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henry_yao

Jan. 16, 2020

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ADVICE TO AN ENVIRONMENT PROJECT MANAGER

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to the advertisement published recently on the local newspaper, ‘City Daily’, which appeals to locals for help in your environment projects.

The issue that most concern me is the increasing trash on the street, especially in our downtown area. Since last year, our municipality has experienced a population boom due to sharply increasing immigrants. As a consequence, the local government is facing a tough challenge in maintaining public cleanliness.

Upon reading the advertisement posted, I believe that I could offer some help to you. First, my friends and I are more than willing to collect trash voluntarily on weekends. Besides, we could design and print some posters and flyers to educate people how to dispose of the waste correctly.

Though we can help to relieve the problem in a short term, local government should take further steps to solve the problem in the long run. Apparently, more government funds should be allocated to hire more full-time dustmen. And extra trash cans on the street would also be a good idea.

I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith

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Kindred Spirit

ADVICE TOFOR AN ENVIRONMENT PROJECT MANAGER

Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing within regards to the advertisement that was recently published recently on the local newspaper, ‘City Daily’, which appeals to locals for help inwith your environment projects.

The issue that most concerned me is the increasing amount of trash on the streets, especially in our downtown area.

Since last year, our municipality has experienced a population boom due to a sharply increase ing immigrantstion.

As a consequence, the local government is facing a tough challenge in maintaining public cleanliness.

Upon reading the advertisement posted, I believe that I could offer some help to youhelp.

First, mMy friends and I are more than willing to collect trash voluntarily on weekends.

BesidesAdditionally, we could design and print some posters and flyers to educate people on how to dispose of their waste correctly.

Though we can help to relievewith the problem in a short term, the local government should take further steps to solve the problem in the long run.

Apparently, mMore government funds should be allocated to hire more full-time dustmen.

And eExtra trash cans on the street would also be a good idea.

You can start a sentence with and, but you should try not to when possible, especially when writing formally.

I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours faithfully,John Smith

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henry_yao

Jan. 18, 2020

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Thank you for your correction and your advice on starting a sentence.

ADVICE TO A ENVIRONMENT PROJECT MANAGER


Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing with regard to the advertisement published recently on the local newspaper, ‘City Daily’, which appeals to locals for help in your environment projects.


Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing within regards to the advertisement that was recently published recently on the local newspaper, ‘City Daily’, which appeals to locals for help inwith your environment projects.

The issue that most concern me is the increasing trash on the street, especially in our downtown area.


The issue that most concerned me is the increasing amount of trash on the streets, especially in our downtown area.

Since last year, our municipality has experienced a population boom due to sharply increasing immigrants.


Since last year, our municipality has experienced a population boom due to a sharply increase ing immigrantstion.

As a consequence, the local government is facing a tough challenge in maintaining public cleanliness.


As a consequence, the local government is facing a tough challenge in maintaining public cleanliness.

Upon reading the advertisement posted, I believe that I could offer some help to you.


Upon reading the advertisement posted, I believe that I could offer some help to youhelp.

First, my friends and I are more than willing to collect trash voluntarily on weekends.


First, mMy friends and I are more than willing to collect trash voluntarily on weekends.

Besides, we could design and print some posters and flyers to educate people how to dispose of the waste correctly.


BesidesAdditionally, we could design and print some posters and flyers to educate people on how to dispose of their waste correctly.

Though we can help to relieve the problem in a short term, local government should take further steps to solve the problem in the long run.


Though we can help to relievewith the problem in a short term, the local government should take further steps to solve the problem in the long run.

Apparently, more government funds should be allocated to hire more full-time dustmen.


Apparently, mMore government funds should be allocated to hire more full-time dustmen.

And extra trash cans on the street would also be a good idea.


And eExtra trash cans on the street would also be a good idea.

You can start a sentence with and, but you should try not to when possible, especially when writing formally.

I look forward to receiving your response.


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Yours faithfully,John Smith


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ADVICE TO AN ENVIRONMENT PROJECT MANAGER


ADVICE TOFOR AN ENVIRONMENT PROJECT MANAGER

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