Dec. 9, 2024
About me
Hi! My name is Daniyal and I am 13 years old and i study in 8th grade. I live in Kazakhstan, in city Almaty. Probably are you listening about that country. I love my city, but i don’t see future in this country. I would like to move in New York.
The world seems cooler there. I want live there, study there. Because of this I learn English every day. I am believing that my dream will become a reality.
Привет! Меня зовут Даниял, мне 13 лет, и я учусь в 8 классе. Я живу в Казахстане, в городе Алматы. Возможно, вы слышали об этой стране. Я люблю свой город, но не вижу будущего в этой стране. Я бы хотела переехать в Нью-Йорк.
Там мир кажется более прохладным. Я хочу там жить и учиться. Именно поэтому я каждый день изучаю английский. Я верю, что моя мечта станет реальностью.
Hi!
My name is Daniyal and I am 13 years old and i studyI am in 8th grade.
I live in Kazakhstan, in the city of Almaty.
Probably are you listeningYou have probably heard about that country.
I love my city, but i don’t see a future in this country.
I would like to move into New York.
The world seems cooler there.
I want to live there,and study there.
Because of this, I learnstudy English every day.
I am believinge that my dream will become a reality.
Feedback
Good job and good luck on your studies!
My name is Daniyal and I am 13 years old and i studyI'm in 8th grade.
I live in Kazakhstan, in the city Almaty.
Probably are you listeningYou have probably heard about that country.
I love my city, but i don’t see a future in this country.
I would like to move into New York.
I think you mean New York City. New York is huge and each part is uniquely different!
The world seems cooler there.
I want to live there, and study there.
Because of this, I am learning English every day.
I am believinge that my dream will become a reality.
Feedback
Good writing and good luck!
My name is Daniyal and I am 13 years old and iI study in the 8th grade.
I live in Kazakhstan, in the city of Almaty.
I live in Almaty, a city in Kazakhstan
Probably are you listening aboutYou've probably heard of that country.
I love my city, but iI don’t see a future in this country.
I would like to move into New York.
I want to live there, to study there.
Because of this I learnstudy English every day.
I am believinge that my dream will become a reality.
Feedback
Great text! Good luck with your English studies!
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