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About my hobbies and exercises
Hi!
I have so many hobbies and exercises. For example sport, reading books, study my major and wedding. About wedding, I don't have my girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old. Than my major is cyber security. I think about my major that it's the best work can I do, because I like computer, network, to save my own information and etc. About sport, my favorite sport is taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics. Finally, I like reading books about philosophy and new technologies.
OK, what is your favorite hobby?
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Menda juda ko'p hobbi va qiladigan ishlarim bor. Misol uchun sport, kitob o'qish, yo'nalishimni o'rganishim va uylanish. Utlanish haqida, Menda hozircha qiz do'stim yo'q, shunga qaramay men 20 yosshga to'lganman. Mening soham kiber xavfsizlik. Soham haqida o'ylaymanki bu eng zo'r soha qaysiki men qila olaman, sababi men yoqtiram compyuter, tarmoq, malumotlarimni saqlashni va boshqalar. Sport haqida, mening yoqtirgan sportlarim bu taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess va calisthenics. Va nihoyat, men falsafa va yangi texnologiyalar haqidagi kitoblarni o'qishni yoqtiraman.
Yaxshi, Sizning yoqtirgan hobbiyingiz?
About my hobbies and exercises
Hi!
I have so many hobbies and exercises.
For example, sports, reading books, studying my major and weddings.
You need to use the plural here for nouns and the -ing form for verbs
About weddings, I don't have mya girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old.
Than mMy major is cyber security.
I think about my major that it'is the best work can I do, because I like computers, networks, to save my own information and, etc.
About sports, my favorite sport is taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics.
Finally, I like reading books about philosophy and new technologies.
OK, what is your favorite hobby?
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Very good. I can understand what you are saying. Just remember when you are speaking generally you need to use the plural (sportS, weddingS).
I have so many hobbies and activities (or physical exercises.)
"Exercise" means more so one specific task or a specific part of training. Exercise can mean an exercise in a workbook in school OR it can also mean exercise as in physical activity, BUT you cannot use plural for this purpose.
For example, sport, reading books, studying my major and wedding_______.
I think you used the wrong word here. Wedding is not a hobby.
About wedding, I don't have my girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old.
Maybe use dating as a hobby or "searching for a girlfriend", because wedding is a one time ceremony, not a hobby.
Than mMy major is cyber security.
Than is for comparing and "then" is for talking about time. Use furthermore, but using no connectors is natural too.
I think about my major that it'scan lead me to the best work can I dofor me, because I like computers, networks, to savesaving my own information and, etc.
A bit of a messy start for the sentence. At the end, you have to use "etc." without "and" OR you can use "and more" or "and so on".
About sportRegarding sport (or maybe "physical activity"), my favorite sport iss are taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics.
"About" isn't the best word here.
FinalLastly, I like reading books about philosophy and new technologies.
Finally is fine too, but lastly is better.
OKNow (or Alright then), what is your favorite hobby?
Fine as it was, but a bit more natural and smooth this way.
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Good and completely understandable. A couple of unnatural words here and there, but otherwise great!
About mMy hHobbies and eExercises
Title capitalization rules.
A more natural title: My Hobbies and Exercise
Hi!
I have so many hobbies and exercises that I do.
We wouldn't really say we "have" exercises, it wants the verb "do"
For example: sports, reading books, studying for my major and (thinking about / planning) my wedding.
Since you are listing off things, it's good to use a colon :
You need a verb for the "wedding" part; I gave two options
About my wedding, I don't have mya girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old.
(Thanen) my major is cyber security.
I would remove "then" entirely here as it's not needed
The spelling "than" is for comparing things. A bowling ball is bigger than a golf ball.
I think about my major that it'sis for the best work can I do, because I like computers, networks, to savesaving my own information and, etc.
No need for "and" before "etc."
About sports, my favorite sport is ts are Taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics.
You are listing multiple sports, so "my favorite sports are"
Taekwondo is typically capitalized
Finally, I like reading books about philosophy and new technologies.
OK, what is your favorite hobby?
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Great job.
My current favorite hobbies are baking and running - a great combination :D
Please be careful about rushing into marriage. It can take a long time to meet the right person. Good luck!
For example sport, reading books, study my major and wedding.
Wedding is not a hobby
I think abouthat my major that it'is the best work i can I do, because I like computer, network, to save my own information and etc.
This form of sentense is better
OK, what is your favorite hobby?
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Hi,
In fact my only hobby is going for a walk , dating with friends and something like that.
But most of the time i am busy studing .
And no time for doing those things.
I think yoi should find a partner for yourself if u wanna marry at the age of20
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I have so many hobbies and exercises. I have so many hobbies and exercises that I do. We wouldn't really say we "have" exercises, it wants the verb "do" I have so many hobbies and activities (or physical exercise "Exercise" means more so one specific task or a specific part of training. Exercise can mean an exercise in a workbook in school OR it can also mean exercise as in physical activity, BUT you cannot use plural for this purpose. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Than my major is cyber security. (Th I would remove "then" entirely here as it's not needed The spelling "than" is for comparing things. A bowling ball is bigger than a golf ball.
Than is for comparing and "then" is for talking about time. Use furthermore, but using no connectors is natural too.
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For example sport, reading books, study my major and wedding. For example: sports, reading books, studying for my major and (thinking about / planning) my wedding. Since you are listing off things, it's good to use a colon : You need a verb for the "wedding" part; I gave two options For example sport, reading books, study my major and wedding. Wedding is not a hobby For example, sport, reading books, studying my major and I think you used the wrong word here. Wedding is not a hobby. For example, sports, reading books, studying my major and weddings. You need to use the plural here for nouns and the -ing form for verbs |
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About wedding, I don't have my girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old. About my wedding, I don't have About wedding, I don't have my girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old. Maybe use dating as a hobby or "searching for a girlfriend", because wedding is a one time ceremony, not a hobby. About weddings, I don't have |
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I think about my major that it's the best work can I do, because I like computer, network, to save my own information and etc. I think This form of sentense is better I think No need for "and" before "etc." I think A bit of a messy start for the sentence. At the end, you have to use "etc." without "and" OR you can use "and more" or "and so on". I think |
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About sport, my favorite sport is taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics. About sports, my favorite sport You are listing multiple sports, so "my favorite sports are" Taekwondo is typically capitalized
"About" isn't the best word here. About sports, my favorite sport is taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics. |
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