yesterday
Going to Chapel
Well, I guess I won't live forever.
The longer I live, the more I realize religion has been a part of my life.
It took me 15 years to begin to trust some of what this religion teaches.
Religion has a power to soften people.
It is important to know about your religion because it really helps you understand more about who you are.
I grew up in a Christian family.
I have various versions of the Bible.
Today is Sunday, and my parents are going to a chapel.
I'm about to go to church today.
Sometimes I only read the New Testament.
Praying before going to bed is more likely to help you get a good night's sleep.
Praying to God is one way to open up my heart.
嗯，我想我不会永远活下去。
随着时间的推移，我愈发意识到宗教已经成为我生活的一部分。
我花了 15 年的时间才开始相信这个宗教所传授的一些教义。
宗教具有抚慰人心的力量。
了解自己的宗教信仰是很重要的，因为这确实能帮助你更深入地认识自己。
我成长在一个基督教家庭。
我拥有各种版本的《圣经》。
今天是周日，我的父母要去教堂做礼拜。
今天我也要去教堂。
有时我只读《新约》。
睡前祈祷更有可能让我睡个好觉。
向上帝祈祷是打开我内心世界的一种方式。
Going to Chapel
Well, I guess I won't live forever.
You could also use "I suppose" here.
The longer I live, the more I realize religion has always been a part of my life.
You could also add important, as in: "an important part of my life"
It took me 15 years to begin to trust some of what this religion teaches.
Religion has a power to soften people.
It is important to know about your religion because it really helps you understand more about who you are.
I grew up in a Christian family.
I have various versions of the Bible.
Today is Sunday, and my parents are going to a chapel.
I'm also about to go to church today.
Also --> to link it to your previous sentence.
Sometimes I only read the New Testament.
Praying before going to bed is more likely to help you get a good night's sleep.
Praying to God is one way to open up my heart.
You could also phrase this as: "to open up your heart" if you were proposing it as something anyone could to. This uses the generic "you".
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Well, I guess I won't live forever. Well, I guess I won't live forever. You could also use "I suppose" here. |
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The longer I live, the more I realize religion has been a part of my life. The longer I live, the more I realize religion has always been a part of my life. You could also add important, as in: "an important part of my life" |
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It took me 15 years to begin to trust some of what this religion teaches. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Religion has a power to soften people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is important to know about your religion because it really helps you understand more about who you are. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I grew up in a Christian family. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have various versions of the Bible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is Sunday, and my parents are going to a chapel. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm about to go to church today. I'm also about to go to church today. Also --> to link it to your previous sentence. |
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Sometimes I only read the New Testament. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Praying before going to bed is more likely to help you get a good night's sleep. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Praying to God is one way to open up my heart. Praying to God is one way to open up my heart. You could also phrase this as: "to open up your heart" if you were proposing it as something anyone could to. This uses the generic "you". |
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