Dec. 30, 2024
A brief video of the hike near Dongqian Lake
I just uploaded a short video about the hike I had last Saturday near Dongqian Lake: https://youtube.com/shorts/srTSk8m8FKU
It's also my second dubbed video.
I know you're all nice people, but please tell me which parts I didn't pronounce very well. I really appreciate any help you can provide.
There are just a few words because I still don't dare to say more in videos. 🤣
我刚刚上传了一个关于上周六我在东钱湖附近徒步旅行的小视频。https://youtube.com/shorts/srTSk8m8FKU
这也是我的第二个配音视频。
我知道你们都很友好，但请告诉我哪些部分我的发音不太好。先行谢过啦！
只有几句话，因为我仍然不敢在视频中说更多🤣
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A brief video of the hike near Dongqian Lake
I just uploaded a short video about the hike I had last Saturday near Dongqian Lake: https://youtube.com/shorts/srTSk8m8FKU It's also my second dubbed video.
I know you're all nice people, but please tell me which partwords I didn't pronounce very well.
I know you're all nice people, but please tell me which words I didn't pronounce very well.
I really appreciate any help you can provide.
There are just a few words because I still don't dare to say more in videos.
There are just a few words because I still don't dare to say in videos.
🤣
Dec. 31, 2024
Thank you so much!
Happy New Year!
I know you're all nice people, but please tell me which partsword I didn't pronounce very well.
I know you're all nice people, but please tell me which word I didn't pronounce very well.
I really appreciate any help you can provide.
There are just a few wordsI didn't say much because I still don't dare to say more in videos.
I didn't say much because I still don't dare to say more in videos.
🤣
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I understood what you said in the video. You pronounced the words correctly.
A brief video of the hike (a hike) near Dongqian Lake A brief video of the hike (a hike) near Dongqian Lake
“The hike” is fine if you assume your audience already knows about the hike before reading this post. “A hike” is better if some of your readers might not have been aware of it beforehand. “My hike” would also work well, although it would imply that you’ve only hiked there once. “My recent hike” would remove this implication.
I just uploaded a short video about the hike I had last Saturday near Dongqian Lake: https://youtube.com/shorts/srTSk8m8FKU It's also my second dubbed video.
I know you're all nice people, but please tell me which parts I didn't pronounce very well.
I really appreciate any help you can provide.
There are just a few words because I still don't dare to say more in videos.
Feedback
I had a little trouble hearing your voice over the background music, but in general your pronunciation really is quite good. If I must (reluctantly) pick out some areas for improvement, you could work on these:
1) “thought” – the ‘th’ sounds a bit like an ‘s’ as in “sought”, although it could just be the recording,
2) “tree” – the ‘ee’ in “tree” sounds a bit like ‘ay’ in “tray” to my American ears. Perhaps it would sound just fine to a British person.
Dec. 31, 2024
Thank you so much!
I'll notice these two pronunciation details next time.
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A brief video of the hike near Dongqian Lake A brief video of the hike (a hike) near Dongqian Lake A brief video of the hike (a hike) near Dongqian Lake “The hike” is fine if you assume your audience already knows about the hike before reading this post. “A hike” is better if some of your readers might not have been aware of it beforehand. “My hike” would also work well, although it would imply that you’ve only hiked there once. “My recent hike” would remove this implication. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I know you're all nice people, but please tell me which parts I didn't pronounce very well.
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There are just a few words because I still don't dare to say more in videos.
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