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tonya

Oct. 9, 2024

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About John Clapton

John Clapton is a bus driver. He is 34. He lives in a little flat in the center of the town. He has a wife and a little son. His wife's name is Paula, she is 27. She is housewife. She likes to cook delicious dishes for her husband, go shopping, read interesting books, play the piano, listening classics and play with her son.
Jhon works every day. Usually he gets up at 5 a.m., have a breakfast and go for a work. It's not far from home and it takes 10 minutes. He always start to work at 5:45 a.m. and finish at 06:00 p.m. Sometime after work he goes to drink beer with his friends and discuss latest news. John has lots of friends, they often spend free time together.
On weekends John spend the time with his family. 0n Saturday they usually do housework and in the afternoon they visit their parents. In warm seasons, in spring and summer they take a walk before go to bad. They usually don't go to bad before midnight.


John Clapton is a bus driver. He is 34. He lives in a little flat in the center of town. He has a wife and a little son. His wife's name is Paula, she is 27. She is the housewife. She likes to cook delicious dishes for her husband, go shopping, read interesting books, play the piano, listen to classical music and play with her son.
John works every day. Usually he gets up at 5 a.m., has breakfast and goes to work. It's not far from home and it takes 10 minutes. He always start to work at 5:45 a.m. and finishes at 06:00 p.m. Sometimes after work he goes to drink beer with his friends and discuss the latest news. John has lots of friends, they often spend free time together.
On weekends John spends time with his family. 0n Saturday they usually do housework and in the afternoon they visit their parents. In warm seasons, in spring and summer they take a walk before going to bed. They usually don't go to bed before midnight.

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About John Clapton

John Clapton is a bus driver.

He is 34.

He has a wife and a little son.

I wanted to correct your sentence to “Young Son”, but that isn’t very common either.

She is a housewife.

She likes to cook delicious dishes for her husband, go shopping, read interesting books, play the piano, listening to classics and play with her son.

“Play with her son” is a little vague

Jhohn works every day.

Usually he gets up at 5 a.m., have aeats breakfast and go for aes to work.

It'His workplace is not far from home and it takes 10 minutes to get there.

“It’s” would’ve worked if you mentioned the place he’s going to in the previous sentence.

He always starts to work at 5:45 a.m. and finishes at 06:00 p.m.

Poor John…

On weekends John spend thes time with his family.

They usually don't go to bad before midnight.

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tonya

Oct. 12, 2024

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Adam, thank you.

Jhohn works every day.

Misspelling of 'John'

Usually he gets up at 5 a.m., have a breakfast and go for ato work.

On weekends John spend thes time with his family.

In warm seasons, in spring and summer they take a walk before going to baed.

They usually don't go to baed before midnight.

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tonya

Oct. 10, 2024

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Thank you so much.

He lives in a little flat in the center of the town.

"center of the town" is not necessarily incorrect, but "center of town" is much more common and natural-sounding

She is a housewife.

She likes to cook delicious dishes for her husband, go shopping, read interesting books, play the piano, listening to classicsal music, and play with her son.

Jhohn works every day.

Usually he gets up at 5 a.m., have as breakfast and go for aes to work.

He always start to work at 5:45 a.m. and finishes at 06:00 p.m.

Sometimes after work he goes to drink beer with his friends and discuss the latest news.

On weekends John spend thes time with his family.

In warm seasons, in spring and summer they take a walk before they go to baed.

They usually don't go to baed before midnight.

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tonya

Oct. 10, 2024

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Thank you very much.

About John Clapton


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John Clapton is a bus driver.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He is 34.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He lives in a little flat in the center of the town.


He lives in a little flat in the center of the town.

"center of the town" is not necessarily incorrect, but "center of town" is much more common and natural-sounding

He has a wife and a little son.


He has a wife and a little son.

I wanted to correct your sentence to “Young Son”, but that isn’t very common either.

His wife's name is Paula, she is 27.


She is housewife.


She is a housewife.

She is a housewife.

She likes to cook delicious dishes for her husband, go shopping, read interesting books, play the piano, listening classics and play with her son.


She likes to cook delicious dishes for her husband, go shopping, read interesting books, play the piano, listening to classicsal music, and play with her son.

She likes to cook delicious dishes for her husband, go shopping, read interesting books, play the piano, listening to classics and play with her son.

“Play with her son” is a little vague

Jhon works every day.


Jhohn works every day.

Jhohn works every day.

Misspelling of 'John'

Jhohn works every day.

He always start to work at 5:45 a.m. and finish at 06:00 p.m.


He always start to work at 5:45 a.m. and finishes at 06:00 p.m.

He always starts to work at 5:45 a.m. and finishes at 06:00 p.m.

Poor John…

Sometime after work he goes to drink beer with his friends and discuss latest news.


Sometimes after work he goes to drink beer with his friends and discuss the latest news.

John has lots of friends, they often spend free time together.


On weekends John spend the time with his family.


On weekends John spend thes time with his family.

On weekends John spend thes time with his family.

On weekends John spend thes time with his family.

0n Saturday they usually do housework and in the afternoon they visit their parents.


In warm seasons, in spring and summer they take a walk before go to bad.


In warm seasons, in spring and summer they take a walk before they go to baed.

In warm seasons, in spring and summer they take a walk before going to baed.

They usually don't go to bad before midnight.


They usually don't go to baed before midnight.

They usually don't go to baed before midnight.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Usually he gets up at 5 a.m., have a breakfast and go for a work.


Usually he gets up at 5 a.m., have as breakfast and go for aes to work.

Usually he gets up at 5 a.m., have a breakfast and go for ato work.

Usually he gets up at 5 a.m., have aeats breakfast and go for aes to work.

It's not far from home and it takes 10 minutes.


It'His workplace is not far from home and it takes 10 minutes to get there.

“It’s” would’ve worked if you mentioned the place he’s going to in the previous sentence.

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