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Dec. 11, 2020

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Circus act,maybe,it's a kind of dangerous performance. Once you see a circus act, you'll make sense of the mean of "Acting a minute on the stage, working years behind the back." A man was walking on a tightrope, and then rode a one-wheel bicycle, carried two others on his shoulder in the meantime. All of a sudden, the crowd clapped his amazing performance.
The returned to give a repeat performance, Working on a tightrope again, did a hand-stand on the one-wheel bicycle, to our surprised,He lost his balance. All of the crowds gasped due to fright. The man grabbed the tightrope at once, He was still holding on to the bicycle, climbed on again and rode to the other side.


根据"新概念英语3"上面的练习,写的两段文字,希望能有人帮忙改正,谢谢!

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Circus act,maybe,it'Maybe a circus act is a kind of dangerous performance.

Once you see a circus act, you'll make sense ofunderstand the meaning of "Aacting a minute on the stage, working years behind the back."

A man was walking on a tightrope, and then rode a one-wheel bicycle, carried two others on his shoulder in the meantimewhile doing it.

ThHe returned to give a repeat performance,. Working on a tightrope again, did a hand-stand on the one-wheel bicycle and, to our surprised,H, he lost his balance.

All of tThe crowds gasped due toin fright.

The man grabbed the tightrope at once,. He was still holding on to the bicycle, so he climbed on again and rode to the other side.

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zaozao

Dec. 14, 2020

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Thank you for helping me correct the context very much! 😊

About studing the NEW CONCEPTION ENGLISH 3


Circus act,maybe,it's a kind of dangerous performance.Once you see a circus act,you'll make sense of the mean of "Acting a minute in the stage,working years behind the back.


"A man was walking on a tightrope,and then rode a one-wheel bicycle,carried two others on his shoulder in the meantime.All of a sudden,the crowd clapped his amazing performance.


The returned to give a repeat performance,Working on a tightrope again,did a hand-stand on the one-wheel bicycle,to our surprised,He lost his balance.All of the crowds gasped due to fright.The man grabbed the tightrope at once,He was still holding on to the bicycle,climbed on again and rode to the other side.


Circus act,maybe,it's a kind of dangerous performance.Once you see a circus act,you'll make sense of the mean of "Acting a minute on the stage,working years behind the back.


Circus act,maybe,it's a kind of dangerous performance.


Circus act,maybe,it'Maybe a circus act is a kind of dangerous performance.

Once you see a circus act, you'll make sense of the mean of "Acting a minute on the stage, working years behind the back."


Once you see a circus act, you'll make sense ofunderstand the meaning of "Aacting a minute on the stage, working years behind the back."

A man was walking on a tightrope, and then rode a one-wheel bicycle, carried two others on his shoulder in the meantime.


A man was walking on a tightrope, and then rode a one-wheel bicycle, carried two others on his shoulder in the meantimewhile doing it.

All of a sudden, the crowd clapped his amazing performance.


The returned to give a repeat performance, Working on a tightrope again, did a hand-stand on the one-wheel bicycle, to our surprised,He lost his balance.


ThHe returned to give a repeat performance,. Working on a tightrope again, did a hand-stand on the one-wheel bicycle and, to our surprised,H, he lost his balance.

All of the crowds gasped due to fright.


All of tThe crowds gasped due toin fright.

The man grabbed the tightrope at once, He was still holding on to the bicycle, climbed on again and rode to the other side.


The man grabbed the tightrope at once,. He was still holding on to the bicycle, so he climbed on again and rode to the other side.

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