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HungGiaNH

July 9, 2025

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Good afternoon everyone,today I wanna talk about myself.As you know,my name is Hung,and my full name is Nguyen Hoang Gia Hung.In addition,according to tradition,a son wiil take his father's family name.That's also in tradition in Vietnam.And Vietnam is my homeland. My hometown is Da Nang city,one of the most livable cities. Da Nang beach is very beautiful,and its long streches of white sand that creates a stunning scenery.I live in Ho Chi Minh city.Espescially,it's very bustling and crowed with traffic jam.It's called the city that never sleeps.I'm 20 years old and second-year student at university.My major is technical.I'm not sure, but I feel I'm very friendly and kind.In free time,I usually go out with friends or play football.There are four people in my family.We usually do many things together,and we always support each other.In the future,I wanna go to Germany to improve my studies.Thanks for reading my post!

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Good afternoon everyone, today I wannat to talk about myself. As you know, my name is Hung, and my full name is Nguyen Hoang Gia Hung. In addition, according to tradition, a son wiill take his father's family name. That's also inthe tradition in Vietnam. And Vietnam is my homeland.

Avoid slang like wanna/gonna in formal or semi-formal writing. Using a space after punctuation makes it easier to read. :)

My hometown is Da Nang city, one of the most livable cities.

Da Nang beach is very beautiful,and its long streches of white sand that creates a stunning scenery. I live in Ho Chi Minh city.E It's espescially,it's very bustling and crowed with traffic jam.s. It's called the city that never sleeps. I'm 20 years old and a second-year student at university. My major is technical. I'm not sure, but I feel I'm very friendly and kind. In my free time, I usually go out with friends or play football. There are four people in my family. We usually do many things together, and we always support each other. In the future, I wannat to go to Germany to improve my studies. Thanks for reading my post!

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My hometown is Da Nang city,one of the most livable cities.


My hometown is Da Nang city, one of the most livable cities.

Da Nang beach is very beautiful,and its long streches of white sand that creates a stunning scenery.I live in Ho Chi Minh city.Espescially,it's very bustling and crowed with traffic jam.It's called the city that never sleeps.I'm 20 years old and second-year student at university.My major is technical.I'm not sure, but I feel I'm very friendly and kind.In free time,I usually go out with friends or play football.There are four people in my family.We usually do many things together,and we always support each other.In the future,I wanna go to Germany to improve my studies.Thanks for reading my post!


Da Nang beach is very beautiful,and its long streches of white sand that creates a stunning scenery. I live in Ho Chi Minh city.E It's espescially,it's very bustling and crowed with traffic jam.s. It's called the city that never sleeps. I'm 20 years old and a second-year student at university. My major is technical. I'm not sure, but I feel I'm very friendly and kind. In my free time, I usually go out with friends or play football. There are four people in my family. We usually do many things together, and we always support each other. In the future, I wannat to go to Germany to improve my studies. Thanks for reading my post!

Good afternoon everyone,today I wanna talk about myself.As you know,my name is Hung,and my full name is Nguyen Hoang Gia Hung.In addition,according to tradition,a son wiil take his father's family name.That's also in tradition in Vietnam.And Vietnam is my homeland.


Good afternoon everyone, today I wannat to talk about myself. As you know, my name is Hung, and my full name is Nguyen Hoang Gia Hung. In addition, according to tradition, a son wiill take his father's family name. That's also inthe tradition in Vietnam. And Vietnam is my homeland.

Avoid slang like wanna/gonna in formal or semi-formal writing. Using a space after punctuation makes it easier to read. :)

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