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tana_gao

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230225-heartbreaking time

Today I lost a close friend.

I have experienced a lot and feel bad that I need someone to talk with. I took a train to see him, but I felt that he doesn't welcome me (though he explained that he feel happy, my sixth sense tell me that he avoids me, and I always trust my sixth sense).

He also said that he didn't want to deal with others' negative feelings. I was just confused that if a friend cannot give me a shoulder, why do I call him a friend? I told him that I have bad feelings, but he didn't pay attention.

After I went back home, we have a concise talk by phone, and he said he needs to adjust his situation. He thought that spending time with me in the past distorted his orderly schedule and lifestyle. I felt hurt and decided to cut off this relationship.


I appreciated his spending time with me in the past. We have talked a lot about our past, our values, our lifestyles, and our dark sides and have seen a lot of beautiful views of New York City. When I revolve those memories, I am in tears with smiles and sadness.

We both are naive, but when we grew up then we can handle friendship better. Now I also need to face my life by myself.

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Today I lost a close friend.

I have experienced a lot and feel bad that I need someone to talk with.

I felt hurt and decided to cut off this relationship.

I appreciated his spending time with me in the past.

We have talked a lot about our past, our values, our lifestyles, and our dark sides and have seen a lot of beautiful views of New York City.

Now I also need to face my life by myself.

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Feb. 27, 2023

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230225-heartbreaking time


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I'm so sorry to hear this. :( I'm sending you big virtual hugs from Minnesota!

Today I lost a close friend.


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I have experienced a lot and feel bad that I need someone to talk with.


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I have experienced a lot and feel bad that I need someone to talk withto. I have experienced a lot and feel bad that I need someone to talk to.

I took a train to see him, but I felt that he doesn't welcome me (though he explained that he feel happy, my sixth sense tell me that he avoids me, and I always trust my sixth sense).


I took a train to see him, but I felt thatas if he doewasn't welcomas glad to see me (though he explainesaid that he feelt happy, my sixth sense tellold me that he avoids me, and I always trust my sixth sense). I took a train to see him, but I felt as if he wasn't as glad to see me (though he said that he felt happy, my sixth sense told me that he avoids me and I always trust my sixth sense).

I took a train to see him, but I felt that he doesidn't welcome me (though he explainesaid that he feelwas happy to see me, my sixth sense tellold me that he was trying to avoids me, and I always trust my sixth sense). I took a train to see him, but I felt that he didn't welcome me (though he said that he was happy to see me, my sixth sense told me that he was trying to avoid me, and I always trust my sixth sense).

I took a train to see him, but I felt that he doesidn't welcome me (though he explained that he feelt happy, my sixth sense tells me that he is avoidsing me, and I always trust my sixth sense). I took a train to see him, but I felt that he didn't welcome me (though he explained that he felt happy, my sixth sense tells me that he is avoiding me, and I always trust my sixth sense).

He also said that he didn't want to deal with others' negative feelings.


He also said that he didn't want to deal with other peoples' negative feelings. He also said that he didn't want to deal with other peoples' negative feelings.

This sounds like a terrible friend. We're there for our friends, period.

He also said that he didn't want to deal with others' negative feelings. He also said that he didn't want to deal with others' negative feelings.

Well done with the apostrophe!

I was just confused that if a friend cannot give me a shoulder, why do I call him a friend?


I was just confused thatbecause if a friend cannot give me a shoulder to cry on, why do I call him a friend? I was just confused because if a friend cannot give me a shoulder to cry on, why do I call him a friend?

You know what I'm talking about.

I was just confused that i. If a friend cannot give me a shoulder, why do to cry on, can I call him a friend? I was just confused. If a friend cannot give me a shoulder to cry on, can I call him a friend?

I was just confused that if a friend cannot give me a shoulder, why do I call him a friend? I was just confused that if a friend cannot give me a shoulder, why do I call him a friend?

Maybe say "a shoulder to cry on"

I told him that I have bad feelings, but he didn't pay attention.


I told him that I have bad feelingsfeel bad, but he didn't pay any attention. I told him that I feel bad, but he didn't pay any attention.

This dude sounds emotionally stunted. or, I told him that I feel bad, but he didn't care.

After I went back home, we have a concise talk by phone, and he said he needs to adjust his situation.


After I went back home, we haved a concise talkbrief conversation by phone, and he said he needs to adjust his situation. After I went back home, we had a brief conversation by phone and he said he needs to adjust his situation.

wow! what a jerk!!

After I went back home, we haved a concisebrief talk by phone, and he said he needsed to adjust his situationmake some changes. After I went back home, we had a brief talk by phone, and he said he needed to make some changes.

After I went back home, we haved a concise talk by phone, and he said he needs to adjust his situation. After I went back home, we had a concise talk by phone, and he said he needs to adjust his situation.

He thought that spending time with me in the past distorted his orderly schedule and lifestyle.


He thought that spending time with me in the past distorrupted his orderly schedule and lifestyle. He thought that spending time with me in the past disrupted his orderly schedule and lifestyle.

just wow

He thought that spending time with me in the past distorrupted his orderly schedule and lifestyle. He thought that spending time with me in the past disrupted his orderly schedule and lifestyle.

I felt hurt and decided to cut off this relationship.


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I appreciated his spending time with me in the past.


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We have talked a lot about our past, our values, our lifestyles, and our dark sides and have seen a lot of beautiful views of New York City.


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When I revolve those memories, I am in tears with smiles and sadness.


When I revolvecall those memories, I ambreak down in tears with smiles and sadness. When I recall those memories, I break down in tears with smiles and sadness.

I'm sending more big hugs to you!

When I revolvelooked back at those memories, I amwas in tears with smiles and sadnessthat were happy and sad at the same time. When I looked back at those memories, was in tears that were happy and sad at the same time.

When I revolve those memories, I am in tears with smiles and sadness. When I revolve those memories, I am in tears with smiles and sadness.

Maybe use recall instead of revolve?

We both are naive, but when we grew up then we can handle friendship better.


We both are naive, but when we greow up then we can handle friendship better. We both are naive, but when we grow up then we can handle friendship better.

You're learning to handle it now with each friendship. You're doing such a good job. I'm so proud of you!

We were both are naive, but when we grew up then we can handled our friendship better. We were both naive, but when we grew up then we handled our friendship better.

We both are naive, but when we greow up then we can handle friendship better. We both are naive, but when we grow up then we can handle friendship better.

Now I also need to face my life by myself.


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