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April 23, 2022

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Traveling With My Parents

Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang where is a nice place in Korea.

About 20 years ago, we visited here and I had a lot of good memories.

When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before.

We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions.

I hope all of my family members get good memories here.

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Traveling With My Parents

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April 27, 2022

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Traveling With My Parents

Traveling With My Parents


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Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang where is a nice place in Korea.


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Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang, whereich is a nice place in Korea. Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang, which is a nice place in Korea.

About 20 years ago, we visited here and I had a lot of good memories.


About 20 years ago, we visited here and, so I hadve a lot of good memories of the area. About 20 years ago, we visited here, so I have a lot of good memories of the area.

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When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before.


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Or you could say "I found places that I had visited before"

When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before. When I came here again, I could find places I had visited before.

We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions.


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We had tasty foods, and we visited nice tourist attractions. We had tasty food, and we visited nice tourist attractions.

I hope all of my family members get good memories here.


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We usually say "make memories"

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