March 17, 2024
About the HeLa cells
So at the beginning of the article, I asked two questions about the image that shows. 1. Who is that woman in the picture? 2. What the background shows?
The article answered the first question that I asked, this women named Henrietta lacks ,and there is a special cells lived in her body. The scientists found that cell and they made many new medical discoveries with it. Now they have made a polio vaccine with HeLa cells. The article didn’t answer the second question: what the background shows. But I found the answer after I searched it. That blue triangle are the HeLa cells. They’re beautiful.
About the HeLa cells
So at the beginning of the article, I asked two questions about the image that is showsn.
1. Who is that woman in the picture?
2.
What the background shows?
The article answered the first question that I asked, this women named Henrietta lacks ,and there is aare special cells that have lived in her body.
The scientists have found that cell and they have made many new medical discoveries with it.
Now they have made a polio vaccine with HeLa cells.
The article didn’t answer the second question: what the background shows.
But I found the answer after I searched it.
That blue triangle are the HeLa cells.
They’re beautiful.
So at the beginning of the article, I asked two questions about the image that shbelows.
1. Who is that woman in the picture?
What does the background shows?
The article answered the first question that I asked, this womenan was named Henrietta lLacks , and there is aare special cells that lived in her body.
The scientists found that cell and they made many new medical discoveries with it.
Now they have made a polio vaccine with HeLa cells.
The article didn’t answer the second question: what the background shows.
But I found the answer after I searched it.
That blue triangle are the HeLa cells.
They’re beautiful.
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There is actually quite an interesting and controversial backstory to them. HeLa cells were Henrietta's cervical cancer cells and her doctors used them without her permission, but we can't deny the many scientific discoveries that we made with them. They are very easy to work with. HeLa cells are what I started out with when I first learned to do lab work in my undergraduate studies.
About the HeLa cells
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1. Who is that woman in the picture?
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Now they have made a polio vaccine with HeLa cells.
The article didn’t answer the second question: what the background shows.
But I found the answer after I searched for it.
That blue triangles are the HeLa cells.
They’re beautiful.
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They’re beautiful.
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Good job.
So at the beginning of the article, I asked two questions about the image that showsn.
1. Who is thate woman in the picture?
Slightly better to use "the" here.
What is (shown) in the background shows?
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Now tThey have made a polio vaccine with HeLa cells.
Saying "now" implies this was just recently done.
The article didn’t answer themy second question:, what the background shows.
But I found the answer (myself) after I searched for it.
Thatose blue triangles are the HeLa cells.
They’re beautiful.
Feedback
Good job
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