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tsukeyyy

Feb. 3, 2024

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About telecommuting

Telecommuting sounds great. You can work from home and using internet to finish your work. You don’t need to get up early everyday. Also you don’t need a car or train that take you to workplace. You can say goodbye to your office clothes cause you will not use them if you work at home. But there are also some concern you need to consider. You might feel lonely because you don’t have workmates in your home. If you have children, you might get distract because of them. If l have choice, I will choose go to workplace. Because I will feel lonely if I stay at home. I can have better communicate with my team.

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You can work from home and using the internet to finish your work.

Also you don’t need a car or train thato take you to your workplace.

You can say goodbye to your office clothes because you will not use them if you work at home.

Buthowever, there are also some concerns that you need to consider.

If you have children, you might get distracted because of them.

Because I will feel lonely if I stay at home.

About telecommuting

Telecommuting sounds great.

You can work from home and usinge the internet to finish your work.

You don’t need to get up early everyday.

Also you don’t need a car or train thato take you to workplace.

You can say goodbye to your office clothes cause you will not use them if you work at home.

But there are also some concerns you need to consider.

You might feel lonely because you don’t have coworkmaters in your home.

If you have children, you might get distracted because of them.

If l havd the choice, I willould choose go to the workplace.

Because I will feel lonely if I stay at home.

I can have better communicateion with my team.

About telecommuting

Telecommuting sounds great.

You can work from home andby using internet to finish your work.

> You can work from home and use the internet to finish your work

would be grammatical, but the "and" doesn't work for strange grammatical reasons I can't explain. The "by" I wrote in my suggestion would more naturally just be a comma, but I wanted to make the grammar more clear.

Most natural in my opinion: You can work from home and just work off the internet.

You don’t need to get up early everyday.

Also you don’t need a car or train that take you to workplace.

You can say goodbye to your office clothes cause you will not useneed them if you work at home.

We typically "wear" clothing in English, not "use" them.

But there are also some concerns you need to consider.

"some" means more than one, thus pleural "concerns."

You might feel lonely because you don’t have workmates in yourat home.

"Your home" instead of "home" is fine, but people tend to have only one "work," "home," "school," etc., in their lives so we tend not to qualify them.

You don't have workmates...
in home: They are not physically in my house.
at home: When I am at home, I do not have access to them.
The nuance here might be a bit subtle for non-native speakers but I hope that makes sense.

If you have children, you might get distract because of them.

More natural: If you have children, they might distract you.
(English has a strong preference for the active voice.)

If l have a choice, I will choose go to workplace.

Because I will feel lonely if I stay at home.

I can have better communicate with my team.

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Overall well written. I made a number of comments, but it's all small stuff.

About telecommuting


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Telecommuting sounds great.


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You can work from home and using internet to finish your work.


You can work from home andby using internet to finish your work.

> You can work from home and use the internet to finish your work would be grammatical, but the "and" doesn't work for strange grammatical reasons I can't explain. The "by" I wrote in my suggestion would more naturally just be a comma, but I wanted to make the grammar more clear. Most natural in my opinion: You can work from home and just work off the internet.

You can work from home and usinge the internet to finish your work.

You can work from home and using the internet to finish your work.

You don’t need to get up early everyday.


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Also you don’t need a car or train that take you to workplace.


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Also you don’t need a car or train thato take you to workplace.

Also you don’t need a car or train thato take you to your workplace.

You can say goodbye to your office clothes cause you will not use them if you work at home.


You can say goodbye to your office clothes cause you will not useneed them if you work at home.

We typically "wear" clothing in English, not "use" them.

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You can say goodbye to your office clothes because you will not use them if you work at home.

But there are also some concern you need to consider.


But there are also some concerns you need to consider.

"some" means more than one, thus pleural "concerns."

But there are also some concerns you need to consider.

Buthowever, there are also some concerns that you need to consider.

If l have choice, I will choose go to workplace.


If l have a choice, I will choose go to workplace.

If l havd the choice, I willould choose go to the workplace.

You might feel lonely because you don’t have workmates in your home.


You might feel lonely because you don’t have workmates in yourat home.

"Your home" instead of "home" is fine, but people tend to have only one "work," "home," "school," etc., in their lives so we tend not to qualify them. You don't have workmates... in home: They are not physically in my house. at home: When I am at home, I do not have access to them. The nuance here might be a bit subtle for non-native speakers but I hope that makes sense.

You might feel lonely because you don’t have coworkmaters in your home.

If you have children, you might get distract because of them.


If you have children, you might get distract because of them.

More natural: If you have children, they might distract you. (English has a strong preference for the active voice.)

If you have children, you might get distracted because of them.

If you have children, you might get distracted because of them.

Because I will feel lonely if I stay at home.


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Because I will feel lonely if I stay at home.

I can have better communicate with my team.


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I can have better communicateion with my team.

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