Sept. 27, 2021
About me
Hi! I'm Tomás Siewert Lominchar. Such a combination of surnames is due to that I’m half Spanish and half German. Indeed, I was born in Madrid, but for the state of Germany, it was in Berlin. Fortunately, I have both nationalities!
I spent the last years studying languages and music, but this year, at my 23’s I finally start the chemistry course at UNED, but I’m looking to change the course to biochemistry or biology at UCM.
I love sports. Furthermore, I used to play rugby and later on, I also practised water polo, but I ended up doing powerlifting. It’s an exciting discipline in which you confront yourself. The one who could beat you is yourself, and the way to pick up is to improve your way of being.
I’m passionate about language acquisition, music and of course sciences. Indeed, my goals are to catch up to C1 in German and English, enter into a music conservatory and keep studying sciences.
My dreamed job would be something related to conservationism and environmental protection. Put in practice scientific and political solutions to the problems that developing countries and their wildlife confront.
About me
Hi!
I'm Tomás Siewert Lominchar.
Such a combination of surnames is due to the fact that I’m half Spanish and half German.
"due to the fact that" is a common phrase, you hear "due to that" less.
Indeed, I was born in Madrid, but for the state of Germany, it was in Berlin.
Not quite sure what you mean here. Maybe explain how you got the dual citizenship in Germany even though you were born in Madrid?
Fortunately, I have both nationalities!
I spent the last few years studying languages and music, but this year, at my 23’s I23 I will finally start thea chemistry course at UNED, but I’m looking to change the course to biochemistry or biology at UCM.
I love sports.
Furthermore, I used to play rugby and later on, I also practised water polo, but I ended up doing powerlifting.
No errors here, just letting you know the British spell this "practised" and Americans spell this "practiced". Just a fun fact.
It’s an exciting discipline in which you confront yourself.
The only one who couldan beat you is yourself, and the way to pick upget better is to improve your way of being.
I’m passionate about language acquisition, music and of course sciences.
Indeed, my goals are to catch up to C1 in German and English, enter into a music conservatory and keep studying sciences.
My dreamed job would be something related to conservationism and environmental protection.
"dream job" is the common phrase, not "dreamed job"
PI want to put in practice scientific and political solutions to the problems that developing countries and their wildlife confront.
Earlier you spelled "practised" with an s and here with a c. You might want to decide whether you want to consistently use British or American English, there are some subtle spelling differences across the dialects.
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Great job overall!
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I'm not entirely sure what you mean here. It sounds like you're saying that you were born in two different places, which is a contradiction.
Fortunately, I have both nationalities!
I spent the last years studying languages and music, but this year, at myage 23’s, I finally start the chemistry courseprogram at UNED, but I’m looking to change the course to biochemistry or biology at UCM.
I love sports.
Furthermore, I used to play rugby and later on, I also practised water polo, but I ended up doing powerlifting.
It’s an exciting discipline in which you confront yourself.
The one who couldan beat you is yourself, and the way to pick uplife more weight is to improve your way of beliving.
I’m passionate about language acquisition, music and of course the sciences.
Indeed, my goals are to catreach up to C1 in German and English, enter into a music conservatory and keepto continue studying sciences.
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Such a combination of surnames is due to that I’m half Spanish and half German.
Such a combination of surnames is due to the fact that I’m half Spanish and half German. "due to the fact that" is a common phrase, you hear "due to that" less. |
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Put in practice scientific and political solutions to the problems that developing countries and their wildlife confront.
Earlier you spelled "practised" with an s and here with a c. You might want to decide whether you want to consistently use British or American English, there are some subtle spelling differences across the dialects. |
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