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Hello everyone in this place ,i am pleasure to meet you here .
I'm from Yemen , i'm here for improving my writing skill. I'm student , i study informatics , i'm in the first year at University Costentaine 2 in Algeria .
Now i'm living in Algeria since month , i stop my study to next year because of several reasons , one of them i came lately to Algeria and my level in english isn't better , i can't take long conversation ,on other hand my french language is poor ,for example i know from it just greetings specially common greetings or simple greetings .
I want to become professional developer in other words, i want to be the greatest developer in the world this from a professional standpoint but i want to master in French and English from skills that i want to master them "writing and the most skills are listening and speaking .
this is all for today ,i thank all of you for reading my writing
About myself'introduce myself'.
Allow me to introduce a little about myself.
Hello everyone in this place ,i am. It’s a pleasure to meet you here .
I'm from Yemen , i. I'm here forto improvinge my writing skill.
I'm a student , iI study informatics , i??. I'm in themy first year at University Costentaine 2 in Algeria .
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I want to become professional developer.
iIn other words, il want to be the greatest developer in the world this from a professional standpoint but i, and I want to master in French and English from skills that i want to master them.
Great effort. It’s sometimes difficult to understand the meaning of your sentences. I had to make a few guesses as to the meanings. Punctuation can help separate the ideas so future feedback can be more accurate.
"writing and the most skills areThe French and English skill I would most like to master are writing, listening, and speaking .
I had to attempt to infer your meaning again.
this is all for today ,i thank all of you for reading my writing
This is all for today. Thank you all for reading my writing.
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Using periods (.) instead of commas will help separate your sentences and improve the clarity of your words. Great job!
About myself'iIntroduceing myself'.
Hello everyone in this place ,i, I am pleasured to meet you here .
"pleased" is the state of feeling "pleasure" (Sort of, pleasure these days tends to have stronger connotations than pleased)
"in this place" and "here" are redundant, you don't need both.
I'm from Yemen , iI'm here forto improvinge my writing skill.
I'm a student , iI study informatics , iI'm in themy first year at University Costentaine 2 in Algeria .
In English, we put spaces after commas, but not before commas.
Now iI'm living in Algeria sinc(for one month , i stop/ since a month ago).¶
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I paused my study tountil next year because of several reasons , one of them i came latelys that I came to Algeria recently and my level in eEnglish isn't any better , i. I can't takhandle long conversation ,ons. On the other hand my french language is poor , for example i know from it justI only know greetings, specifically common greetings or simple greetings .
It's more natural to split this into several sentences rather than one long run on sentence.
I want to become a professional developer.
iIn other words, i want to be the greatest developer in the world t. This is my goal from a professional standpoint but iI also want to become a master in French and English from skills that i want to master them
"writing and the mosimportant skills that are listening and speaking .
I'm not fully sure what you were trying to emphasise with "most"
thisThat is all for today ,i, thanks all of you for reading my writing
About myself'introduce myself'.
Hello everyone in this place ,i, I am pleasured to meet you here .
I'm from Yemen , iI'm here forto improvinge my writing skill.
I'm a student , i. I study informatics , i. I'm in the first year at University Costentaine 2 in Algeria .
Now i'mthat I've been living in Algeria sincefor a month , i, I will stop my study to next year because offor several reasons , o. One of them is, I came lately to Algeria late and my level in eof English isn't better , i. I can't takhave long conversation ,os. On other hand, my french language is poor ,f. For example i know fromall I know its just greetings , especially common greetings or simple greetings .
I want to become a professional developer
iIn other words, iI want to be the greatest developer in the world this f. From a professional standpoint but i, I want to master in French and English from skills that i want to master them.
"writing and the most skills are listening and speaking .
Sorry but I couldn't quite understand this
tThis is all for today ,i, I thank all of you for reading my writing
About myself'introduce myself'.
Hello everyone in this place ,i am pleasure to meet you here .
I'm from Yemen , iI'm here for improving my writing skills.
I'm student , i study informatics , i'm in the first year at University Costentaine 2 in Algeria .
Now i'm living in Algeria since month , i stop my study to next year because of several reasons , one of them i came lately to Algeria and my level in english isn't better , i can't take long conversation ,on other hand my french language is poor ,for example i know from it just greetings specially common greetings or simple greetings .
I want to become professional developer
in other words, i want to be the greatest developer in the world this from a professional standpoint but i want to master in French and English from skills that i want to master them
"writing and the most skills are listening and speaking .
this is all for today ,i thank all of you for reading my writing
About myself' introduce myself'.
Hello everyone in this place ,i, I am pleasured to meet you here .
I'm from Yemen , i, and I'm here for improving my writing skill.
I'm student , iI study informaticson , iI'm in the first year at University Costentaine 2 in Algeria .
I want to become professional developper.
in other words, i want to be the greatest developer in the world this from a professional standpoint but i want to master in French and English from skills that i want to master them
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Hello everyone in this place ,i am pleasure to meet you here . Hello everyone in this place This sentence has been marked as perfect! Hello everyone in this place Hello everyone "pleased" is the state of feeling "pleasure" (Sort of, pleasure these days tends to have stronger connotations than pleased) "in this place" and "here" are redundant, you don't need both. Hello everyone |
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in other words, i want to be the greatest developer in the world this from a professional standpoint but i want to master in French and English from skills that i want to master them in other words, i want to be the greatest developer in the world this from a professional standpoint but i want to master in French and English from skills that i want to master them This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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"writing and the most skills are listening and speaking . This sentence has been marked as perfect! "writing and the most skills are listening and speaking . Sorry but I couldn't quite understand this
I'm not fully sure what you were trying to emphasise with "most"
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I'm student , i study informatics , i'm in the first year at University Costentaine 2 in Algeria . I'm student This sentence has been marked as perfect! I'm a student I'm a student In English, we put spaces after commas, but not before commas. I'm a student |
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Now i'm living in Algeria since month , i stop my study to next year because of several reasons , one of them i came lately to Algeria and my level in english isn't better , i can't take long conversation ,on other hand my french language is poor ,for example i know from it just greetings specially common greetings or simple greetings . This sentence has been marked as perfect! Now Now It's more natural to split this into several sentences rather than one long run on sentence.
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