You can rent a room for 180$/month. You can rent a room for 180$/month.

This is the capital of the Mari-El rRepublic. This is the capital of the Mari-El Republic.

ThisIt is the capital of the Mari-El republic. It is the capital of the Mari-El republic.

It's not nearclose to Kazan (150 km), and not so faeven further from Moscow (700 km). It's not close to Kazan (150 km), and even further from Moscow (700 km).

I rewrote this sentence. Saying 'not close' instead of 'not near' in this scenario sounds smoother, and I think you meant to say Moscow was farther, so I said 'even further from'.

It's not near Kazan(150km), and not so far from Moscow(700km). It's not near Kazan(150km), and not so far from Moscow(700km).

This is a very charming way of describing where it is, if a little confusing. It seems contradictory, but it also feels like you are playing with our ideas about relative distance.

The name of my city can be translated from a local language liketo Red Town. The name of my city can be translated from a local language to Red Town.

The name of my city can be translated from a local language like as "Red Town". The name of my city can be translated from a local language as "Red Town".

I am from Yoshkar-Ola originally. I am from Yoshkar-Ola.

The population is about 275 ,000. The population is about 275,000.

We have 3 main nationalities: Russian, Mari, and Tatars. We have 3 main nationalities: Russian, Mari, and Tatars.

Some of thenm can speak in the local language. Some of them can speak the local language.

We have a river in the city -called Malaya Koksaga. We have a river in the city called Malaya Koksaga.

I wouldn't use the dash here.

We haveThere is a beautiful bank along this river. There is a beautiful bank along this river.

The city is very ecologically clean because we don't haven't any big chemical plants. The city is very ecologically clean because we don't have any big chemical plants.

The city is very ecologically very clean because we haven't any big chemical plants. The city is ecologically very clean because we haven't any big chemical plants.

So, for British English I believe "We haven't any plants" is fine! For American English (that's me) we add "do" as a conjugated 1st verb when "have" is not being used with a 2nd verb (we haven't eaten) AND needs to be negated. "we don't have any big chemical plants."

The roads are not so good and wethey have a lot of potholes on the surface. The roads are not so good and they have a lot of potholes.

Five years ago or more, we hadidn't students from another countryhave foreign students. Five years ago or more, we didn't have foreign students.

It sounds smoother to say 'foreign students' in my opinion... As an alternative, you can also say 'from other countries'.

Five years ago or more we hadidn't have any students from another country. Five years ago or more we didn't have any students from another country.

Not sure if this is ok in British English.

The cost of other things and services is approximately the same as other cites ofin Russia. The cost of other things and services is approximately the same as other cites in Russia.

The cost of other things and serviceliving is approximately the same as other cites of RussiaRussian cities. The cost of living is approximately the same as other Russian cities.

"Cost of living" is a set phrase we use for this.

I travel to Russia a lot, and our town is very comfortable for a silenquiet life. I travel to Russia a lot, and our town is very comfortable for a quiet life.

I changed 'silent' to 'quiet'. Silent would mean there is absolutely no noise, no wind, no birds...