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Ducky

Aug. 18, 2022

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I would like to get a good and correct level of writing, with a natural sound. I do illustrations that I put on sale in art websites, such as Zazzle or Redbubble.

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About mMe

I would like to get at a good and correct level of writing, with ahile sounding natural sound.

I do illustrations that I put onfor sale ion art websites, such as Zazzle or Redbubble.

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Good job and good luck!

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Ducky

Aug. 19, 2022

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Thanks a lot.

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I would like to getreach a good and correct level of writing, with a natural sound.

I would like to get to a good and, correct level of writing, with a that sounds natural sound.

- A level is something you "arrive at," so it would be best to use the phrase "get TO a/an (adjective) level."
- When describing a noun with multiple adjectives, you can separate them with a comma rather than "and" for better flow. Ex: "A big, brown dog..." vs "A big and brown dog..." The second is not incorrect, but the first flows better.
- Replacing "with a natural sound" with "that sounds natural" sounds more... natural! :)

I do illustrations that I put on sale isell on art websites, such as Zazzle or Redbubble.

To "put on sale" usually means you are REDUCING the price of an item you sell. Ex: "The books were put on sale because no one wanted them."

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Good job! Your writing will become more natural with practice. It's great that you get to make money from your art. :)

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Ducky

Aug. 19, 2022

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Thanks for your feedback and comment. :)

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nyakoyaki

Aug. 19, 2022

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No problem. 👍

About me

I would like to get a good and correct level of writing, with a natural sound. that sounds natural and has no errors.

I do illustrations that I put on sale isell on art websites, such as Zazzle or Redbubble.

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Good writing! :)

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Ducky

Aug. 19, 2022

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Thanks.

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About mMe

I would like to get a good and correct level of writing, with a natural sound.


I would like to get a good and correct level of writing, with a natural sound. that sounds natural and has no errors.

I would like to get to a good and, correct level of writing, with a that sounds natural sound.

- A level is something you "arrive at," so it would be best to use the phrase "get TO a/an (adjective) level." - When describing a noun with multiple adjectives, you can separate them with a comma rather than "and" for better flow. Ex: "A big, brown dog..." vs "A big and brown dog..." The second is not incorrect, but the first flows better. - Replacing "with a natural sound" with "that sounds natural" sounds more... natural! :)

I would like to getreach a good and correct level of writing, with a natural sound.

I would like to get at a good and correct level of writing, with ahile sounding natural sound.

I do illustrations that I put on sale in art websites, such as Zazzle or Redbubble.


I do illustrations that I put on sale isell on art websites, such as Zazzle or Redbubble.

I do illustrations that I put on sale isell on art websites, such as Zazzle or Redbubble.

To "put on sale" usually means you are REDUCING the price of an item you sell. Ex: "The books were put on sale because no one wanted them."

I do illustrations that I put onfor sale ion art websites, such as Zazzle or Redbubble.

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