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Human has very variety of addictions, for example, alcohol, cigarettes, porn, social media...those are very common.
Personally, I have been addicted to mint for a while.
I use toothpaste with a strong mint flavor, eat a lot of Mentos and Airwaves. Although you might think it is just a personal preference, I do believe it is an addiction for me because I would feel a bit anxious if I couldn't have mint products at hand.
I have read a book about addiction, it said that humans become addicted to something because of a feedback loop, and mint does give me that; the strong flavor and the textures of mint candies create strong feedback in my brain.
I should better quit it, after all, eating too much mint might not be good for my stomach.

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I have read a book about addiction, it said that humans become addicted to something because of a feedback loop, and mint does give me that; the strong flavor and the textures of mint candies create strong feedback in my brain.

I should better quit it, after all, eating too much mint might not be good for my stomach.

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Personally, I have been addicted to mint for a while.

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I should better quit it, after all, eating too much mint might not be good for my stomach.


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You could also say: I should quit OR I better quit eating mint. The last phrasing is a very casual way to express it.

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I have read a book about addiction, it said that humans become addicted to something because of a feedback loop, and mint does give me that; the strong flavor and the textures of mint candies create strong feedback in my brain.


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I have read a book about addiction, it said that humans become addicted to something because of a feedback loop, and mint does give me that; the strong flavor and the textures of mint candies create a strong feedback loop in my brain. I have read a book about addiction, it said that humans become addicted to something because of a feedback loop, and mint does give me that; the strong flavor and the textures of mint candies create a strong feedback loop in my brain.

Human has very variety of addictions, for example, alcohol, cigarettes, porn, social media...those are very common.


Human has veryPeople have a wide variety of addictions, for example, alcohol, cigarettes, porn, social media...thoese are very common. People have a wide variety of addictions, for example, alcohol, cigarettes, porn, social media...these are very common.

social media...these are very common. Breaking up the sentence with the ... is definitely something I would do as a native speaker, but I also know that using it is a very casual way of writing. In formal writing, I would say "cigarettes, porn, and social media. These are very common."

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Personally, I have been addicted to mint for a while.


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Personally, I have been addicted to mint for a while. Personally, I have been addicted to mint for a while.

lol, this was such an unexpected turn after "alcohol, cigarettes, and porn" xDD

Personally, I have been addicted to mint-flavored candies for a while. Personally, I have been addicted to mint-flavored candies for a while.

NOTE: If you write "mint" most people will think of the plant Mentha spicata or Mentha × piperita.

I use toothpaste with a strong mint flavor, eat a lot of Mentos and Airwaves.


I use toothpaste with a strong mint flavor, and eat a lot of Mentos and Airwaves. I use toothpaste with a strong mint flavor and eat a lot of Mentos and Airwaves.

I use toothpaste with a strong mint flavor, and eat a lot of Mentos and Airwaves. I use toothpaste with a strong mint flavor and eat a lot of Mentos and Airwaves.

I use toothpaste with a strong mint flavor, and eat a lot of Mentos and Airwaves candied gums. I use toothpaste with a strong mint flavor, and eat a lot of Mentos and Airwaves candied gums.

Although you might think it is just a personal preference, I do believe it is an addiction for me because I would feel a bit anxious if I couldn't have mint products at hand.


Although you might think it is just a personal preference, I do believe it is an addiction for me because I would. I feel a bit anxious if I couldan't have mint products aton hand. Although you might think it is just a personal preference, I do believe it is an addiction for me. I feel a bit anxious if I can't have mint products on hand.

I would feel a bit anxious if I couldn't have - for some reason this sounds unnatural to me, but I can't put a finger on why.

Although you might think it is just a personal preference, I do believethink it is an addiction for me because I would feel a bit anxious if I couldidn't have mint products at hand. Although you might think it is just personal preference, I do think it is an addiction for me because I would feel a bit anxious if I didn't have mint products at hand.

Although you might think it is just a personal preference, I do believe it is an addiction for me because I would feel a bit anxious if I couldon't have any mint products at hand. Although you might think it is just a personal preference, I do believe it is an addiction for me because I would feel a bit anxious if I don't have any mint products at hand.

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