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About My National Day Holiday
Two weeks ago, I planned to write an entry daily during my holiday in Quanzhou.
However, I was too busy and tired to do that.
Quanzhou is such a wonderful city that I had to spend more time exploring it every day. We even got up earlier than our workday and went back to the hotel very late.
I'll try to share some pictures and videos with you in the coming week.
两周前，我计划在泉州度假期间每天写一篇日志。
可惜实在太忙太累了，根本无暇去做那件事。
泉州太美妙了，以至于我每天都不得不花更多的时间去探索。我们比工作日更早起床，还很晚才回到酒店。
接下来的一周我会试着与你分享一些图片和视频。
About My National Day Holiday
Two weeks ago, I planned to write an entry daily during my holiday in Quanzhou.
However, I was too busy and tired to do that.
Quanzhou is such a wonderful city that I had to spend more time exploring it every day.
We even got up earlier than ourwe do on work days and went back to the hotel very late.
I'll try to share some pictures and videos with you in the coming week.
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Well done! I looked up images of Quanzhou and it looks beautiful!
About My National Day Holiday
Two weeks ago, I planned to write an entry daily during my holiday in Quanzhou.
However, I was too busy and tired to do that.
Quanzhou is such a wonderful city that I had to spend more time exploring it every day than expect.
“More” is a relative comparison word and needs something else to compare to. “More than planned”, “more than I wanted” etc.
We even got up earlier than our workdaynormal and wengot back to the hotel very late.
Original wasn’t wrong but this sounds much more natural to me
I'll try to share some pictures and videos with you in the coming week.
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Sounds like a great holiday! Nicely written too 👍
About My National Day Holiday
Two weeks ago, I planned to write an entry daily (or: every day) during my holiday in Quanzhou.
“Daily” feels unnatural to me, but it’s probably idiomatic to some native English speakers.
However, I was too busy and tired to do that.
Quanzhou is such a wonderful city that I (just) had to spend more time exploring it every day.
Adding “just” changes the tone, clarifying that you wanted to spend this time (you weren’t “forced” to do so).
Suggestion:
Quanzhou is such a wonderful city that I couldn’t help but continue exploring it day after day.
We (even) got up (even) earlier than ourwe would have on a work day and {went back | got back | returned} to the hotel very late.
I'll try to share some pictures and videos with you in the coming week.
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I’m glad you had a good time. Looking forward to seeing the pictures & videos. :-)
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Two weeks ago, I planned to write an entry daily during my holiday in Quanzhou. Two weeks ago, I planned to write an entry daily (or: every day) during my holiday in Quanzhou. “Daily” feels unnatural to me, but it’s probably idiomatic to some native English speakers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, I was too busy and tired to do that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Quanzhou is such a wonderful city that I had to spend more time exploring it every day. Quanzhou is such a wonderful city that I (just) had to spend more time exploring it every day. Adding “just” changes the tone, clarifying that you wanted to spend this time (you weren’t “forced” to do so). Suggestion: Quanzhou is such a wonderful city that I couldn’t help but continue exploring it day after day. Quanzhou is such a wonderful city that I had to spend more time exploring it every day than expect. “More” is a relative comparison word and needs something else to compare to. “More than planned”, “more than I wanted” etc. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We even got up earlier than our workday and went back to the hotel very late. We (even) got up (even) earlier than We even got up earlier than Original wasn’t wrong but this sounds much more natural to me We even got up earlier than |
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