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tsukeyyy

Feb. 24, 2024

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Gee’s Bend is a town in Alabama , but its real name is Boykin. Women in Gee’s Bend have made quilts. It’s a part of American art. More than 100years ago, some of women in Gee’s Bend started todo some sewing cooperative, and it’s became a new business. They called it the Freedom Quilting Bee. They pieced tother quilts with old clothes. The Bee did well for several years. They made enough money to help their living. Many people did it for living their families. And now, in recent years, they were a part of special art show. It’s became a part of American art.

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Gee’s Bend is a town in Alabama , but its real name is Boykin.

Women in Gee’s Bend have madke quilts.

It’s a part of American arttradition.

More than 100 years ago, some of women in Gee’s Bend started todo some sewing cooperatively, and it’s became a new business.

They called it the Freedom Quilting Bee, or "The Bee".

The Bee did well for several years.

They made enough money to help their livingmake a living from it.

And now, in recent years, they were a part of a special art show.

About qOn Quilting

About Quilting is also okay but this is more like a title

Gee’s Bend is a town in Alabama , but its real name is Boykin.

maybe you want "official" name?

Women in Gee’s Bend have made quilts.

this sentence feels kind of strange in isolation; I think you want something like "Gee's Bend is famous for the quilts the women there make."

It’s a part of American art.

I would say "American history" rather than part of art; you could say "a kind of American art form" as well/

More than 100 years ago, some of women in Gee’s Bend started todo somea sewing cooperative, and it’s which then became a new business.

They pieced together quilts with old clothes.

The Bee did well for several years.

I'm not from there but I think "the bee" is a little odd to read so unless that's what they call it locally I'd say "The event" here.

They made enough money to help theirm livinge.

you can't really "help" their living so to speak, do you mean support themselves?

Many people did it for living their families.

To make a living?

And now, in recent years, they were a part of quilts have even been included in a special art show.

It’s became a part of American art history.

By definition it was always art, arguably, but I know what you mean.

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This is an interesting subject, I think I've heard about it but I'd not known much about it until I read the Wiki just now.

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tsukeyyy

Feb. 26, 2024

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thank you!

Gee’s Bend is a town in Alabama , but its real name is Boykin.

Women in Gee’s Bend have madke quilts.

More than 100 years ago, some of the women in Gee’s Bend started todo some sewing cooperative,ly and it’s became a new business.

They called it the Freedom Quilting Bee.,” or the “Bee,” as a shorthand.

They pieced together quilts with old clothesing.

The Bee did well for several years.

They made enough money to helpimprove their living. situations.

Many people did it for livingto provide for their families.

And nowHowever, in recent years, they were a part of a special art show.

It’s becaome a part of American art.

tsukeyyy's avatar
tsukeyyy

Feb. 26, 2024

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thank you!

About quilting


About qOn Quilting

About Quilting is also okay but this is more like a title

Gee’s Bend is a town in Alabama , but its real name is Boykin.


Gee’s Bend is a town in Alabama , but its real name is Boykin.

Gee’s Bend is a town in Alabama , but its real name is Boykin.

maybe you want "official" name?

Gee’s Bend is a town in Alabama , but its real name is Boykin.

Women in Gee’s Bend have made quilts.


Women in Gee’s Bend have madke quilts.

Women in Gee’s Bend have made quilts.

this sentence feels kind of strange in isolation; I think you want something like "Gee's Bend is famous for the quilts the women there make."

Women in Gee’s Bend have madke quilts.

It’s a part of American art.


It’s a part of American art.

I would say "American history" rather than part of art; you could say "a kind of American art form" as well/

It’s a part of American arttradition.

More than 100years ago, some of women in Gee’s Bend started todo some sewing cooperative, and it’s became a new business.


More than 100 years ago, some of the women in Gee’s Bend started todo some sewing cooperative,ly and it’s became a new business.

More than 100 years ago, some of women in Gee’s Bend started todo somea sewing cooperative, and it’s which then became a new business.

More than 100 years ago, some of women in Gee’s Bend started todo some sewing cooperatively, and it’s became a new business.

They called it the Freedom Quilting Bee.


They called it the Freedom Quilting Bee.,” or the “Bee,” as a shorthand.

They called it the Freedom Quilting Bee, or "The Bee".

They pieced tother quilts with old clothes.


They pieced together quilts with old clothesing.

They pieced together quilts with old clothes.

The Bee did well for several years.


The Bee did well for several years.

The Bee did well for several years.

I'm not from there but I think "the bee" is a little odd to read so unless that's what they call it locally I'd say "The event" here.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They made enough money to help their living.


They made enough money to helpimprove their living. situations.

They made enough money to help theirm livinge.

you can't really "help" their living so to speak, do you mean support themselves?

They made enough money to help their livingmake a living from it.

Many people did it for living their families.


Many people did it for livingto provide for their families.

Many people did it for living their families.

To make a living?

And now, in recent years, they were a part of special art show.


And nowHowever, in recent years, they were a part of a special art show.

And now, in recent years, they were a part of quilts have even been included in a special art show.

And now, in recent years, they were a part of a special art show.

It’s became a part of American art.


It’s becaome a part of American art.

It’s became a part of American art history.

By definition it was always art, arguably, but I know what you mean.

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