March 9, 2024
Recently,scientists found that there is at least one in five teenagers has hearing loss. And hearing loss among young people has been grow up since 1990. Why? The doctors guess that might because the popularity of electronic devices among teenagers, such as MP3 phones, computers…… What might doctors say about this? They might give some advice about hearing care to teenagers. Like: use fewer headphones, do more outside sports, or wearing hearing aid. These things might be helpful.
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Recently, scientists found that there is at least one in five teenagers who has hearing loss.
And hearing loss among young people has been grow up since 1990.
Why?
The doctors guess that might because the popularity of electronic devices among teenagers, such as MP3 phones, computers…… etc... What might doctors say about this?
They might give some advice about hearing care to teenagers.
Like: use fewer headphones, do, don't use headphones frequently, play more outside sports, or wearing hearing aids.
These things might be helpful.
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Overall good paragraph, and correct information.
Recently, scientists found that there is at least one in five teenagers has hearing loss.
And hHearing loss among young people has been grow upon the rise since 1990.
Why?
The doctors sugguesst that it might be because of the popularity of electronic devices among teenagers, such as MP3 players, phones, computers……, etc. What might doctors say about this?
They might give some advice about hearing care to teenageroffer advice to teenagers on how to prevent hearing loss.
Like: use fewerFor example, use headphones less, do more outsidedoor sports, or wearing a hearing aid.
About hearing loss
Recently,scientists found that there is at least one in five teenagers has hearing loss.
And hearing loss among young people has been grow upon the rise since 1990.
Why?
The doctors guess that it might because due to the popularity of electronic devices among teenagers, such as MP3 phones, computers…… What might, and so on. What could the doctors say about this?
They mightcould give some advice about hearing care to teenagers.
Like: use fewerFor example, use headphones less, do more outside sports, or wearing a hearing aid.
Colons have to be used at the end of a complete statement to introduce a list.
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And hearing loss among young people (has been grow uping / has grown) since 1990.
You could also use the idiom "had been on the rise".
The doctors sugguesst that might be because of the popularity of electronic devices among teenagers, such as MP3 players, phones, computers……, etc. What might doctors say to teens about this?
guess → suggest: This sounds more formal.
Like: use fewer headphonesFor instance, use headphones less often, do more outside sports, or wearing a hearing aid.
Using "Like:" is incorrect word order in English.
You can write, "For (instance/example), activities like using headphones less often, doing more outside sports or wearing a hearing aid." too.
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I should probably lower the volume of my headphones, huh.
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Use "etc" at the end of a list to clearly suggest there are more reasons you haven't listed.
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"Hearing care" isn't a phrase that you would normally here. Just use "hearing loss" here instead. It would sound more natural.
Like: use fewer headphones less, do more outsidedoor sports, or wearing a hearing aid.
It would be more natural to say "use headphones less" and "outdoor sports."
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Like: use fewer headphones, do more outside sports, or wearing hearing aid. Like: use It would be more natural to say "use headphones less" and "outdoor sports."
Using "Like:" is incorrect word order in English. You can write, "For (instance/example), activities like using headphones less often, doing more outside sports or wearing a hearing aid." too.
Colons have to be used at the end of a complete statement to introduce a list.
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