Oct. 7, 2021
Act Like A Detective (Part One)
When the class begun, I received a call from athe monitor's father. He told me that there was a boy in Class 2 harassed his daughter continuoursly during the National Vacation. The cause was the boy accused the girl of ruining his uniform on 28th September, he asked the girl to compensate. But the girl denied the accusation.
On 28th Sept., I was noticed the incident. I told the girl fix it personally, because both Ms. Li and me thought it was a joke between them. The girl told me that she had talked with the vice headmaster about it. So I considered the thing was over. Hence, I was really surprised when I heard the phone. The father told me that he had communicated with the moral director, but the director wasn't at school at that time.
Then I went to the office, the boy was there with Ms. Li. I asked the boy for his phone to check his dialogue with the girl. He didn't hand it to me immediately, even I told him that I was so busy. I checked on his phone, and recorded the dialogue. There were some harassed emojis, and the content of his voices were very harassed as well. I told him that what he did was sexual harassment, it was illegal, expecially the girl is under 14. He was silent.
(I will continue it tomorrow.)
Act Like A Detective (Part One)
When the class beguan, I received a call from athe class monitor's father.
Began is by itself, begun is used like "had begun." Also, if it happened any time but right at the start of class, I would say "After class had begun."
He told me that there was a boy in Class 2 that harassed his daughter continuoursly during the Nnational Vvacation week.
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On the 28th of Sept.ember, I was noticedfied of the incident.
I told the girl fixto clean/mend it phersonally, becauseelf, as both Ms. Li and meI thought it was a joke between them.
"Fix it" could be referring to the situation, clean/mend specifically makes the object the uniform.
The girl told me that she had talked with the vice headmaster about it.
So I considered the thing was over.
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Hence, I was really surprised when I heard the phonefather.
The father told me that he had communicated with the moral director, but the director wasschool counselor, but they weren't at school at that time.
I think a school counselor is probably the closest thing to what you're talking about?
Then I went to the office, and the boy was there with Ms. Li.
I asked the boy for his phone to check his dialoguelook at his voice messages with the girl.
He didn't hand it to me immediately, even though I told him that I was soextremely busy.
I checked on his phone, and recorded the dialogueconversation.
There were some harassedexplicit emojis, and the ctontente of his voices wereas very harassedaggressive as well.
I told him that what he did was sexual harassment, and that it was illegal, exspecially since the girl is under 14.
Were the contents of the messages sexual? If so, maybe change "aggressive" to "suggestive".
He was silent.
(I will continue it tomorrow.)
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Nice writing! Poor situation for the girl though, I hope she's ok. How old is the boy?
Oct. 8, 2021
I told the girl fixto clean/mend it phersonally, becauseelf, as both Ms. Li and meI thought it was a joke between them.
I mean I want her to fix the problem of accusation herself.
Oct. 8, 2021
The father told me that he had communicated with the moral director, but the director wasschool counselor, but they weren't at school at that time.
I am not sure about the teaching system of China, there are so many departments that can't be equivalent with American.
Oct. 8, 2021
I told him that what he did was sexual harassment, and that it was illegal, exspecially since the girl is under 14.
I didn't hear all of the voice messages, but what I heard were all full of swearing.
Oct. 8, 2021
I don't know his exact age, I think is about 14. The girl didn't feel uncomfortable at all about the aggressive conversation, and they were friends before. So there are so many problems in our education.
Oct. 8, 2021
那他们的关系还好吗？如果voice message没有什么sexual的内容，怎么可以这样分类呢？
Oct. 8, 2021
I mean I want her to fix the problem of accusation herself.
Oh, then for the same reason I would switch to "resolve/solve"
Oct. 8, 2021
那他们的关系还好吗？如果voice message没有什么sexual的内容，怎么可以这样分类呢？
They were close before, but not the kind of couple. I didn't listen all of the voice message, so I don't know. Why I emphasis it was sexual harassment is it was severe enough to punish the boy, otherwise, I had no idea how to do.
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When the class begun, I received a call from athe monitor's father. When the class beg Began is by itself, begun is used like "had begun." Also, if it happened any time but right at the start of class, I would say "After class had begun." |
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He told me that there was a boy in Class 2 harassed his daughter continuoursly during the National Vacation. He told me that there was a boy in Class 2 that harassed his daughter continuou |
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The cause was the boy accused the girl of ruining his uniform on 28th September, he asked the girl to compensate. The |
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But the girl denied the accusation.
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On 28th Sept., I was noticed the incident. On the 28th of Sept |
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I told the girl fix it personally, because both Ms. Li and me thought it was a joke between them. I told the girl "Fix it" could be referring to the situation, clean/mend specifically makes the object the uniform. |
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The girl told me that she had talked with the vice headmaster about it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I considered the thing was over. So I considered the thing Connect to previous sentence with comma |
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Hence, I was really surprised when I heard the phone. Hence, I was really surprised when I heard the |
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The father told me that he had communicated with the moral director, but the director wasn't at school at that time. The father told me that he had communicated with the I think a school counselor is probably the closest thing to what you're talking about? |
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Then I went to the office, the boy was there with Ms. Li. Then I went to the office, and the boy was there with Ms. Li. |
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I asked the boy for his phone to check his dialogue with the girl. I asked the boy for his phone to |
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He didn't hand it to me immediately, even I told him that I was so busy. He didn't hand it to me immediately, even though I told him that I was |
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I checked on his phone, and recorded the dialogue. I checked on his phone, and recorded the |
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There were some harassed emojis, and the content of his voices were very harassed as well. There were some |
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I told him that what he did was sexual harassment, it was illegal, expecially the girl is under 14. I told him that what he did was sexual harassment, and that it was illegal, e Were the contents of the messages sexual? If so, maybe change "aggressive" to "suggestive". |
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