Jan. 16, 2020
Advertising
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.
When asked is it must put more money in advertising in order to become successful business, most people strongly support the idea that it should spend big money on it, while some disagree. Personally, I side with the latter. I think it is not necessary to put large amount money in advertising.
Firstly, putting more money on increasing quality of product will bring business to succeed. Rather buying a beautiful product, people choose a high quality one. A business improve a product’s quality is beneficial to them, because it will attract more and more customer and keep the customer in long term as well. Iphone, for instance, Apple is one of successful technology companies in the world. It puts a big amount of money on enhancing the quality of iphone’s system, applications, appearance and so on in order to cause much more people’s interests. This strategy totally works, since once most people use iPhone, they are not willing to use others companies’ since they are already used to iPhone’s system. So, focusing on quality leads a business to succeed.
Secondly, they said, producing a product is people looking for. People always buy a product that is practical, convenient and facilitative. In other words, they dislike a good that is difficult to use, hard to carry. If a business yearns to succeed, they must spend a lot money on designing a product that customers are easy to use. A case in point, in the past, people were using CD player for listening; however, they are using MP3 which is easier to carry around and light. A company who made MP3 was producing a product that people think is practical, so it is worth to invest money on it.
Admittedly, some people might say that it must put more money in advertising in order for business to succeed, it will either boost their brands or create a trend. For example, a coke company sponsored a celebrity to endorse their product. The well-known person took a photo, post on the social media, and tried to attract people to buy it. The company spent money on the celebrity, attempting to advertise people. However, the action of putting much more money in advertising will not lead a business to succeed, since a company should focus on their product’s quality and practical utility. These definitely bring a far benefit to a company, after all.
Advertising
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Feedback
Interesting topic! I don't necessarily agree with you, though. You should check out a book called emotional design. It's all about how utility isn't all that matters - aesthetics and desirability all matter when people choose a product. I also think that this overlooks some key points about advertising, even in your examples; for example, Apple DOES put a lot of money into its product... But Apple also had some of the most iconic advertising campaigns in history (dancing silhouettes for the iPod), and the brand itself is incredibly recognizable, particularly because the design is so uniform. Think back to the colorful iMacs, and all of the sleek silver Macbooks of today.
I moved from product into sales and marketing, and here's what I'd say from my experience: having a solid product gets you half of the way there. But you need to get people to fall in love with it, ESPECIALLY when you have stiff competition. They need to understand why the service you provide is valuable and solves a problem that they have. Apple does this really, really well, and I think it's unfair to say that it's all happening on the product side!
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When asked is it must put more money in advertising in order to become successful business, most people strongly support the idea that it should spend big money on it, while some disagree. When asked |
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Personally, I side with the latter. Personally, I Your version isn't wrong insofar as I understand it, but using "side" as a verb is a little odd. |
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I think it is not necessary to put large amount money in advertising. I don't think it |
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Firstly, putting more money on increasing quality of product will bring business to succeed. First |
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Rather buying a beautiful product, people choose a high quality one.
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A business improve a product’s quality is beneficial to them, because it will attract more and more customer and keep the customer in long term as well.
Nominalizing improve really helps clarify this statement, in my opinion |
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Iphone, for instance, Apple is one of successful technology companies in the world.
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It puts a big amount of money on enhancing the quality of iphone’s system, applications, appearance and so on in order to cause much more people’s interests. It puts a |
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This strategy totally works, since once most people use iPhone, they are not willing to use others companies’ since they are already used to iPhone’s system. This strategy totally works |
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So, focusing on quality leads a business to succeed. So, focusing on quality leads a business to succe |
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Secondly, they said, producing a product is people looking for. Second |
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People always buy a product that is practical, convenient and facilitative. People always buy a product that is practical, convenient and Technically I understand facilitative, but it's awkward. |
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In other words, they dislike a good that is difficult to use, hard to carry. In other words, they dislike a commas are useful for longer lists, not needed here |
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If a business yearns to succeed, they must spend a lot money on designing a product that customers are easy to use. If a business |
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A case in point, in the past, people were using CD player for listening; however, they are using MP3 which is easier to carry around and light.
It's sometimes better style to try and save longer phrases like "easy to carry" for the end of the phrase. In this particular case, the mp3 players are light and therefore easier to carry |
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A company who made MP3 was producing a product that people think is practical, so it is worth to invest money on it. A company |
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Admittedly, some people might say that it must put more money in advertising in order for business to succeed, it will either boost their brands or create a trend. Admittedly, some people might say that |
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For example, a coke company sponsored a celebrity to endorse their product. For example, There's really only one Coke. This could be regional, but in formal essays like this it's particularly bad because this sounds like its a cocaine company |
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The well-known person took a photo, post on the social media, and tried to attract people to buy it. The well-known person took a photo, post |
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The company spent money on the celebrity, attempting to advertise people. The company spent money on the celebrity, attempting to advertise to people. |
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However, the action of putting much more money in advertising will not lead a business to succeed, since a company should focus on their product’s quality and practical utility. |
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These definitely bring a far benefit to a company, after all. These definitely bring a far greater benefit to |
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