July 10, 2025
About my friends
Today after school, I was consulted not to be able to make a friends. He wanted to make a friends in his class, but there are no people to along with him. Therefore, he talked with his friends in 1-1class(he was in 1-1 class years 1 old.)And today, they don't get along.And I knew that my junior high school friend is lonely from his information. I want to help them, but my class is difference so it is difficult.
今日の放課後、私は友達からクラスで友達を作れないことを相談された。彼はクラス内の友達を作りたいと思っているが、彼と仲良くできる人がいないそうだ。そのため、クラス内にいる元のクラスの友達と話していたが、今日、彼らは仲違いをした。そして彼からの情報から私の中学の友達が孤独であることも知った。私は彼らを助けたいと思っているが別のクラスであるため助けることが難しい。
About mMy fFriends
Today aAfter school, I was consulted not to be able to today, my friend told me he couldn't make a friends. in his class.
I think this is what you wanted to say.
He wanteds to make a friends in his class, but there areis no people toone that he gets along with him.
More natural.
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or..... but today they fought. (or argued).
"Therefore" is ok but "As a result" "Hence" "Thus" "For that reason" .... sound more natural.
)And today, they don't get along.And I knewI also learned from him that my junior high school friend iss are lonely from his information.
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I want to help them, but my class is difference so itit is difficult to help because we are isn difficult.erent classes.
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I wrote this so it's more natural US English. I tried to use the Japanese provided. Hopefully I didn't change the meaning.
Hopefully everyone can reconcile soon! ʕ •ᴥ•ʔゝ☆
About mMy fFriends
Title capitalization rules
Today after school, I was consultadvised not to be able to make a friends with someone.
"Consulted" is a word we would use in a professional sense, where the professional is the consultant. For example, "I consulted with my lawyer and he advised me not to comment."
"To make friends" is the act of becoming friends with someone.
HeThere was a boy who wanted to make a friends in his class, but there arewas no people toone who got along with him.
We need to introduce who "he" is => There was a boy...
The second part of the sentence needs to keep past tense
Therefore,So he talked with his friends in 1-1 class (he whas been in 1-1 class years 1 oldfor one year).
I don't know what 1-1 class is so I'm not able to suggest an alternative.
)And today,Now they don't get along.And I knew Also, I heard that my junior high school friend is lonely from his information.
Try to avoid beginning sentences with "and."
You mention "from his information," but who does "his" represent here, and what information? I suggested an alternative that fits naturally.
I want to help them, but my class is differencehim/her, but I'm not in his/her class(es), so it is difficult.
Referring to your friend in the singular => him or her
You could say you are not in their class (only one class is in question) or classes as plural
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Good job
July 10, 2025
Thank you so much.It is easy to understand your sentences
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Today after school, I was consulted not to be able to make a friends. Today after school, I was "Consulted" is a word we would use in a professional sense, where the professional is the consultant. For example, "I consulted with my lawyer and he advised me not to comment." "To make friends" is the act of becoming friends with someone.
I think this is what you wanted to say. |
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He wanted to make a friends in his class, but there are no people to along with him.
We need to introduce who "he" is => There was a boy... The second part of the sentence needs to keep past tense He want More natural. |
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Therefore, he talked with his friends in 1-1class(he was in 1-1 class years 1 old.
I don't know what 1-1 class is so I'm not able to suggest an alternative.
or..... but today they fought. (or argued). "Therefore" is ok but "As a result" "Hence" "Thus" "For that reason" .... sound more natural. |
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)And today, they don't get along.And I knew that my junior high school friend is lonely from his information.
Try to avoid beginning sentences with "and." You mention "from his information," but who does "his" represent here, and what information? I suggested an alternative that fits naturally.
even better (though the Japanese isn't written quite like this) : He also told me that my junior high school friends are lonely. |
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I want to help them, but my class is difference so it is difficult. I want to help Referring to your friend in the singular => him or her You could say you are not in their class (only one class is in question) or classes as plural I want to help them, but |
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