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haz

Jan. 19, 2020

2
About my plan

I have a plan. So I just started it today.
It's IG account that introduce abont Japan. (For example...cultures,foodies,caffe shops,phote spots and tourist spot.)
But it's getting ready now.Just opened account.

I want lot of people to know about japan's many carme.
I started it that study English for me.

Then I'm recruiting friend(volunteer) who correct to my post.
You read this and If you want to do this.
Please send me message on IG DM.

ID : 8_2ki

Thank you for reading my post.
-Haz


私には計画があって、今日それを始めました。
それは日本について紹介するインスタグラムのアカウントです。
(例えば、文化や食べ物、カフェショップやフォトスポット、そして観光地です。)まだそれは準備中でただ開設をしただけです。

たくさんの人に日本の良さを知って欲しいのと、自分の英語の勉強のために始めました。

私の投稿に修正をしてくれる人を探しています。もしあなたがこれを読んで手伝ってくれるならばインスタのDMに連絡をください。
読んでくださりありがとうございました。
-Haz

Corrections

So I just started it today.

It's IGan Instagram account that introduce abonts people to Japan.

(For example...: cultures, foodies,caffe shop, cafes, photeo spots, and tourist spots.)

But it's gettingIt's ready now.

JI just opened the account.

I want lots of people to know about jJapan's many charmes.

I started it thatso I could study English for me.

Then I'm recruiting friend(s or volunteer)s who can correct to my posts.

YouIf you are reading this and If you want to do this.,

Pplease send me message on IG DMDM me on Instagram.

haz's avatar
haz

Jan. 20, 2020

2

Thank you

About my plan

I have a plan.

So I just startedI started working on it today.

It's IGan Instagram account that introduce abonts people to Japan.

(For example...: cultures, foodies, caffe shops, photeo spots and tourist spots.)

just some minor punctuation things mostly and some vocabulary things. Plural cultures talk about different cultures from different countries, if you are talking about Japanese culture you would use singular 'culture'. "foodies" are a type of people that are crazy about food, so talking about Japanese food I'd again use the singular 'food'.

But it's gettingIt's ready now.

The "but" implies that there is a contradiction somewhere. But here everything is going to plan so I think this reads more natural.

JI just opened the account.

I want a lot of people to know about jJapan's many charmes.

I started it thatfor me to study English for me.

ThenAnd I'm recruiting friend(volunteer) who will correct to my posts.

You read this and If you want to do this.

Please send me message on IG DMa DM to my Instagram.

ID : 8_2ki

Thank you for reading my post.

-Haz

Feedback

I think this is a great plan! I'm sorry, but I won't be able to help you with this, unfortunately. I hope you'll be able to find someone else to help you with this though!

haz's avatar
haz

Jan. 20, 2020

2

Thank you. No problem.

About my plan


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So I just started it today.


So I just startedI started working on it today.

So I just started it today.

It's IG account that introduce abont Japan.


It's IGan Instagram account that introduce abonts people to Japan.

It's IGan Instagram account that introduce abonts people to Japan.

(For example...cultures,foodies,caffe shops,phote spots and tourist spot.)


(For example...: cultures, foodies, caffe shops, photeo spots and tourist spots.)

just some minor punctuation things mostly and some vocabulary things. Plural cultures talk about different cultures from different countries, if you are talking about Japanese culture you would use singular 'culture'. "foodies" are a type of people that are crazy about food, so talking about Japanese food I'd again use the singular 'food'.

(For example...: cultures, foodies,caffe shop, cafes, photeo spots, and tourist spots.)

But it's getting ready now.


But it's gettingIt's ready now.

The "but" implies that there is a contradiction somewhere. But here everything is going to plan so I think this reads more natural.

But it's gettingIt's ready now.

Just opened account.


JI just opened the account.

JI just opened the account.

I want lot of people to know about japan's many carme.


I want a lot of people to know about jJapan's many charmes.

I want lots of people to know about jJapan's many charmes.

I started it that study English for me.


I started it thatfor me to study English for me.

I started it thatso I could study English for me.

Then I'm recruiting friend(volunteer) who correct to my post.


ThenAnd I'm recruiting friend(volunteer) who will correct to my posts.

Then I'm recruiting friend(s or volunteer)s who can correct to my posts.

You read this and If you want to do this.


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YouIf you are reading this and If you want to do this.,

Please send me message on IG DM.


Please send me message on IG DMa DM to my Instagram.

Pplease send me message on IG DMDM me on Instagram.

ID : 8_2ki


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Thank you for reading my post.


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-Haz


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