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About my day
How's your day been? Today I made my breakfast in the morning, I had some eggs and dumplings. In the afternoon, I went to dance class. I felt exhausted after the class, as I hadn't danced for quite a long time. Later on, I had dinner with my sister at the restaurant near our home. It's my first time trying this restaurant, the food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot.
About mMy dDay
How' has your day been?
Today, I made my breakfast in the morning,. I had some eggs and dumplings.
In the afternoon, I went to dance class.
I felt exhausted after the class, as I hadn't danced for quite a long time.
Later on, I had dinner with my sister at the restaurant near our home.
It's my first time trying this restaurant, t. The food was unexpectedly goodamazing, and I ate a lot.
About my day
How's your day been?
“How’s” is fine in American English. See here:
https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english/hows
Today I made my breakfast in the morning,. I had some eggs and dumplings.
In the afternoon, I went to dance class.
I felt exhausted after the class, as I hadn't danced for quite a long time.
Later on, I had dinner with my sister at thea restaurant near our home.
“A” is more natural since you haven’t mentioned the restaurant before.
It' was my first time trying this restaurant, t. The food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot.
About mMy dDay
How's your day been?
Today I made my breakfast in the morning, I had some eggs and dumplings.
In the afternoon, I went to dance class.
I felt exhausted after the class, as I hadven't danced for quite a long time.
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Fantastic writing
About my day
How' has your day been?
In casual English, you might hear someone say "How's your day been?" But it's technically incorrect, because the real phrase is "how has your day been" - whereas "how's" translates to "how is" - which is not grammatically correct.
Today I made my breakfast in the morning,. I had some eggs and dumplings.
You could say "made my breakfast" but it's more natural to say "made breakfast"
In the afternoon, I went to dance class.
I felt exhausted after the class, as because I hadn't danced for quite a long time.
More natural.
Later on, I had dinner with my sister at the restaurant near our home.
It' was my first time trying this restaurant, t. The food was unexpectedly good, and I ate a lot.
"It's" = "it is"
Since this is past tense, you'll want to say "it was"
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Very good! Just a few small corrections.
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It's my first time trying this restaurant, the food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot. It "It's" = "it is" Since this is past tense, you'll want to say "it was" It It's my first time trying this restaurant |
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How's your day been? How In casual English, you might hear someone say "How's your day been?" But it's technically incorrect, because the real phrase is "how has your day been" - whereas "how's" translates to "how is" - which is not grammatically correct. This sentence has been marked as perfect! How's your day been? “How’s” is fine in American English. See here: https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english/hows How |
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