Feb. 3, 2024
about give antibiotics to the healthy animals
Some farmers give antibiotics to healthy animal because they want the animals grow faster. Some people think it’s wrong to feed animals with antibiotics. Some people don’t think like that. Everyone have different opinions, but if you ask me, I will say that is totally wrong. Drugs cause problems. Animals will get drug resistant if they be feed with antibiotics. And when people eat the meat from these animals, they will get same sickness as animals. I wish the lawmakers can make a new law to stop that .
about giveing antibiotics to the healthy animals
Some farmers give antibiotics to healthy animals because they want the animalsm to grow faster.
"them" avoids repetition
Some people think it’s wrong to feed animals with antibiotics.
"to feed" is correct, but you could also use "to give" ex: Some people think it's wrong to give animals antibiotics.
Some people don’t think like that.
Everyone haves different opinions, but if you ask me, I will say that iit's totally wrong.
"if you ask me" is an expression meaning "in my opinion", and goes before a statement.
another ex: If you ask me, people shouldn't eat cake on Mondays.
Drugs cause problems.
Animals will get drug resistant if they be feed withare given/are fed antibiotics.
two suggestions
And when people eat the meat from these animals, they will get the same sickness as the animals.
I wish the lawmakers canwould make a new law to stop that is.
"can" means "able to", lawmakers are able to make a law, but do not, so "would" is better here.
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Some people think it’s wrong to feed animals with antibiotics.
The "with" here makes it sound like "antibiotics" are a tool used to help feed animals rather than the food itself.
Everyone have different opinions, but if you ask me, I will say that is totally wrong.
"I say..." is an idiomatic expression. Otherwise, I think the "will" would be correct.
Animals will get drug resistant if they bare feed with antibiotics.
And when people eat the meat from these animals, they will get same sicknesses as those animals.
The clarification of "those" is needed here to specify it's the same animals as referred to by "these" animals.. Otherwise the statement would imply you could get a disease found only in pigeons by eating pork.
I wish the lawmakers canwould make a new law to stop that .
They "can," but they "won't," so you wish they "would."
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And when people eat the meat from these animals, they will get same sickness as animals. And when people eat the meat from these animals, they will get same sicknesses as those animals. The clarification of "those" is needed here to specify it's the same animals as referred to by "these" animals.. Otherwise the statement would imply you could get a disease found only in pigeons by eating pork. And when people eat the meat from these animals, they will get the same sickness as the animals. |
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I wish the lawmakers can make a new law to stop that . I wish the lawmakers They "can," but they "won't," so you wish they "would." I wish the lawmakers "can" means "able to", lawmakers are able to make a law, but do not, so "would" is better here. |
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Some farmers give antibiotics to healthy animal because they want the animals grow faster. Some farmers give antibiotics to healthy animals because they want the "them" avoids repetition |
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Some people think it’s wrong to feed animals with antibiotics. Some people think it’s wrong to feed animals The "with" here makes it sound like "antibiotics" are a tool used to help feed animals rather than the food itself. Some people think it’s wrong to feed animals "to feed" is correct, but you could also use "to give" ex: Some people think it's wrong to give animals antibiotics. |
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Some people don’t think like that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Everyone have different opinions, but if you ask me, I will say that is totally wrong. Everyone have different opinions, but if you ask me, I "I say..." is an idiomatic expression. Otherwise, I think the "will" would be correct. Everyone ha "if you ask me" is an expression meaning "in my opinion", and goes before a statement. another ex: If you ask me, people shouldn't eat cake on Mondays. |
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Drugs cause problems. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Animals will get drug resistant if they be feed with antibiotics. Animals will get drug resistant if they Animals will get drug resistant if they two suggestions |
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