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July 13, 2025

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Hi! I am Zeynep. And i am 15 years old. I want the learning English. For this watch the series. My favorite series Prison Break. It is awesome. It is immersive. And i love Supernatural. My friend said “You should watching the Supernatural.” And i watched. One word, i love it.

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About the Tv Series

Hi!

I am Zeynep.

And iI am 15 years old.

Capital letter for "I"

I want theo learning English.

You are mixing the tenses, "learning" and "to learn" are two different tenses and I am not sure what you meant. This is because you used "the" which is typically used before a noun not a verb.

For this, I watch thea series.

There are many TV series on the Internet, since we do not know what series you are talking about then you should generalise and say you are watching a series. You need to include "I" since you are watching the series not anyone else.

My favourite series is Prison Break.

Spelling and grammar.

It is awesome.

It is immersive.

And iI love Supernatural.

Capital letter for "I".

My friend said “You should watching the Supernatural.” And iI watched.

"Watching" is the present, your friend told you to "watch" since he is not saying to watch the Supernatural right now, he told you to do it in the past. Capital letter for "I"

OnThree word, iI love it.

Logic mistake, you said 3 words. Capital letter for "I"

Feedback

Watching series and movies are very nice way to learn English subtly. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes and some small difficulties with the past and present tenses.

About the Tv Series


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Hi!


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I am Zeynep.


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And i am 15 years old.


And iI am 15 years old.

Capital letter for "I"

I want the learning English.


I want theo learning English.

You are mixing the tenses, "learning" and "to learn" are two different tenses and I am not sure what you meant. This is because you used "the" which is typically used before a noun not a verb.

For this watch the series.


For this, I watch thea series.

There are many TV series on the Internet, since we do not know what series you are talking about then you should generalise and say you are watching a series. You need to include "I" since you are watching the series not anyone else.

My favorite series Prison Break.


My favourite series is Prison Break.

Spelling and grammar.

My friend said “You should watching the Supernatural.” And i watched.


My friend said “You should watching the Supernatural.” And iI watched.

"Watching" is the present, your friend told you to "watch" since he is not saying to watch the Supernatural right now, he told you to do it in the past. Capital letter for "I"

One word, i love it.


OnThree word, iI love it.

Logic mistake, you said 3 words. Capital letter for "I"

It is awesome.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is immersive.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And i love Supernatural.


And iI love Supernatural.

Capital letter for "I".

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