Oct. 21, 2022
About me and my family.
I have a long and curly hair, mi skin tone is between white and yellow.
I love to read, people could say that I'm smart but I rather think that I just use good learning techniques, I love to create something no matter what kind of art it is.
About my mom, well, she is a good person, she is so funny and always make me laugh, she wears the clothes that I made for her. She is dark-skinned.
She loves poetry and she is learning ukulele.
I do not have a father.
My sister is tall, she is truly beautiful, she likes handcrafts and she is learning Japanese too.
She has straight hair, her voice is so sweet and soft.
She is kind.
My brother loves Japanese food, he likes videogames like Leage of Legends and minecraft.
He is tall.
He has a close personality, he is shy like me but he is truly kind too.
Thank you for reading :)
I'm trying to do this with a formal form.
I have a long and curly hair, miy skin tone is between white and yellow.
I love to read, p. People could say that I'm smart, but I'd rather think that I just use good learning techniques,. I love to create something; no matter what kind of art it is.
Your last sentence isn't ungrammatical, but it doesn't sound natural. I'd suggest "I love to indulge in the arts; no matter the kind!"
About my mom, well, sheMy mom is a good person, s. She is so funny and always make me laugh, s. She wears the clothes that I madke for her.
She is dark-skinned.
I do not have a father.
My sister is tall, she is truly beautiful, sheand likes to make handcrafts and she is. She is also learning Japanese too.
I'm not sure if you mean that she likes to make handcrafts, or that she like to look at handcrafts.
She has straight hair, her voice is so sweet and soft and a gentle, sweet voice.
She is kind.
My brother loves Japanese food, he likes and video games likas well. Some examples are League of Legends and mMinecraft.
He is tall.
He has a close personality, he is and is fairly shy, like me but. However, he is truly kind too.is a kind person
Thank you for reading :)
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Really, your English word usage is great! You have a couple spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, but besides that, you're all good! 頑張ります！
Oct. 21, 2022
Thank you so much! You're awesome.
I'll do my best to improve.
Have nice day!
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About me and my family. |
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I have a long and curly hair, mi skin tone is between white and yellow. I have |
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I love to read, people could say that I'm smart but I rather think that I just use good learning techniques, I love to create something no matter what kind of art it is. I love to read Your last sentence isn't ungrammatical, but it doesn't sound natural. I'd suggest "I love to indulge in the arts; no matter the kind!" |
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About my mom, well, she is a good person, she is so funny and always make me laugh, she wears the clothes that I made for her.
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She is dark-skinned. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She loves poetry and she is learning ukulele. |
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I do not have a father. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My sister is tall, she is truly beautiful, she likes handcrafts and she is learning Japanese too. My sister is tall, I'm not sure if you mean that she likes to make handcrafts, or that she like to look at handcrafts. |
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She has straight hair, her voice is so sweet and soft. She has straight hair |
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She is kind. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My brother loves Japanese food, he likes videogames like Leage of Legends and minecraft. My brother loves Japanese food |
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He is tall. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He has a close personality, he is shy like me but he is truly kind too. He has a close personality |
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Thank you for reading :) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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