Dec. 28, 2021
Today I was hit by the door of a car. I walked on the sidewalk and I was looking for a store to buy a new broom. Suddenly, I something hit my head. Someone who parked his car on the sidewalk didn't wacth and hit me with his door as I was passing by.
It hurt me so bad, fortunately it didn't bled. The owner of the car get out and check me if it was bleeding. And he apologised. It all happened so fast. I was in a hurry and as it didn't bled I just go to the store.
When I arrived at home, my head still hurt, and my sister who is a doctor had a look at it. It bumped a little and she told me to put a glass on it.
What a day.
Why do some people do not pay attention when they are using the public highway. I always make sure to not hurt anyone, but it seems that it is not the same way for others.
I walkeds walking on the sidewalk and I was, looking for a store to buy a new broom.
Suddenly, I something hit my head.
I think this what you meant
Someone who parked his car on the sidewalk didwasn't wacthpaying attention and hit me with his door as I was passing by.
Just making it sound natural :)
It hurt me so bad, but fortunately it didn'tthere wasn't any bleeding.
This is how I would say it
The owner of the car geot out and check med if it (or I) was bleeding.
Past tense of "get" is "got"
I was in a hurry and as it didn't bled, I just gowent to the store.
The past tense is needed here.
When I arrived at home, my head was still hurting, and my sister who is a doctor, had a look at it.
It bumpehad a little protrusion and she told me to put a glass on it.
A "glass"? Do you mean "gauze"?
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Be careful with the present tense and past tense. Overall it's pretty good :)
Accident
Today I was hit by the door of a caa car door.
I walkeds walking on the sidewalk and I was looking for a store to buy a new broom.
Suddenly, I something hit my head.
Someone who had parked his car on the sidewalk didwasn't wacthtching and hit me with his door as I was passing by.
It hurt me so bad, / It hurt a lot, but fortunately it didn't bleed.
The owner of the car geot out and check med if it was bleeding.
And he apologised.
It all happened so fast.
I was in a hurry and as it didn't bled I just gowent to the store.
When I arrived at home, my head still hurt, and my sister who is a doctor had a look at it.
It bumpedThere was a little bump and she told me to put a glassice on it.
What a day.
Why do some people do not pay attention when they are using the public highwayroads.
I always make sure to not to hurt anyone, but it seems that ithis is not the same way for others.
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Glad you're ok and it seems that you didn't get concussed which is the most important thing
Accident
Today I was hit by the door of a caa car door.
I walkeds walking on the sidewalk and I was looking for a store to buy a new broom.
Suddenly, I felt something hit my head.
Someone who had parked his car on the sidewalk didwasn't wacthtching and hit me with his door as I was passing by.
Alternatively, "was not paying attention" instead of "wasn't watching" would also feel more natural to me.
It hurt me so bad,ly, but fortunately itmy head didn't bleed.
"It" was a little vague in this sentence, best to repeat the subject (your head) again for clarity.
The owner of the car geot out and check med if itI was bleeding.
And he apologised.
It all happened so fast.
I was in a hurry and as it didI wasn't bleeding, I just gowent to the store.
When I arrived at home, my head still hurt, and my sister who is a doctor had a look at it.
It bumped a littleThere was a little bump on it and she told me to put a glass on it.
What a day.
Why do some people do not pay attention when they are using the public highway.?
I always make sure to not to hurt anyone, but it seems that it is not the same way for othersothers don't do the same.
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Just some minor mistakes – you write well! Hope your head gets better soon.
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Someone who parked his car on the sidewalk didn't wacth and hit me with his door as I was passing by. Someone who had parked his car on the sidewalk Alternatively, "was not paying attention" instead of "wasn't watching" would also feel more natural to me. Someone who had parked his car on the sidewalk Someone who parked his car on the sidewalk Just making it sound natural :) |
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I was in a hurry and as it didn't bled I just go to the store. I was in a hurry and as I was in a hurry and as it didn't bled I just I was in a hurry and as it didn't bled, I just The past tense is needed here. |
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It bumped a little and she told me to put a glass on it.
It A "glass"? Do you mean "gauze"? |
What a day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Why do some people do not pay attention when they are using the public highway. Why do some people Why do some people |
I always make sure to not hurt anyone, but it seems that it is not the same way for others. I always make sure I always make sure |
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