Oct. 2, 2020
About me.
About me.
I am Tomás and I am 21 years old.
In the last few years, I spent my time studying languages, trying to learn guitar and turning over a new leaf and began healthily exercising my body, mentally and physically. Therefore I start practising powerlifting.
That decision improved also the way I approached languages, music and other aspects of life. Traying to learn systematically, approaching myself to the academy and reading tons of books about music, languages, sports and so on.
My favourite fiction book in English: The Foundation Trilogy by Isaac Asimov.
My favourite TV show: Lost.
My favourite band: The Rosenberg trio.
One of the top movies that I think anyone must-see: Napoleon Dynamite
About me.Me
Titles do not need periods, and each main word in the title should be capitalized.
About me.Me:
In the last few years, I spent my time studying languages, trying to learn guitar, and turning over a new leaf and began healthilyin terms of exercising my body, mentally and physically.
Therefore, I started practising powerlifting.
That decision improved also the way I approached languages, music, and other aspects of life.
TrayingI try to learn systematically, approaching myself to the academy and reading tons of books about music, languages, sports, and so on.
I removed the “approaching myself to the academy” bit because I don’t understand what you are trying to say with that.
My favourite fiction book in English: is “The Foundation Trilogy” by Isaac Asimov.
My favourite TV show: is “Lost”.
My favourite band: is The Rosenberg tTrio.
One of the top movies that I think aneveryone must- see: is “Napoleon Dynamite”.
Oct. 3, 2020
My favourite fiction book in English: is “The Foundation Trilogy” by Isaac Asimov.
“os”—> “is”
About me.Me
In English, you always capitalize all the nouns, verbs, and adjetives in a title, as well as the first word of the title.
About me.Me
I am Tomás and I am 21 years old.
This is correct, but it's more common to say "I'm".
I + am = I'm
In the last few years, I have spent my time studying languages, trying to learn guitar, and turning over a new leaf and have begaun to healthily exercisinge my body, both mentally and physically.
Therefore, I started practiscing powerlifting.
That decision also improved also the way I approached languages, music, and other aspects of life.
Traying to learn systematically, approaching myself to thelooking more into academyia and reading tons of books about music, languages, sports and so on.
I think I understand what you were trying to say, but I'm not 100% sure.
My favourite fiction book in English is: The Foundation Trilogy by Isaac Asimov.
I'm not sure if you were trying to spell favorite the US or the British way so I can't tell if it was correct or not. In British English, there are "u"s that aren't present in American English. An example is "color" which is "colour" in British English.
One of the top movies that I think anyone must- see: Napoleon Dynamite
Must-see is used for describing something. Otherwise you just say "must see".
Example: A must-see movie.
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Oct. 3, 2020
My favourite fiction book in English is: The Foundation Trilogy by Isaac Asimov.
“os”—> “is”
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One of the top movies that I think anyone must-see: Napoleon Dynamite One of the top movies that I think anyone must Must-see is used for describing something. Otherwise you just say "must see". Example: A must-see movie. One of the top movies that I think |
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About me. About In English, you always capitalize all the nouns, verbs, and adjetives in a title, as well as the first word of the title. About Titles do not need periods, and each main word in the title should be capitalized. |
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I am Tomás and I am 21 years old. I am Tomás and I am 21 years old. This is correct, but it's more common to say "I'm". I + am = I'm |
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In the last few years, I spent my time studying languages, trying to learn guitar and turning over a new leaf and began healthily exercising my body, mentally and physically. In the last few years, I have spent my time studying languages, trying to learn guitar, and turning over a new leaf and have beg In the last few years, I spent my time studying languages, trying to learn guitar, and turning over a new leaf |
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Therefore I start practising powerlifting. Therefore, I started practi Therefore, I started practising powerlifting. |
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That decision improved also the way I approached languages, music and other aspects of life. That decision also improved That decision improved |
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Traying to learn systematically, approaching myself to the academy and reading tons of books about music, languages, sports and so on. Tr I think I understand what you were trying to say, but I'm not 100% sure.
I removed the “approaching myself to the academy” bit because I don’t understand what you are trying to say with that. |
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My favourite fiction book in English: The Foundation Trilogy by Isaac Asimov. My favourite fiction book in English My favourite fiction book in English is: The Foundation Trilogy by Isaac Asimov. I'm not sure if you were trying to spell favorite the US or the British way so I can't tell if it was correct or not. In British English, there are "u"s that aren't present in American English. An example is "color" which is "colour" in British English. |
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My favourite TV show: Lost. My favourite TV show |
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My favourite band: The Rosenberg trio. My favourite band |
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