March 24, 2024
About success in sport
I think there are two ways to be successful in sports. The first one is win the prize. Athletes fight with opponents and then they get the prize. It’s can be successful. And the another one is have great sports spirit. They need to support their teammates and respect their opponents and officials. It’s also can be a way to get success.
About success in sport
I think there are two ways to be successful in sports.
The first one is win the prizes or certificates offered in the competitions.
Athletes fight withcompete with their opponents and then they get the prize.
It's better to use "compete" rater than "fight".
It’s can be successful.
And the another one is to have great sports spirit.
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I think there are two ways to be successful in sports.
The first one is to win the prizes.
This is more natural to say. You mentioned "sports" in general, so we mention "prizes" in general here. If you say "the prize," it's as if you are talking about a certain prize in particular.
Athletes fight withace their opponents and then they (get the prize/win a trophy).
The prizes that athletes win in sports are (for the most part) trophies to symbolize their success. So we generally refer to trophies rather than prizes.
The words "fight with" evokes a literal, aggressive or violent fight, such as with boxing. If you want to be more general here so that it applies to all competitive sports, "face their" is a good replacement.
It’s canThat's one way to be successful.
A clearer sentence for what you mean to convey here.
And the another oneway is to have a great sports spirit.
They/athletes need to support their teammates and respect their opponents and officials.
It’s can also can be a way to getbecome successful.
Just a note, "it's can" is grammatically incorrect; we just say "it can."
We don't generally say "get success," but "have success" or someone "becoming successful" are common.
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I think there are two ways to be successful in sports.
The first one is to win the prize.
Athletes fight withcompete against opponents and then they get the prize.
It’s can be successful.
And the another one is to have a great sports spirit.
They need to support their teammates and respect their opponents and officials.
It’sThat can also can be a way to getbe successful.
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The first one is win the prize. The first one is to win the prize. The first one is to win This is more natural to say. You mentioned "sports" in general, so we mention "prizes" in general here. If you say "the prize," it's as if you are talking about a certain prize in particular. The first one is win the prizes or certificates offered in the competitions. |
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Athletes fight with opponents and then they get the prize. Athletes Athletes f The prizes that athletes win in sports are (for the most part) trophies to symbolize their success. So we generally refer to trophies rather than prizes. The words "fight with" evokes a literal, aggressive or violent fight, such as with boxing. If you want to be more general here so that it applies to all competitive sports, "face their" is a good replacement. Athletes It's better to use "compete" rater than "fight". |
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I think there are two ways to be successful in sports. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And the another one is have great sports spirit. And the another one is to have a great sports spirit. And the another And the another one is to have great sports spirit. |
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They need to support their teammates and respect their opponents and officials. This sentence has been marked as perfect! They/athletes need to support their teammates and respect their opponents and officials. |
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It’s also can be a way to get success.
It Just a note, "it's can" is grammatically incorrect; we just say "it can." We don't generally say "get success," but "have success" or someone "becoming successful" are common. |
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