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Act Like A Detective (Part Two)

I asked the boy tell me the incident. He insisted that it was the girl ruined his uniform, while the girl inisted she was innocent. I asked the boy where was the uniform. He said that it was torn by his boy classmates. I told him that since the evidence was absent, he needed some witness. Then four of his classmates came along with him into the office. They all insited that it was the gril ruined the uniform as well. I told them what they said would be reported to the director, hence, if they lied, the accuser would be regarded as unhonest. They nodded. I didn't believe what they had said, so I told them I would go to look at the footage. Unfortunately, I was told the the footage in classroom was off. So, it would be a cold case. However, I really wanted to punish the boy because he was too naughty and had broken so many rules of school that brought too much trouble to me and Miss li. After class, I got an idea that I called the moniter's father that the emojis and voice messages were sexual harassment. To punish the boy harshly, he needed to asked told the director the situation and show him the pohotos and videos I took, then talked about his request.
A few minutes later, I got a call from the director. I told him what happened and my thought. He told me to report the incident to the headmaster, after that, he would connect the headmaster. To my surprise, the headmaster told me that the moniter was quite close with the boy. She also said that we needed to figure out what had happened, and the two brought phone to school had violated the rules, so we should deal with this as well. She wasn't interested in the sexual harassment, and told me to report the incident to the praepostor who in charge of grade 8. The director talked about the incident with me through, he asked me to send him the evidence, and told me that I could tell the situation with the deputy headmaster.
I foud out that we had no evidence of the uniform thing, so I called Ms. Li immediately. I told her the idea that we should inquire the four witness separatly in case they changed their words while they had heard what the others said. And I also told her what the director and headmaster said. I was so exciting that I thoght the boy would be punished harshly in the end. At least the boy's phone would be kept by his Ms. Li for a few weeks, because the boy always played his phone in the class, but Ms. Li didn't dare to confiscate because she was afrade of the boy couldn't control himself and do something dangerous.
When I woke up this morning, I was pessimistic. I knew what the school really was and how it was going on, what I had done and gonna to do would fail. Nonetheless, I inquired the students in the morning. To my surprise, what they said was quite the same, it was like they were stayed at the same place that day and remembered everything clearly. I didn't believe them at all, but what they said was bad for the moniter, so I asked her to find some witness to support her, especially the students from other class. The praepostor didn't show up this morning, so we daleyed to report to him.
A few minutes before the last daytime class, Ms. Li told me to go to the director's office with the monitor. When I arrived, the director was talking with the boy, then he asked the girl to come nearby. I heard some words of the director, then I wanted to laguh. He emphasised the two students were good friends, the incident was a big joke. He also told the boy don't be so stupied to be abetted by the other boys again. He asked the boy the apologise to me and the monitor and write two guarantee letters as well. He even didn't mention the boy's phone. I told him that in case of the girl being harassed agian, we should deal with the boy's phone. Then he told Ms. Li to handle this,
Holy shit! I was so angery and so disappointed at the leaders. They knew all the problems in this school, but they chose to do nothing. I would never stay in the system anymore when this trem over.

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Act Like A Detective (Part Two)

I asked the boy tell me his side of the incident.

He insisted that it was the girl who ruined his uniform, while the girl inisted she was innocent.

I asked the boy where was the uniform was.

He said that it washad been torn by his boy classmates.

I told him that, since the evidence was absent, he needed some sort of witness.

Then fFour of his classmates came along with him into the office.

They all insisted that it was the grilirl who had ruined the uniform as well.

I told them what they said would be reported to the director, hence, if they lied, the accuser would be regarded as unhonest's dishonesty would be noted.

They nodded.

I didn't believe what they had said, so I told them I would go to look at the footage.

Unfortunately, I was told the the footagecamera in classroom was off during the incident.

So, it would be a cold case.

However, I really wanted to punish the boy, because he was toso naughty and had broken so many rules of school thatof the school's rules and brought toso much trouble to me and Miss lLi.

After class, I got anhad the idea that I should called the moniteor's father and tell him that the emojis and voice messages were sexual harassment.

好像他不怎么值得这样性骚扰罪名。虽然他很烦人但是他的表现真的等于性骚扰吗?

To punish the boy harshly, he needed to asked toldtell the director of the situation and show him the pohotos and videos I took, then talked about his request.

A few minutes later, I got a call from the director.

I told him what happened and my thoughts.

He told me to report the incident to the headmaster, a. After that, he would conneclet the headmaster deal with it.

To my surprise, the headmaster told me that the moniteor was quite close with the boy.

She also said that we needed to figure out what had happened, and also that the two had brought phones to school and had violated the rules, so we should deal with thisat as well.

She wasn't interested in the sexual harassment, and told me to report the incident to the praepostorefect who in charge of grade 8.

The director talked aboutthrough the incident with me through,, and he asked me to send him the evidence, and told me that I could tellreport the situation withto the deputy headmaster.

I foud outrealized that we had no evidence of the uniform thing, so I called Ms. Li immediately.

I told her themy idea was that we should inquirterrogate the four witnesses separately in case they changed their wordstories whilen they had heard what the others said.

And I also told her what the director and headmaster said.

I was so excited to thingk that I thoght the boy would be punished harshly in the end.

At the very least, the boy's phone would be kept by his Ms. Li for a few weeks, because t. The boy always played on his phone in the class, but Ms. Li didn't dare to confiscate it because she was afraide of the boy couldn't control himself and would do something dangerous.

When I woke up this morning, I was pessimistic.

I knew whathow the school really was and how it was going on, what I had done and gonna to do wouldoperated, my plans thus far were sure to fail.

Nonetheless, I inquirterrogated the students in the morning.

To my surprise, what they said was quite the sameairtight, it was like they were stayed atall in the same place that day and remembered everything clearly.

Maybe they planned their stories out the night before

I didn't believe them at all, but what they said was bad for the monitor's caser, so I asked her to find some witnesses to support her, especially the students from other classes.

The praepostorefect didn't show up this morning, so we daleelayed to reporting to him.

A few minutes before the last daytime class, Ms. Li told me to go to the director's office with the monitor.

When I arrived, the director was talking with the boy, then he asked the girl to come nearbyover to him.

I heard some words of the director, then Iy made me wanted to lagugh.

He emphasised that the two students were good friends, and said that the incident was a big joke.

He also told the boy don'tnot to be so stupied as to be abetted by the other boys again.

He asked the boy the apologise to me and the monitor and write two guaranteeapology letters as well.

I assume it's a "guarantee" that he won't misbehave again?

He even didn't mention the boy's phone.

I told him that in case of the girl beinggets harassed agian, we should deal with the boy's phone.

Then he told Ms. Li to handle this,it.

Holy shit!

I was so angery and so disappointed at the leadersadministration.

They knew all the problems in this school, but they chose to do nothing.

I would neverill not stay in the system anymore when this tremerm is over.

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Wow! Quite a crazy turn of events. Feels like you do more disciplinary and detective work than teaching sometimes. Hope it all gets better.

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kiwy

Oct. 8, 2021

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After class, I got anhad the idea that I should called the moniteor's father and tell him that the emojis and voice messages were sexual harassment.

One of his gif was a boy and a girl laying in bed who were both just wore underwear, and the boy touch the girl's lap. To me, it was really sexual harassment.

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kiwy

Oct. 9, 2021

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He asked the boy the apologise to me and the monitor and write two guaranteeapology letters as well.

Yes, it is quite Chinese.

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kiwy

Oct. 9, 2021

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Yes. What I want is the students study hard and I teach them more. However, when the principles are bad, you can't teach well.

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sivanc

Oct. 9, 2021

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One of his gif was a boy and a girl laying in bed who were both just wore underwear, and the boy touch the girl's lap. To me, it was really sexual harassment.

Oh, yeah, I hope the people in the video were adults? But anyways that's softcore porn and definitely sexual harassment. Anyways, I feel like sometimes you leave important details out of your stories that make them a little hard to follow.

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sivanc

Oct. 9, 2021

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Yes, it is quite Chinese.

I remember a Chinese TV show where they had to do that lol.

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kiwy

Oct. 9, 2021

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Oh, yeah, I hope the people in the video were adults? But anyways that's softcore porn and definitely sexual harassment. Anyways, I feel like sometimes you leave important details out of your stories that make them a little hard to follow.

Because I never patient enough to look back what I have written, so all my entry are drafts.

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kiwy

Oct. 9, 2021

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I remember a Chinese TV show where they had to do that lol.

Guarantee letters guarantee nothing.

Act Like A Detective (Part Two)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I asked the boy tell me the incident.


I asked the boy tell me his side of the incident.

He insisted that it was the girl ruined his uniform, while the girl inisted she was innocent.


He insisted that it was the girl who ruined his uniform, while the girl inisted she was innocent.

I asked the boy where was the uniform.


I asked the boy where was the uniform was.

He said that it was torn by his boy classmates.


He said that it washad been torn by his boy classmates.

I told him that since the evidence was absent, he needed some witness.


I told him that, since the evidence was absent, he needed some sort of witness.

Then four of his classmates came along with him into the office.


Then fFour of his classmates came along with him into the office.

They all insited that it was the gril ruined the uniform as well.


They all insisted that it was the grilirl who had ruined the uniform as well.

I told them what they said would be reported to the director, hence, if they lied, the accuser would be regarded as unhonest.


I told them what they said would be reported to the director, hence, if they lied, the accuser would be regarded as unhonest's dishonesty would be noted.

They nodded.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't believe what they had said, so I told them I would go to look at the footage.


I didn't believe what they had said, so I told them I would go to look at the footage.

Unfortunately, I was told the the footage in classroom was off.


Unfortunately, I was told the the footagecamera in classroom was off during the incident.

So, it would be a cold case.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, I really wanted to punish the boy because he was too naughty and had broken so many rules of school that brought too much trouble to me and Miss li.


However, I really wanted to punish the boy, because he was toso naughty and had broken so many rules of school thatof the school's rules and brought toso much trouble to me and Miss lLi.

After class, I got an idea that I called the moniter's father that the emojis and voice messages were sexual harassment.


After class, I got anhad the idea that I should called the moniteor's father and tell him that the emojis and voice messages were sexual harassment.

好像他不怎么值得这样性骚扰罪名。虽然他很烦人但是他的表现真的等于性骚扰吗?

To punish the boy harshly, he needed to asked told the director the situation and show him the pohotos and videos I took, then talked about his request.


To punish the boy harshly, he needed to asked toldtell the director of the situation and show him the pohotos and videos I took, then talked about his request.

A few minutes later, I got a call from the director.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I told him what happened and my thought.


I told him what happened and my thoughts.

He told me to report the incident to the headmaster, after that, he would connect the headmaster.


He told me to report the incident to the headmaster, a. After that, he would conneclet the headmaster deal with it.

To my surprise, the headmaster told me that the moniter was quite close with the boy.


To my surprise, the headmaster told me that the moniteor was quite close with the boy.

She also said that we needed to figure out what had happened, and the two brought phone to school had violated the rules, so we should deal with this as well.


She also said that we needed to figure out what had happened, and also that the two had brought phones to school and had violated the rules, so we should deal with thisat as well.

She wasn't interested in the sexual harassment, and told me to report the incident to the praepostor who in charge of grade 8.


She wasn't interested in the sexual harassment, and told me to report the incident to the praepostorefect who in charge of grade 8.

The director talked about the incident with me through, he asked me to send him the evidence, and told me that I could tell the situation with the deputy headmaster.


The director talked aboutthrough the incident with me through,, and he asked me to send him the evidence, and told me that I could tellreport the situation withto the deputy headmaster.

I foud out that we had no evidence of the uniform thing, so I called Ms. Li immediately.


I foud outrealized that we had no evidence of the uniform thing, so I called Ms. Li immediately.

I told her the idea that we should inquire the four witness separatly in case they changed their words while they had heard what the others said.


I told her themy idea was that we should inquirterrogate the four witnesses separately in case they changed their wordstories whilen they had heard what the others said.

And I also told her what the director and headmaster said.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was so exciting that I thoght the boy would be punished harshly in the end.


I was so excited to thingk that I thoght the boy would be punished harshly in the end.

At least the boy's phone would be kept by his Ms. Li for a few weeks, because the boy always played his phone in the class, but Ms. Li didn't dare to confiscate because she was afrade of the boy couldn't control himself and do something dangerous.


At the very least, the boy's phone would be kept by his Ms. Li for a few weeks, because t. The boy always played on his phone in the class, but Ms. Li didn't dare to confiscate it because she was afraide of the boy couldn't control himself and would do something dangerous.

When I woke up this morning, I was pessimistic.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I knew what the school really was and how it was going on, what I had done and gonna to do would fail.


I knew whathow the school really was and how it was going on, what I had done and gonna to do wouldoperated, my plans thus far were sure to fail.

Nonetheless, I inquired the students in the morning.


Nonetheless, I inquirterrogated the students in the morning.

To my surprise, what they said was quite the same, it was like they were stayed at the same place that day and remembered everything clearly.


To my surprise, what they said was quite the sameairtight, it was like they were stayed atall in the same place that day and remembered everything clearly.

Maybe they planned their stories out the night before

I didn't believe them at all, but what they said was bad for the moniter, so I asked her to find some witness to support her, especially the students from other class.


I didn't believe them at all, but what they said was bad for the monitor's caser, so I asked her to find some witnesses to support her, especially the students from other classes.

The praepostor didn't show up this morning, so we daleyed to report to him.


The praepostorefect didn't show up this morning, so we daleelayed to reporting to him.

A few minutes before the last daytime class, Ms. Li told me to go to the director's office with the monitor.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I arrived, the director was talking with the boy, then he asked the girl to come nearby.


When I arrived, the director was talking with the boy, then he asked the girl to come nearbyover to him.

I heard some words of the director, then I wanted to laguh.


I heard some words of the director, then Iy made me wanted to lagugh.

He emphasised the two students were good friends, the incident was a big joke.


He emphasised that the two students were good friends, and said that the incident was a big joke.

He also told the boy don't be so stupied to be abetted by the other boys again.


He also told the boy don'tnot to be so stupied as to be abetted by the other boys again.

He asked the boy the apologise to me and the monitor and write two guarantee letters as well.


He asked the boy the apologise to me and the monitor and write two guaranteeapology letters as well.

I assume it's a "guarantee" that he won't misbehave again?

He even didn't mention the boy's phone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I told him that in case of the girl being harassed agian, we should deal with the boy's phone.


I told him that in case of the girl beinggets harassed agian, we should deal with the boy's phone.

Then he told Ms. Li to handle this,


Then he told Ms. Li to handle this,it.

Holy shit!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was so angery and so disappointed at the leaders.


I was so angery and so disappointed at the leadersadministration.

They knew all the problems in this school, but they chose to do nothing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I would never stay in the system anymore when this trem over.


I would neverill not stay in the system anymore when this tremerm is over.

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