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"Accomplishments" is typically used in the plural sense, even for one subject. To use it in the singular sense, you need to reference the specific accomplishment you want to refer to.

So I’m so would be glad if you let me to know yourcould provide feedback after proofreading.

It is still in the hypothetical future here, speaking about others proofreading your work, so you need the conditional "I would be glad"

I have loved to working out since I was little, and I became a member of the track and filed club at my junior high school which. This club has more than 50 members thatwho practice before school for an hour and again after school for 2-3 hours, 5 days a week.

I split this into two sentences for easier comprehension. Referencing people tends to use "who" instead of "that"

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Even teacher said “you don’t have any talented” to me, I always quarter finals by my efforthough my coach told me, “You don’t have any talent,” I always reached the quarter finals.

A teacher for sports is typically referred to as a coach rather than a teacher.

By the time the big competition ended, I had grownprogressed/advanced so much that I was invited to join three high schools, all famous for their track and field programs.

Increasing in a skill should be described as progressing or advancing.

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“Thank you for reading “ is a sentence fragment

I’d like to write my accomplishment essay for my homework , but I am not sure how to create istart.

So I’m would be so glad if you could let me to know your feedback after proofreading it.

I have loved to work out since I was little and became a member of the track and fileld club at my junior high school which. The club has more than 50 members that practice before school for an hour and after school for 2-3 hours, 5 days a week.

Your sentence was very long. Two shorter sentences are better.

I was athe slowest runner ion my team, so I practiced an hour every day after I’m back returned home.

Or you could say, “… after I came back home.”

Even teacher said to me, “you don’t have any talented” to me, I always.” I always reached the quarter finals bythrough my efforts.

I don’t understand, “Even teacher said “you don’t have talented” “