently, I have graduated from university with a degree of business administration and specializing in Logistics and Supply Chain Management.


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To make a living, I must look for jobs in Quy Nhon city because I would like to live in this city a lot.


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However, Quy Nhon city does not have many companies operating in Logistics.


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Currently, I had an interview at a company and they required at least two years of experience in the industry, but I am a fresher and I have no experience.


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"Currently" suggests the interview/opportunity is still happening.

I also completed internships at two companies despite them not giving me any crucial work to do, so I just did odd tasks.


I also completed internships at two companies despite them no, although they didn't givinge me any crucial work to do, so I just did odd tasks. I also completed internships at two companies, although they didn't give me any crucial work to do, so I just did odd tasks.

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I also completed internships at two companies despite them. Unfortunately they did not givinge me any crucial work to do, so I just did odd tasks. I also completed internships at two companies. Unfortunately they did not give me any crucial work to do, so I just did odd tasks.

"despite" suggests that them not giving you crucial work made it difficult to finish your internships. Instead of "crucial" I would probably say "relevant" or "important".

Predictably, I was turned down for the job after the interview, but I did not give up, I still look for jobs.


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The sentence was a little long. You could also say "I did not give up, and am still looking for jobs."

Yesterday, I applied for the supply staff position at a company operating in manufacturing and immediately I received an email inviting me to the interview.


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"the" suggests there's only one. Depending on what the company is, you could also say "manufacturing company".

I think that if I get ready well for the interview, I will get the job.


I think that if I get readyprepare well for the interview, I will get the job. I think that if I prepare well for the interview, I will get the job.

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I think that if I get readyprepare well for the interview, I will get the job. I think that if I prepare well for the interview, I will get the job.

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To make a living, I must look for jobs in Quy Nhon city.


I also completed internships at two companies despite them not giving me any work to do and I just did odd tasks.


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