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heatedcanine

Nov. 26, 2024

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About Wild Boar

In order to become healthy, you may think about jogging and running. Some people might think about running a full marathon as well. Me too. Marathon has become quite popular in Japan for the past decade.
In order to run a marathon better, you need to strengthen your legs.
In order to strengthen your legs, trail run excercise is one of the good and reasonable methods.
I went to trail running last Sunday, and my legs and hips are aching now.

The first purpose was to be healthy, trail running has a lot of risk.
Some people would fall down and die. Actually, I heard about a guy lost and found dead in the mountain yesterday.
You may get lost in the mountain trail.
Google map doesn't work because it doesn't indicate trails, only roads for automobiles.
I soleved this problem yesterday, by installing a software such as YAMAP (yama is "mountain" in Japanese and map is a map in English, so YAMAP is a pun) and YamaReco (mountain record). They can indicate trails in the mountains.
You may suffer from SFTS (Severe Fever with Thrombocytopenia Syndrome) when you're bitten by a tick in Japan.
You need to wear longer sleeve shirts and longer pants. That may bring about heat stroak instead during the summer time. Yet, it's autumn and winter, so SFTS can be avoided now.
You may encounter wild pigs or wild boars and hit by them. Actually, I encountered them in Kimpo mountain several years ago.

I should learn about the behavior of wild boars.
Therefore, I made a brief research on the internet:
You may think that wild boars are aggressive and attack people with their horns.
But actually, they are very coward animal.
You may think that they are nocturnally active, but they can be active during daytime.
They are very coward and afraid of humans, so as a result, they are active at night.
When you encounter them, don't shout or make a loud noise.
You should not turn around, but go backwards slowly.
They have a very poor eyesight, so you can hide behind a tree.

Oops, I should be very careful about hornets and poisonous snakes as well.
I may encounter bears too.

I've lost my confidence whether trail running is good for my health or not.
Hahaha


「イノシシについて」

健康になるために、ジョギングやランニングを考える人がいるかもしれません。中には、フルマラソンを走ることを目指す人もいるでしょう。私もその一人です。ここ10年で、マラソンは日本でとても人気が出てきました。

マラソンをより良く走るためには、脚を強くする必要があります。
脚を鍛えるためには、トレイルランニングの練習が効果的で理にかなった方法のひとつです。
私は先週の日曜日にトレイルランニングをしてきましたが、今は脚と腰が痛くてたまりません。

もともとの目的は健康になることでしたが、トレイルランニングには多くのリスクがあります。
転倒して命を落とす人もいます。実際、昨日、山で行方不明になり死亡した方の話を聞きました。
山道では迷子になることもあります。
Googleマップは使えません。山道ではなく、自動車用の道路しか表示されないからです。
この問題は、昨日解決しました。「YAMAP」(「山」と「マップ」を掛け合わせた名前)や「YamaReco」(山の記録)といったアプリをインストールしたからです。それらは山道を表示してくれます。
日本では、マダニに刺されると「重症熱性血小板減少症候群(SFTS)」にかかることもあります。
長袖や長ズボンを着用する必要があります。しかし、夏場はそのせいで熱中症になることもあります。ただし、今は秋や冬なので、SFTSのリスクは回避できます。
また、イノシシに遭遇して体当たりされることもあります。実際、数年前、金峰山でイノシシに遭遇したことがあります。

イノシシの行動について学ぶべきだと思い、インターネットで簡単に調べてみました:
イノシシは攻撃的で角で人を襲うと思われがちですが、実際はとても臆病な動物です。
夜行性と思われるかもしれませんが、昼間でも活動することがあります。
人間を恐れているため、結果的に夜に活動することが多いのです。
遭遇したときには、大声を出したり騒いだりしてはいけません。
背を向けずに、ゆっくり後退するべきです。
視力が非常に悪いので、木の陰に隠れるのも効果的です。

あ、スズメバチや毒蛇にも注意しないといけませんね。
それに、クマに遭遇する可能性もあります。

トレイルランニングが本当に健康に良いのか、自信を失ってしまいそうです。
ハハハ。

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About Wild Boars

In order to become healthyier, you may think about taking up jogging and running.

In English, we often don't think of a person as being "healthy" as binary ("healthy" / "not healthy").

Instead, we use ("healthier").

Of course, for things like food, we describe them as "healthy" or "not healthy".

Some people might even think about running a full marathon as well.

Me too.This was me!

Marathons hasve become quite popular in Japan fover the plast decade.

In order to run a marathon bettermore easily, you need to strengthen/condition your legs.

In order to strengthen your legs, trail run excercisening is one of the good and reasonablemost effective and practical methods.

I went to trail running last Sunday, and my legs and hips are aching now.

The first purpose waEven though the first objective is to become healthyier, trail running has a lot of risks.

Or:
"...., trail running is high risk."

"...., trail running can be dangerous."

Some pPeople wouldcan fall downoff the trail and die.

Actually, I heard about a guyman who became lost and was found dead in the mountain only yesterday.

Using "guy" for someone who died doesn't sound appropriate/respectful


The phrase "only yesterday" emphasises how recently you heard the story.

→ "It was only yesterday that I heard Trump won the election"

You maycan get lost ion the mountain trail.

Google mMaps doesn't work because it doesn't indicate walking trails, only roads for automobivehicles.

I soleved this problem yesterday, by installing a software, such as YAMAP (yama is "mountain" in Japanese and map is a map in English, so YAMAP is a pun) and YamaReco (mountain record)., XXX

The sentence doesn't feel complete. You should finish the sentence by saying where you installed the software.

E.g.
"I solved this problem yesterday by installing software, such as XYZ, onto my phone"

"I solved this problem yesterday by installing software, such as XYZ, onto my Garmin"

They can indicate trails indisplay the mountain trails.

You may suffer from SFTS (Severe Fever with Thrombocytopenia Syndrome) whenif you're bitten by a tick in Japan.

You need to wear longer -sleeve shirts and longer pants.

THowever, that may bring about heat stroak insteadke during the summer time.

Yet, it'sThankfully, during autumn and winter, so months, SFTS can be avoided now.

You may encounter wild pigs or wild boars and hitget hit/struck/attacked by them.

Actually, I encountered them in Kimpo mountain several years ago.

I should learn about the behavior of wild boars.

Therefore, I made adid some brief research on the internet:
You may think that wild boars are aggressive and attack people with their horns.

But actually, they are very cowardly animals.

You may think that they are nocturnally active, but they can be active during daytime.

They are very cowardly and afraid of humans, so, as a result, they are more active at night.

When you encounter them, don't shout or make any loud noises.

You should not turn around, but gowalk backwards slowly.

They have a very poor eyesight, so you can hide behind a tree.

Oops, I should be very careful about hornets and poisonous snakes as well.

I may encounter bears, too.

I've lost my confidence whether trail running is good for my health or not.

Hahaha

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Hahahaha yes, the mountains sound very dangerous.

Once, I was walking a trial and came across a lot of monkeys. They were large and I could hear them moving in the trees up above me. I had always wanted to see monkeys in the wild like this. However, when it actually happened, it was pretty scary.

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heatedcanine

Nov. 27, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and feedback. When I was a kid, a wild monkey took my bread from me by force in the mountain. It was very scarly and I still remember it.

About Wild Boars

In order to become healthy, you may think about jogging and running.

Some people might think about running a full marathon as well.

MeI'm one of those people./I do, too.

Marathons hasve become quite popular in Japan forin the past decade.

In order to run a marathon better, you need to strengthen your legs.

In order to strengthen your legs, tTrail running excercise iss are one of the good andbest and most reasonable methods for that.

Try to avoid using the same phrases in consecutive sentences (eg. strengthen your legs & in order to)

I went to trail running last Sunday, and my legs and hips are aching now.

The first purposeAlthough the main purpose (of this) was to be healthy, trail running has a lot of risks.

Some people would fall down and die.

Actually, I heard about a guy who got lost and was found dead in the mountain yesterday.

That's scary...

Google mMaps doesn't work because it doesn't indicate trails, only roads for automobiles.

I soleved this problem yesterday, by installing a software such ascalled YAMAP (yama is "mountain" in Japanese and map is a map in English, so YAMAP is a pun) and YamaReco (mountain record).

They can indicate where trails are in the mountains.

I think these words work better

You may suffer from SFTS (Severe Fever with Thrombocytopenia Syndrome) when you're bitten by a tick in Japan.

You need to wear longer sleeve shirts and longer pants.

That may bring about heat stroake instead during the summer time.

Yet,But it's autumn and winter now, so SFTS can be avoided now.

You may encounter wild pigs or wild boars and be hit by them.

AI actually, I encountered them in Kimpo mMountain several years ago.

I should learn about the behavior of wild boars.

Therefore, I made adid some brief research on the internet:
You may think that wild boars are aggressive and attack people with their horns.

But actually, they are very cowardly animals.

You may think that they are nocturnally active, but they can be active during the daytime (too).

They are very cowardly and afraid of humans, so as a result, they are active at night.

coward = 名詞
cowardly = 形容詞

When you encounter them, don't shout (or you shouldn't shout) or make a loud noise.

You should not turn around, but go backwards slowly.

They have a very poor eyesight, so you can hide behind a tree.

Oops, I should be very careful about hornets and poisonous snakes as well.

I may encounter bears too.

I've lost my confidence in whether trail running is good for my health or not.

Hahaha

Feedback

Very interesting information! Hopefully you can find a safer way to exercise and prepare for marathons haha

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heatedcanine

Nov. 27, 2024

3

Thank you for your corrections and comment.

About Wild Boar

In order to become healthy, you may think about exercising like jogging and running.

Some people might think about running a full marathon as well.

Me too.

Marathon has become quite popular in Japan for the past decade.

In order to run a marathon betterwell, you need to strengthen your legs.

In order to strengthen your legs, trail run excercise is one of the good and reasonable methods.

I went to trail running last Sunday, and my legs and hips are aching now.

Some people would fall down and die.

Actually, I heard about a guy who got lost and was found dead in the mountain yesterday.

You may get lost in the mountain trail.

Google map doesn't work because it doesn't indicate trails, only roads for automobiles.

I soleved this problem yesterday, by installing atwo software such as: YAMAP (yama is "mountain" in Japanese and map is a map in English, so YAMAP is a pun) and YamaReco (mountain record).

They can indicate the trails in the mountains.

You may suffer from SFTS (Severe Fever with Thrombocytopenia Syndrome) when you're bitten by a tick in Japan.

That may bring aboutcan cause heat stroake instead during the summer time.

Yet, it's autumn and winter, so SFTS can be avoided now.

I should learn about the behavior of wild boars.

Therefore, I made a brief research on the internet:
You may think that wild boars are aggressive and attack people with their horns.

Do boars have horns?

But actually, they are very coward animal.

You may think that they are nocturnally active, but they can be active during daytime.

They are very coward and afraid of humans, so as a result, they are active at night.

When you encounter them, don't shout or make a loud noise.

You should not turn around, but go backwards slowly.

They have a very poor eyesight, so you can hide behind a tree.

Oops, I should be very careful about hornets and poisonous snakes as well.

I may encounter bears too.

Hahaha

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Wow, that sounds very dangerous. Do you go in groups during trail running?

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heatedcanine

Nov. 27, 2024

3

>Do boars have horns?
Yes. I think so.
>Do you go in groups during trail running?
No. I basically excercise all by myself. The official races, however, gather a lot of people.

Thank you for your corrections and comment.

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heatedcanine

Nov. 27, 2024

3

>>Do boars have horns?
>Yes. I think so.
Oops, sorry. They are fangs or tusks, not horns.

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Toluwani

Nov. 27, 2024

9

You are welcome :)

Wow, you are courageous going through all that alone despite the possible dangers.

About Wild Boar

In order to become healthy, you may think about jogging and running.
(or: [...] you might consider jogging and running)

Some people might think about running a full marathon as well.

Me too.
(or: I'm one of those people.)

Marathons hasve become quite popular in Japan for the past decade.
(or: Marathons have been increasing in popularity in Japan for the past decade.)

In order to run a marathon better, you need to strengthen your legs.

In order to strengthen your legs, trail run excercise iss are one of the good and reasonable methodsways (of doing so).

I went to trail running last Sunday, and my legs and hips are aching now.

The first purpose was to beIt was primarily for my healthy, but trail running hainvolves a lot of risk.

Some people would fall down and die.

Actually, I heard about a guy who got lost and was found dead in the mountain yesterday.

You may get lost ion the mountain trail.

Google mMaps doesn't work because it doesn't indicatedisplay trails, only roads for automobiles.

I soleved this problem yesterday, by installing a software such as YAMAP (yama is "mountain" in Japanese and map is a map in English, so YAMAP is a pun) and YamaReco (mountain record).

Wow! Those apps sound so cool. Is Strava not used for trail running?

They can indicatedisplay trails in the mountains.

You may suffer from SFTS (Severe Fever with Thrombocytopenia Syndrome) when you're bitten by a tick in Japan.

You need to wear longer sleeve shirts and longer pants.

That may bring about heat stroake instead during the summer time.

YeBut, it's autumn and winter now, so SFTS can be avoided now.

You may encounter wild pigs or wild boars and hitbe rammed by them.

Actually, I encountered them in Kimpo mountain several years ago.

I should learn about the behavior of wild boars.

Therefore, I made a brief researchSo, I briefly looked them up on the internet:
You may think that wild boars are aggressive and attack people with their horns.

But actually, they are very cowardly animals.

You may think that they are nocturnally active, but they can be active during daytime.

They are very cowardly and afraid of humans, so as a result, they are active at night.

When you encounter them, don't shout or make a loud noise.

You should not turn around, butand instead go backwards slowly.

They have a very poor eyesight, so you can hide behind a tree.

Oops, I should be very careful about hornets and poisonous snakes as well.

"Oops" is a little unusual here. I would personally correct it to just "Oh, [...]".

I may encounter bears too.

I've lost my confidence whether trail running is good for my health or not.

Hahaha

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Great job! Thank you for the information about wild boars. I'll surely remember this if I ever encounter one haha. Trail runs seem so fun, but I'm too afraid of slipping or falling or encountering wildlife. I wish there were man-made trails that were safer to run lol!

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heatedcanine

Nov. 27, 2024

3

Thank you for your corrections and comment!

>I wish there were man-made trails that were safer to run lol!
Exactly!
I played "Wii Sports", a virtual simulation game, before, in which, jogging was included.
If AI simulates the complicated and rough ground surface and slopes artifically, a man-made (or AI-made) artificial trails could be available!

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In order to become healthy, you may think about jogging and running.


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Some people might think about running a full marathon as well.


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Me too.This was me!

Marathon has become quite popular in Japan for the past decade.


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I went to trail running last Sunday, and my legs and hips are aching now.


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You may encounter wild pigs or wild boars and hit by them.


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Wow! Those apps sound so cool. Is Strava not used for trail running?

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