Jan. 13, 2020
My attention span has always been short, it's hard for me to concentrate on one task. But lately I feel like it's starting to hinder my language study.
I only did like 10 minutes of Gaelic yesterday before I jumped back to Italian. I also couldn't sit through even one episode of Italian podcast. I feel like the fact that I was still feeling a bit unwell was also making me hard to focus on the task on hand. It's just a bit frustrating now, and I'm losing directions.
This week I've got a few work training sessions (basically it's 9 to 5), hopefully everything goes well and that I still have enough energy to study Japanese at night since I haven't been doing much Japanese lately.
Cheers! x
This week I've got a few work training sessions (basically it's 9 to 5),. hopefully everything goes well and that II'll still have enough energy to study Japanese at night, since I haven't been doing much Japanese lately.
But lLately I feel like it's starting to hinder my language studyies.
I'd use the plural here. I don't think I've ever seen or heard "language study" (might be a regional thing though)
I also couldn't even sit through even one episode of an Italian podcast.
I feel like placing "even" as I have above gives more emphasis. Including "also" and "even" makes the sentence sound weaker to me.
I feel like the fact that I was still feeling a bit unwell was also making meit hard for me to focus on the task onat hand.
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I liked most of the corrections in the post before mine, I just wanted to give a different opinion on a couple different things. Well done!
Absent-minded
My attention span has always been short, so it's hard for me to concentrate on one task.
But lLately I feel like it's starting to hinder my language study.
I only did likeabout 10 minutes of Gaelic yesterday before I jumped back to Italian.
"Like" in that usage is only appropriate in speech or very casual writing.
I also couldn't sit through even one episode of an Italian podcast.
I feel like the fact that I was still feeling a bit unwell was also making meit hard for me to focus on the task on hand.
It's just a bit frustrating now, and I'm losing directions.
This week I've got a few work training sessions (basically it's 9 to 5), and hopefully everything goes well and that I still have enough energy to study Japanese at night since I haven't been doing much Japanese lately.
Cheers!
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My attention span has always been short, it's hard for me to concentrate on one task. My attention span has always been short, so it's hard for me to concentrate on one task. |
But lately I feel like it's starting to hinder my language study.
I'd use the plural here. I don't think I've ever seen or heard "language study" (might be a regional thing though) |
I only did like 10 minutes of Gaelic yesterday before I jumped back to Italian. I only did "Like" in that usage is only appropriate in speech or very casual writing. |
I also couldn't sit through even one episode of Italian podcast. I also couldn't sit through even one episode of an Italian podcast. I I feel like placing "even" as I have above gives more emphasis. Including "also" and "even" makes the sentence sound weaker to me. |
I feel like the fact that I was still feeling a bit unwell was also making me hard to focus on the task on hand. I feel like the fact that I was still feeling a bit unwell was also making I feel like the fact that I was still feeling a bit unwell was also making |
It's just a bit frustrating now, and I'm losing directions. It's just a bit frustrating now, and I'm losing direction |
This week I've got a few work training sessions (basically it's 9 to 5), hopefully everything goes well and that I still have enough energy to study Japanese at night since I haven't been doing much Japanese lately. This week I've got a few work training sessions (basically it's 9 to 5), and hopefully everything goes well and This week I've got a few work training sessions (basically it's 9 to 5) |
Cheers! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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