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I’ve been feeling very tired due to loads of work these days.
Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to a research. Doing research and writing paper is not that fun, I have to read many foreign literature and thesis, which almost drive me crazy. I always buy new clothes and go out for a big meal to cheer myself up.
Learning English is quite interesting for me, but I just hate the quizzes and competitions. I know both of them are good chance to show talents, but does the questions do serve for that goal? I’m not sure. Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my test-tasking skills and get familiar with the text structure.
The competition I’m preparing for includes two writing parts. One is based on the diagram and data provided, and another is kind of argumentation.
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An English-language magazine has asked readers to write an article aimed at young adults about trends in today's working world. You decide to send in an article discussing work in your country today, and the reasons why some people go abroad to work. Write the essay in at least 160 words on the answer sheet.
As it known to all, AI has swept through the world these years and caused great effects on the labor market. Many works have been taken by AI and robots and lead to undesirable raise in joblessness rate.Since robots have long endurance and are more flexible than humans, a large number of martial works have been replaced, not to mention the emerging driverless cars, which do great harm to taxi drivers. Rather than basic abilities, companies are calling for those who have creative and critical thinking.
Being abroad and at home have totally different working environments, ranging from job requirements and job supply. For example, the programming in film festival isn’t mature in our country, while Europe has a prominent position in this area, providing more chances and opportunities for those who study this kind of knowledge. It’s just that the needs cannot be met. Other people may go abroad to work because they want to explore more possibilities in their life and feel the atmosphere, customs and culture of different countries, while work is not their only goal, also life. Some may prefer the education method abroad, hoping to provide a better learning environment for their children, so they go abroad to work and find chances to settle.All in all, since transportation has been more convenient than ever, it’s easier for people to go abroad to work.
As young adults, our first need is to find out where our interests are. I always believe that a person with interest, and keep a developing his interest will have a position in the job market.
I’m sorry but I didn’t notice the given topic🥲 when I wrote this, so this passage is nothing to do with coding. Who needs prompts?! Write about anything you want !! I’m sorry but I didn’t notice the given topic🥲 when I wrote this, so this passage is nothing to do with coding. Who needs prompts?! Write about anything you want !!
I’ve been feeling very tired due to loads of work these days. more formal: "due to a heavy workload" or "due to a great deal of work these days" or "due to an excessive amount of work these days". I’ve been feeling very tired due to loads of work these days. more formal: "due to a heavy workload" or "due to a great deal of work these days" or "due to an excessive amount of work these days".
Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to a research. "research" is non-count so you don't need the indefinite article. Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to a research. "research" is non-count so you don't need the indefinite article.
Doing research and writing paper is not that fun, I have to read many foreign literature and thesis, which almost drive me crazy. writing "papers" (count noun) Change the comma after "fun" to a period to avoid a 'comma splice' (a type of run-on sentence). "literature" is non-count so you need "a lot of" instead of "many". The negative would be "much". "thesis" is a count noun and the plural is "theses". last part: " ..., which nearly drives me crazy." Doing research and writing paper is not that fun, I have to read many foreign literature and thesis, which almost drive me crazy. writing "papers" (count noun) Change the comma after "fun" to a period to avoid a 'comma splice' (a type of run-on sentence). "literature" is non-count so you need "a lot of" instead of "many". The negative would be "much". "thesis" is a count noun and the plural is "theses". last part: " ..., which nearly drives me crazy."
I always buy new clothes and go out for a big meal to cheer myself up.
Learning English is quite interesting for me, but I just hate the quizzes and competitions. Yes. I would omit "just" here. Learning English is quite interesting for me, but I just hate the quizzes and competitions. Yes. I would omit "just" here.
I know both of them are good chance to show talents, but does the questions do serve for that goal? Try something like "I know that quizzes and competitions can be used to show one's talent, but is that really the goal?" I'm not sure exactly what you mean here, so I am guessing. I know both of them are good chance to show talents, but does the questions do serve for that goal? Try something like "I know that quizzes and competitions can be used to show one's talent, but is that really the goal?" I'm not sure exactly what you mean here, so I am guessing.
Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my test-tasking skills and get familiar with the text structure. Instead of "ensure" I recommend "improve". Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my test-tasking skills and get familiar with the text structure. Instead of "ensure" I recommend "improve".
The competition I’m preparing for includes two writing parts.
One is based on the diagram and data provided, and another is kind of argumentation. "a" kind of argumentation (This sounds so difficult!) One is based on the diagram and data provided, and another is kind of argumentation. "a" kind of argumentation (This sounds so difficult!)
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An English-language magazine has asked readers to write an article aimed at young adults about trends in today's working world.
You decide to send in an article discussing work in your country today, and the reasons why some people go abroad to work. reasons "that" instead of reasons "why" You decide to send in an article discussing work in your country today, and the reasons why some people go abroad to work. reasons "that" instead of reasons "why"
Write the essay in at least 160 words on the answer sheet.
As it known to all, AI has swept through the world these years and caused great effects on the labor market. Complete change of topic here. "As is known to all ..." As it known to all, AI has swept through the world these years and caused great effects on the labor market. Complete change of topic here. "As is known to all ..."
Many works have been taken by AI and robots and lead to undesirable raise in joblessness rate. Many "jobs". "Work" in this context is non-count. Many works have been taken by AI and robots and lead to undesirable raise in joblessness rate. Many "jobs". "Work" in this context is non-count.
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Unfortunately, I need to stop and I know I've probably made too many edits.
Your writing is very good and I'm just making comments for your consideration.
Please review count vs non-count nouns.
I'm sorry I am not able to finish editing at this moment, but I think I probably already gave you too much and I am very sorry if I overwhelmed you. It's best to work on one thing at a time.
Please know that your writing is very good and you have a talent for this.
I hope you write more soon!
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I’m sorry but I didn’t notice the given topic🥲 when I wrote this, so this passage ihas nothing to do with coding.
I’m sorry but I didn’t notice the given topic🥲 when I wrote this, so this passage has nothing to do with coding.
I’ve been feeling very tired due to loads of work these days.
Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to a research.
Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to research.
Doing research and writing papers is not that fun, as I have to read manya lot of foreign literature and thesies, which almost drives me crazy.
Doing research and writing papers is not that fun, as I have to read a lot of foreign literature and theses, which almost drives me crazy.
"literature" is uncountable so it doesn't work with "many." However, "theses" is countable, so you can't use "much" either. "A lot of" works with both 👍
Using "drives" makes it refer to the act of "reading" that drives you crazy instead of the literature and theses. This sounds more natural.
If you want to specifically say that the literature and theses themselves drive you crazy, I would say "...as I have to read a lot of foreign literature and theses that almost drive me crazy."
I always buy new clothes and go out for a big meal to cheer myself up.
Learning English is quite interesting for me, but I just hate the quizzes and competitions.
I know both of them are a good chance to show talentsoff your knowledge, but does the questions do serve for that goal?
I know both of them are a good chance to show off your knowledge, but do the questions serve that goal?
or "abilities"
"talent" is more used to refer to a capability that you're born with, or something you're naturally good at, rather than a skill or knowledge that is acquired by studying and practice
I’m not sure.
Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my test-tasking skills andre up to par and to get familiar with the text structure.
Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my test-tasking skills are up to par and to get familiar with the text structure.
When using "ensure" you always have to include what exactly it is you're ensuring.
other options: "ensure my test-taking skills are adequate"
"to refresh my test-taking skills"
Omitting the second "to" in "to get" is allowable grammatically, but in this instance it's easier to parse the sentence if you leave "to" in, otherwise it sounds like "and get familiar" is part of the "are up to par" sub-predicate
The competition I’m preparing for includes two writing parts.
One is based on the diagram and data provided, and another is a kind of argumentation. One is based on the diagram and data provided, and another is a kind of argumentation.
Let me show you one of these topics:)
Let me show you one of the topics:)
An English-language magazine has asked readers to write an article aimed at young adults about trends in today's working world.
You decide to send in an article discussing work in your country today, and the reasons why some people go abroad to work.
Write the essay in at least 160 words on the answer sheet.
As its known to all, AI has swept through the world these past years and caused great effects on the labor market.
As is known to all, AI has swept through the world these past years and caused great effects on the labor market.
Ok, but I think "and greatly affected the labor market." might be more natural
Manyuch works haves been taken by AI and robots and this leads to an undesirable raise in joblessness ratethe rate of unemployment.
Much work has been taken by AI and robots and this leads to an undesirable raise in the rate of unemployment.
"Many works" would refer to physically made works such as art, literature, buildings, etc.
Since robots have longgreat endurance and are more flexible than humans, a large numberamount of martial works haves been replaced, not to mention the emerging driverless cars, which do great harm to taxi drivers.
Since robots have great endurance and are more flexible than humans, a large amount of martial work has been replaced, not to mention the emerging driverless cars, which do great harm to taxi drivers.
You can say someone "endures for a long time" but you can't say "long endurance."
Rather than basic abilities, cCompanies are calling for those who have a creative and critical way of thinking, rather than basic abilities.
Companies are calling for those who have a creative and critical way of thinking, rather than basic abilities.
or "those who think creatively and critically."
"Rather than basic abilities, companies" can at first be misinterpreted as saying "Instead of basic abilities calling for them, companies are," so it's better with a clearer word order
Being aAbroad and at home havthere are totally different working environments, ranging from job requirements andto job supply.
Abroad and at home there are totally different working environments, ranging from job requirements to job supply.
For example, the programming in film festival isn’t mature in our country, while Europe has a prominent position in this area, providing more chances and opportunities for those who study this kind of knowledgesubject.
For example, the programming in film festival isn’t mature in our country, while Europe has a prominent position in this area, providing more chances and opportunities for those who study this kind of subject.
I'm not sure if it's because I don't know much about film, but I'm not sure what "programming in film festival" is. Did you mean something like "the industry of programming in film"?
It’s just that the needs cannot be met.
Other people may go abroad to work because they want to explore more possibilities in their life, and feel the atmosphere, customs and cultures of different countries, while work is not their only goal, also lifebut the enrichment of their lives as well.
Other people may go abroad to work because they want to explore more possibilities in their life, and feel the atmosphere, customs and cultures of different countries, while work is not their only goal, but the enrichment of their lives as well.
Some may prefer the education method abroad, hoping to provide a better learning environment for their children, so they go abroad to work and find chances to settle.
Some may prefer the education abroad, hoping to provide a better learning environment for their children, so they go abroad to work and find chances to settle.
All in all, since transportation has becomen more convenient than ever, it’s easier for people to go abroad to work.
All in all, since transportation has become more convenient than ever, it’s easier for people to go abroad to work.
As young adults, ourthe first needthing we need to do is to find out where our interests are.
As young adults, the first thing we need to do is to find out where our interests are.
I always believe that a person with interest, andwho keep as developing his interest, will have a position in the job market.
I always believe that a person with interest, who keeps developing his interest, will have a position in the job market.
I think "I've always believed," "I will always believe," or just "I [truly] believe" may be better... "I always believe" sounds a bit off but I'm not sure why.
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Great writing overall.
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I’m sorry but I didn’t notice the given topic🥲 when I wrote this, so this passage is nothing to do with coding.
I’ve been feeling very tired due to loads of work these days.
Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to a research.
Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to research.
Doing research and writing papers is not that fun, I have to read many foreign literaturetexts and thesies, which almost drive me crazy.
Doing research and writing papers is not that fun, I have to read many foreign texts and theses, which drive me crazy.
Thesis plural is theses - not many English natives would get this so don't worry!
I always buy new clothes and go out for a big meal to cheer myself up.
Learning English is quite interesting for me, but I just hate the quizzes and competitions.
I know both of them are good chance to show my talents, but does the questions do serve for is, is that my goal?
I know both of them are good chance to show my talents, but the question is, is that my goal?
Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my test-tasking skillsexam technique is up to scratch and get familiar with the text structure.
Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my exam technique is up to scratch and get familiar with the text structure.
The competition I’m preparing for includes two writing parts.
One is based on the diagram and data provided, and another is kind ofcrafting an argumentation.
One is based on the diagram and data provided, and another is crafting an argument.
Let me show you one of these topics:)
An English-language magazine has asked readers to write an article aimed at young adults about trends in today's working world.
You decide to send in an article discussing work in your country today, and the reasons why some people go abroad to work.
Write the essay in at least 160 words on the answer sheet.
As it known to all, AI has swept through the world thesein recent years and caused great effects on the labor market.
As it known to all, AI has swept through the world in recent years and caused great effects on the labor market.
Many workjobs have been taken by AI and robots and this has lead to an undesirable raise in joblessnessthe unemployment rate.
Many jobs have been taken by AI and robots and this has lead to an undesirable rise in the unemployment rate.
Since robots have long endurance and are more flexible than humans, a large number of martial worknual jobs have been replaced, not to mention the emerging driverless cars, which do great harm to taxi drivers.
Since robots have long endurance and are more flexible than humans, a large number of manual jobs have been replaced, not to mention the emerging driverless cars, which do great harm to taxi drivers.
Rather than basic abilities, companies are calling for those who have creative and critical thinking.
For example, the programming in film festival isn’t matureTV and film industries aren't well-established in our country, while Europe has a prominent position in this area, providing moregreater chances and opportunities for those who study this kind of knowledgefield.
For example, TV and film industries aren't well-established in our country, while Europe has a prominent position in this area, providing greater chances and opportunities for those who study this field.
It’s just that the needs cannot be met.
Other people may go abroad to work because they want to explore more possibilities in their life and feel the atmosphere, customs and culture of different countries, while work is not their only goal, also life.life is also important to them.
Other people may go abroad to work because they want to explore more possibilities in their life and feel the atmosphere, customs and culture of different countries, work is not their only goal, life is also important to them.
I always believe that a person with interestho has an interest (in their field of work), and keep as developing histheir interest will always have a position in the job market.
I always believe that a person who has an interest (in their field of work), and keeps developing their interest will always have a position in the job market.
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Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to a research.
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Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to a research. "research" is non-count so you don't need the indefinite article. Despite my schoolwork, I have to divert my energy to a research. "research" is non-count so you don't need the indefinite article. |
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Doing research and writing paper is not that fun, I have to read many foreign literature and thesis, which almost drive me crazy.
Doing research and writing papers is not that fun, I have to read many foreign Thesis plural is theses - not many English natives would get this so don't worry!
Doing research and writing papers is not that fun, as I have to read "literature" is uncountable so it doesn't work with "many." However, "theses" is countable, so you can't use "much" either. "A lot of" works with both 👍 Using "drives" makes it refer to the act of "reading" that drives you crazy instead of the literature and theses. This sounds more natural. If you want to specifically say that the literature and theses themselves drive you crazy, I would say "...as I have to read a lot of foreign literature and theses that almost drive me crazy." Doing research and writing paper is not that fun, I have to read many foreign literature and thesis, which almost drive me crazy. writing "papers" (count noun) Change the comma after "fun" to a period to avoid a 'comma splice' (a type of run-on sentence). "literature" is non-count so you need "a lot of" instead of "many". The negative would be "much". "thesis" is a count noun and the plural is "theses". last part: " ..., which nearly drives me crazy." Doing research and writing paper is not that fun, I have to read many foreign literature and thesis, which almost drive me crazy. writing "papers" (count noun) Change the comma after "fun" to a period to avoid a 'comma splice' (a type of run-on sentence). "literature" is non-count so you need "a lot of" instead of "many". The negative would be "much". "thesis" is a count noun and the plural is "theses". last part: " ..., which nearly drives me crazy." |
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Learning English is quite interesting for me, but I just hate the quizzes and competitions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Learning English is quite interesting for me, but I just hate the quizzes and competitions. Yes. I would omit "just" here. Learning English is quite interesting for me, but I just hate the quizzes and competitions. Yes. I would omit "just" here. |
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I know both of them are good chance to show talents, but does the questions do serve for that goal?
I know both of them are good chance to show my talents, but
I know both of them are a good chance to show or "abilities" "talent" is more used to refer to a capability that you're born with, or something you're naturally good at, rather than a skill or knowledge that is acquired by studying and practice I know both of them are good chance to show talents, but does the questions do serve for that goal? Try something like "I know that quizzes and competitions can be used to show one's talent, but is that really the goal?" I'm not sure exactly what you mean here, so I am guessing. I know both of them are good chance to show talents, but does the questions do serve for that goal? Try something like "I know that quizzes and competitions can be used to show one's talent, but is that really the goal?" I'm not sure exactly what you mean here, so I am guessing. |
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Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my test-tasking skills and get familiar with the text structure.
Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my
Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my test-tasking skills a When using "ensure" you always have to include what exactly it is you're ensuring. other options: "ensure my test-taking skills are adequate" "to refresh my test-taking skills" Omitting the second "to" in "to get" is allowable grammatically, but in this instance it's easier to parse the sentence if you leave "to" in, otherwise it sounds like "and get familiar" is part of the "are up to par" sub-predicate Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my test-tasking skills and get familiar with the text structure. Instead of "ensure" I recommend "improve". Having said that, I’m still going to do some sample papers to ensure my test-tasking skills and get familiar with the text structure. Instead of "ensure" I recommend "improve". |
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As it known to all, AI has swept through the world these years and caused great effects on the labor market.
As it known to all, AI has swept through the world
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Many works have been taken by AI and robots and lead to undesirable raise in joblessness rate.
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M "Many works" would refer to physically made works such as art, literature, buildings, etc. Many works have been taken by AI and robots and lead to undesirable raise in joblessness rate. Many "jobs". "Work" in this context is non-count. Many works have been taken by AI and robots and lead to undesirable raise in joblessness rate. Many "jobs". "Work" in this context is non-count. |
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Since robots have long endurance and are more flexible than humans, a large number of martial works have been replaced, not to mention the emerging driverless cars, which do great harm to taxi drivers.
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Other people may go abroad to work because they want to explore more possibilities in their life and feel the atmosphere, customs and culture of different countries, while work is not their only goal, also life.
Other people may go abroad to work because they want to explore more possibilities in their life and feel the atmosphere, customs and culture of different countries,
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All in all, since transportation has been more convenient than ever, it’s easier for people to go abroad to work.
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I always believe that a person with interest, and keep a developing his interest will have a position in the job market.
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